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    posted a message on GazerCraft:Close-knit, Mature Community - Towns - Active Players - Small
    Basics
    In game name: mallachie

    Age: Seventeen.

    Timezone: EST (GMT-4)

    Preferred gender pronoun: I'm male.

    About You
    Describe your experience with Minecraft servers: A whole lotta survival (mostly) vanilla servers, and a bunch of roleplaying servers, though it has been a while since I've been around the Minecraft scene. I don't remember exactly when I started, but I've been around this community for a while. Well, not this specific one, but hopefully you get my meaning.

    Have you ever been banned? This is not necessarily a deal-breaker, but please explain what happened: I have never been banned.

    Would you be interested in participating in our Community Projects (villages, towns, cities)?: If I was needed, though I'd likely build my own structure(s) nomad/independent style.

    There are a lot of servers out there. What makes you want to join this one?: Randomly selected a server from the pile, no particular reason, really.

    Reading Check!
    When is PvP allowed?: When both parties verbally agree to fight, so that there is no sad feels when someone is killed and loses their items.

    What is z2liion's title?: Empress/Owner.

    Finish the sentence: "Act your age, not your shoe size." Words to live by.

    Anything Else? (Optional.)

    Is there anything you'd like to ask us or you'd like to share? Is there anything important for the staff to know?: Nope.
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    posted a message on THE WAYWARD ONES [PLAYER-DRIVEN-STORY] [EXTENSIVE LORE] [CUSTOM PLUGINS]
    Oh my butts, you guys are coming back... I have to rejoin you.
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    posted a message on Wild West: Desperados.
    Don't know if this has been mentioned, but you could re-texture items that you know wouldn't be used (Maybe swords, ferns, etc) to being guns and give them firearm qualities using something like the RPG Items plugin, which also allows for custom crafting recipes and is really easy to install and use (I just forgot the name of it). It saves on the need to code a mod for custom guns and such.
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    posted a message on Dropcraft 2 - Brand new! 1.6.1 / Survival Server!
    So like... Was I banned for an actual reason or what? Cuuuuuuuuuuuuuz I don't think "i love u ­<3" is an appropriate reason...
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    posted a message on The World of Azazarh
    I'd also put some of the information into spoilers, so that its easier for players to go through and find things.
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    posted a message on THE ANERIAN CHRONICLES [RP][Airships][Classes][Player-Driven-Story][Extensive Lore]
    Quote from willifolts

    -Snip-


    1. Either say so in OOC ((Like this)) or, if you have time, make up some RP excuse.
    2. Yes, last time I checked.
    3. http://www.mediafire.com/download/3q17qkmjl6hfj71/Unzip+this+and+take+out+the+folder.zip
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    posted a message on ☢Fallout | Echoes of War - A Post Apocalyptic Roleplay Server☢
    Heya Dual. Good to see you getting a new server up and running again. Looks like I'll have to apply for this sometime in the near future...
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    posted a message on THE ANERIAN CHRONICLES [RP][Airships][Classes][Player-Driven-Story][Extensive Lore]
    VoxFoxHD, I'm reviewing you app now.
    Ozey15, I'm going to have to ask you to make that font a bit bigger and add an IGN to that app before I look at it.


    Deffered

    VoxFoxHD

    A couple of things, I'll start with the OOC. I'd mainly like you to expand on your OOC answers, maybe provide an example for the powergaming and metagaming. Just adding more detail is all. The "Who can use magic" question should have something saying WHERE they must research how to use magic. Now on to IC. Since you are going for a ranger, we ask that you try to keep your fighting mostly to bows. Being proficient in both archery and hand to hand/sword fighting can come off as a little OP. Your skin seemed a bit too modern to me, somehow. When I saw it, it reminded me of the Metal Gear series. I'd like to see a more medieval/semi-steampunky skin. On to the bio. I really, really need you to try and hit the four hundred word mark. If that's too high, aim for around three-fifty. I'd also like to see a re-write of your bio as it is mostly made up of run-on sentences that make it a chore to read. Make more sentences! I just need length and fewer run-on sentences. Talk about his time growing up and training, maybe at one time he had a falling out with his grandfather. Anyways. Moving on. Your weaknesses were kinda... Meh. I'd like to see a physical weakness in there, maybe a little more in the mental weaknesses department. In regards to your strengths we don't really like having someone being amazing with a bow AND sword. Please pick one or the other. Your ICRs didn't really have much in the way of actions and I'd like to have seen names for who was actually speaking. Also, having one sentence long ICRs just don't fly here. Fix up those issues and you're golden! Good luck!

    ~Mallachie
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    posted a message on THE ANERIAN CHRONICLES [RP][Airships][Classes][Player-Driven-Story][Extensive Lore]
    Deffered:

    bobcheese12
    Only thirteen, eh? That is completely unacceptable. We don't want people that young on our server. Now go away before I taunt you a second time!

    In all seriousness, though, you had a few legitimate things wrong with your app. In your OOC, you actually missed a question (When and how did our current government come to be?) and your bio was way too short. I'd also like to see you add another part to the "When can you cause a death of another character", "When can you speak OOC" (Hint: Put places where this can occur), and "What is powergaming" (Give me some examples, and powergaming can also be something else ^_^). If you're having trouble hitting the four hundred word mark, I'll left three fifty slide. If you're having trouble thinking of what to write, write about things that might have happened in his time living with his grandfather, and definitely write about what he was doing with his time between when his grandfather died and the current date, especially the things he tried to invent. You also state that if he is given any sort of materials, "something will blow up". Why not write about that! Another thing I just noticed is that your strengths and weaknesses kinda contradict eachother. In your strengths, you say that Jackson became solitary after his grandfather died, but then in the weaknesses section you state that he becomes more attached to friends and family. Fix this up and you're platinum (That's right. Platinum.) Good luck!
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    posted a message on THE ANERIAN CHRONICLES [RP][Airships][Classes][Player-Driven-Story][Extensive Lore]
    Deffered:


    Jackskellington13


    While you had interesting ideas going in your ICRs, your grammar and spelling were very off. You also forgot to even tell me your IGN. I'd also like to see a vast improvement on your ICRs/OOCs/Strengths/weaknesses. In regards to OOCs, you really should expand a lot and not copy paste our answers. If you are stuck, look to a previously accepted player's app for inspiration. Good luck!

    Kdog71


    This app seemed very, very rushed. I'd recommend going back and taking your time with it. I'd definitely like to see all of your OOC answers boosted up. A lot. Like... Seriously. No one word answers here. Add more detail to all of them. Your IC section was a kind of a mess. The story was unique, but riddled with poor grammar and spelling. It just didn't flow at all. I'll need you to fix the entire thing up. You motivation/strengths/weaknesses were all kinda... Weak or uninspired. Your ICRs were also filled with grammatical errors. Just... Tighten up the app, grammar and spelling wise. Also, we use gold coins, not dollars. Fix up all of your app (You honestly may as well rewrite it) and you'll be good.

    ~ Mallachie




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    posted a message on THE ANERIAN CHRONICLES [RP][Airships][Classes][Player-Driven-Story][Extensive Lore]
    Sorry for the delay...

    Accepted:

    Kenyan_Kid
    Thanks for making those changes. Welcome to the server!

    If anyone has been already looked at by Wheats, he'll be the one to handle your app. Expect it to be looked at sometime in the next twenty-four hours or so. If you haven't been looked/defered yet, please PM me here with your IGN so I can sift through the mountain of apps.

    ~Mallachie
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    posted a message on THE ANERIAN CHRONICLES [RP][Airships][Classes][Player-Driven-Story][Extensive Lore]
    Quote from MasterCyria

    I'm not quite sure what I did there, but my ign is MasterCyria, not MasterCecil. I corrected it on the application. I look forward to seeing you in-world! :)


    Ah, alright. I'll fix the issue right now.

    Edit:

    Accepted:


    dgallant
    Thanks for fixing up what I asked, welcome back to the land of the living.

    Quote from Nuker_the_Narwal

    -Sniparoo-


    You're gonna want to fix up the formatting of that app, just sayin'.

    ~Mallachie
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    posted a message on THE ANERIAN CHRONICLES [RP][Airships][Classes][Player-Driven-Story][Extensive Lore]
    ERMAHGERD! WHERTLERSTERNG!

    Accepted:

    MasterCecil
    Quite an interesting response you had for the "When can one cause the death of another?" I also enjoyed your ICRs. Welcome aboard, lad.

    Deferred:

    Kenyan_Kid
    So, so close. You just messed up one OOC question (When did the government form? Hint: You're off by two years. Not saying which direction.)) And your physical weakness was kinda generic/obvious. Of course one man can't fight off three opponents and would have a lot of trouble with two. I'd like to see that changed so that I can sleep easier. Also, it seems kinda powergamey. Fix those and you're golden! Good luck!


    dgallant
    A lot of weird grammar going on in your bio; it just didn't flow well with all of the random commas/periods. Your weakness of being unable to use an arm effectively doesn't seem to fit in with the timeline from your bio (She was around ten at the time, but you say she was 21 in the weaknesses section). You also need to fix that link, I can't see what your skin looks like. Fix that up and you're good to go! Good luck!

    ~Mallachie
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    posted a message on THE ANERIAN CHRONICLES [RP][Airships][Classes][Player-Driven-Story][Extensive Lore]
    Quote from Kriegger

    Ohai Kenyan!


    Also I've yet to be whitelisted. Not to bother the moderators but if that could be done, that'd be sweet. Thank you!


    Would you kindly post your IGN and I'll whitelist you ASAP. And bother the moderators all you want, we don't mind. Its kinda our jobby job.

    To all you new applicants, you shall be reviewed tonight when I gets home from the schools.
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    posted a message on THE ANERIAN CHRONICLES [RP][Airships][Classes][Player-Driven-Story][Extensive Lore]
    Quote from noobiss

    -Snip-


    We kindly ask that those who have been rejected do not reply to the post begging for an appeal. If you have any concerns, we ask that you please voice them to the staff member that rejected you, if you absolutely must. Please understand that there were probably many other factors that lead to your rejection and that it was really late where Wheatley was when he wrote that. Thank you.

    Quote from TenadwenDM

    Appears I was not yet Whitelisted :P


    This shall change shortly.

    ~Mallachie
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