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    posted a message on Feared Dreams [500+ Views] [Chapter 3] (Ended)
    I made a signature (Yes its bad), If anyone wants to try to make a better one feel free :)
    Just post it up and I'll put it in the main post and credit you. Chapter three has been uploaded.
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    posted a message on Friend or Foe? (Long Story, More Coming Soon)
    Great story 10/10
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    posted a message on You will love this
    Stories like this are good. You can really relate to the characters...
    Mmmm
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    posted a message on I made a few sprites in my MS Paint, plus a retexture of Redstone.
    I really like your new redstone, its alot nicer and lighter :)
    Great job!
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    posted a message on Feared Dreams [500+ Views] [Chapter 3] (Ended)
    Quote from weatherdog

    It's a good story, could do with a bit more commas, though. sometimes it felt as If I was reading this and running out of breath, even though I wasn't reading it aloud. For length, I would say make is=t longer than chapter 1, but shorter than the prologue, about the length of Chapter 2.

    Thanks for the feedback!
    I'll try to get around to editting it :D
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    posted a message on ***You horrible monster! Chapter 3, Section 1 added!***
    Quote from weatherdog

    Thanks for the feedback, minty! This story, well, more of a raging speech, went through quite a bit of editing from me and the suggestions of my clan-mates. I noticed that imagining you are the person talking is probably the best thing you can do while writing, it really gets you into the mood.
    Even as I read it now, I notice minor things to tweak, mostly things like writing "or" instead of "of". Strange how I know English better than most of my American classmates. I haven't gotten the interest for writing until a few years back, but it was probably one of the best things I ever did, I can always imagine so many different and vivid things, but rarely get them down on (digital) paper.
    And about the paragraphs, I always followed proper paragraph format as if it was a religious thing. I don't know why, but it makes me feel all happy inside when I write something that looks professional.

    More feedback is appreciated!

    If you ever write a long story be sure to PM me xD!
    I also fully relate to what you said about being the person you write about. When I wrote my story I realised just how much it helps when you imagine being the person.

    ~Minty
    P.S I'm a pretty pathetic writer, but I love to read from people that are great writers like you :)
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    posted a message on ***You horrible monster! Chapter 3, Section 1 added!***
    OMG AMAZING. I love it when i can just sit down and read through a nice story. Your paragraphs were brilliant as was your spelling and grammer. Even if there were a few errors I didn't see them because I was so entertained. You connected the words and paragraphs as though you just flowed your work from you mind onto the paper, pure and free. The need to read it twice to decipher the true meaning is set out perfectly, it is not too confusing nor too simple. This is a real ten out of ten. You my friend have a great gift.

    Rating: 10
    Word Flow: 10
    Vocabulary: 10
    Entertainment: 10
    Length: 8.5
    Excellence: 10

    ~Minty
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    posted a message on Minecraft: The Story of Us.
    Great story, i need to agree with weatherdog though with the paragraphs. The story was really entertaining amd enjoyable. You did a great job! Through out the story i found a few things like
    and . But they were minor problems. Keep it up your a great writer!
    +1
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    posted a message on Feared Dreams [500+ Views] [Chapter 3] (Ended)
    Quote from Mixinghoney

    awesome story!

    Thankyou heaps. When people comment I appreciate it so much. Haven't done much of Chapter 3. It seems impossible to get ideas now, but i'll try to keep going.
    Thanks so much for posting.

    ~Minty
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    posted a message on Feared Dreams [500+ Views] [Chapter 3] (Ended)
    In the middle of chapter 3. I'm open to all ideas :D!
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    posted a message on MineCraft Of The Dead
    I continue to be amazed by your stories Toshiro. Great Job.
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    posted a message on Ryo
    So awesome, and dont stress, all of your stories epic!
    Its because of your great stories that I uplaoded my one, It wont ever be as good as yours but its thanks to you that I actually uploaded it.
    Your a great authour, keep it up.
    +1'ed,
    Favourited,
    and Read.

    ~Minty
    :D
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    posted a message on imRecovery Art Shop *I DO IT ALL!*
    Looks good, keep it up :D
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    posted a message on Just some plain ol' fan art
    Nice, Simple and i like the oil pastel / chalk look :D
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    posted a message on My first Minceraft fan art
    Haha Excellent, Great Job
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