I hate multiposting. Jesus, this new forum software is so damn broken. Anyway, I'm gonna have to stop putting the apps into quotes or I'll fill a page with my very own posts. So, I'm gonna have to change to a typical accepted/not accepted list system:
Skye, you're accepted. Though I do have a question to ask you; why do you give the name "Kylar Knight" to all of your characters? I think that I've seen more than three characters of yours named like that, mate.
Cloaked, I fell in love with your character. You're most certainly accepted.
Same goes for you, Shotgun. Accepted!
GG I know that this will probably be a big bother but I need you to fix the format before reviewing your app, pleeeeaaase. My eyes can't take broken forum code .
Bat, I have two things to say about your character. First, your concept is amazing, and your character is definetely way out of the norm. But on the other hand, which is my second word, I do think that he might be a little bit overpowered. It is not something to be concerned with, really. I'm just checking to see if you would be okay with fulfilling support specializations while missions are playing out, mainly. Otherwise, you are one hundred and ten percent accepted.
My character will be looking over us soon enough.
((Should be alright now.
Just on the topic of my bio (or lack thereof), I'd like to hold off on writing it for awhile. A, because I'm a bit uninspired ATM. And B, I think that if I do it as a free writing project (I just write up stuff in a word document whenever I feel like it.) I could get something pretty good done.))
Sadly, I didn't get to finish proofreading, but I love this. I'll be happy to help contribute in the future.
Also, you may want to add a section about starting your own RP, so that people have the appropriate knowledge of the amount of devotion and thought has to be but into a forum roleplay.
I don't think that section would really be relevant to the topic, nor would it be easy to do.
On the thread itself, I agree with Krazaz. This wasn't entirely necessary, but I think you did well with it.
I heard from a reliable source that slots have opened up again. I'm still up for it. (Read your post about waiting until Friday, it's Sunday for me so I'm assuming it's past Friday for you as well.)
((Huh, my post didn't actually post. Odd. Anyway, the basic gist was: Give people a bit of time; human beings lead busy lives and quite a few people are presently relying on Mafi *COUGH HACK HURK* One of the first things we discovered is that hibernation is fairly common.))
I've said it before, but I'm no good with measurements.
Height: Slightly above average
Weight: Average
>Skills<
-Weapon Handling & Management, specialises in Pistols and Rifles. Trained with Assault Rifles. Decent with SMG's. Unskilled with most other weapons.
-Cooking [Highly Proficient]
-Hand-To-Hand Combat (Yes, I know.) [Highly Proficient]
-Stealth [Highly Proficient]
-Clinical Health & Medicine [Basic Training]
>Otter<
If you get my reference I love you.
>Biography<
<I'll add this eventually, but I have some trouble with Bios and will probably need to re-read the lore a few times.>
>Morals and Ideals<
Kate believes in the importance of human life, but is relatively unconcerned by casualties. As long as the mission is done and the greater populace is still okay, losses are irrelevant. However, blatant, unnecessary murder of innocents is still off the table. If it won't get in the way of the mission, everything possible must be done to save a life.
Despite this disregard for human life, Kate has a strong belief in honour and respect. For example, betrayal is one of the worst possible crimes a person can commit in Kate's mind. Anybody who backstabs or does something only for selfish reasons is worth less than dirt.
Finally, Kate has a high regard for skill and mental strength. A frequent competitor in shooting competitions, if somebody can fire a revolver better than Kate they immediately earn her respect. She also often plays games of chess, in order to keep her mind sharp.
>Goals<
Kate is simply doing what she feels is right. The Kim's must be stopped; there is nothing more to it.
>Equipment<
-A Visor that protects Kate's eyes from flashes, provides night vision, allows her to communicate with allies & quickly access information. Contains an EV AI.
-Nvr HL3, a sniper rifle that can accommodate EMP, Explosive, or AP rounds.
-Excalibolt- A 6-round Revolver passed down by her father that uses heavy AP rounds that can tear through Armour.
Azarias pushed his headphones over his head and turned the little dial to the correct station, past the static, past the other other stations, and past the calls of the dead, to the only station he ever listened too. His phone did have a few songs on it, but Azarias preferred the radio. The calm.Put your spoiler here.
Azarias began his trek through the halls, slowly weaving his way back towards the commons room. He span and twirled, completely ignoring the world around him, his icy breath creating small clouds in front of him. He wrapped his scarf tighter around his face, completely obscuring his features. And then, out of the corner of his eye, Azarias spied the Elvakhin girl, crying and being comforted by Emma. Taking one ear bud out, Azarias approached the two.
"Is everything okay?" He asked with genuine curiosity. To which the Elvakhin girl replied with something along the lines of "Kasey is gone." A frown crept it's way across Azarias face. Emma spoke to Azarias more clearly. "Her friend disappeared last night and isn't on campus." She explained.
"I see. You sure she didn't just get lost." Azarias asked, already knowing the answer. Almost immediately the Elvakhin girl screeched about how Kasey would never do that. "I believe you." Azarias said, the chill winds blowing the crying girl's hair every which way. "I'll sort this out." Azarias said, patting the Elvakhin girl on the back. He didn't believe his own words, he didn't even know where to start, but he was smart enough to know when a lie was not a bad thing.
((Gonna split this up so I can write the rest later.))
Wade exited class and walked through the halls. Bored bored bored bored bored. He had almost an entire hour to kill, and no blade with which to poke it. Wade stepped up to a vending machine and bought himself a can of FALCON COLA PAWNCH! Though Wade was rather disgusted by the idea of energy drinks, he couldn't help himself. The taste was intoxicating, and the Cola one didn't taste nearly as disgusting as the others. Though Wade had grown rather fond of other drinks by the same brand. Magi-Cola, or something.
Swallowing the putrid blend of sugar and flavoring, Wade felt oddly refreshed. It was then that he noticed the aura of the strange boy from earlier, Dusk, exiting the building. Though faint, Wade followed it out into the stadium. Wade smiled. This boy was interesting.
Wade approached Dusk, the strange boy with the strange manners who acted strangely. "Yo." He said, as casually as possible. Dusk had adapted faster than Wade had anticipated. Though, he supposed, one could not accurately judge another from a single meet, even with observational skills as keen as his own. "How are you, amici mei?" Wade asked, looking around the stadium as he walked closer to the strange boy. The dark aura had fled, though Wade could still sense it's shadow. The shadow of a shadow. What a strange concept.
((It's fine. If you think you need some help I'm not the greatest but I'm available. Solawind is also pretty good at this stuff, though it's up to him whether he wants to or not. Always welcome to re-submit your application!))
((Seconded. To expand on what Krazaz said, your bio says you were left in the forests near the school, which have been stated as having deadly creatures in them which would have eaten you alive within seconds.
Also, you described her as having superb social skills, despite never having left the forest and never communicating with any other humans.
Finally yo described your father as having just dumped you in the woods when he saw wolves. So, he carried his daughter into the woods, at night, on his way back from work, and then just dropped his child and ran?))
As Lugaid continued eating, he overheard Adam noting the amount of items to eat. Lugaid gave a hesitant sigh. "True," He began. "but im not familiar with much of this. In the Draconian village, i always had meats with spices, and occasionally plain bread. In the Elven colony, it was fruits and vegetables. I dont know what half the things here are called."
Lugaid continued with his berries, refilling his plate when he ran out. "So, what was your past like, Sylvia?" Lugaid asked. She was the only one Lugaid didnt know about. He would be mostly indifferent to any abilities she may have had, he was just curious. Awaiting her answer, Lugaid began rolling a blueberry between his thumb and forefinger.
((Please don't redirect without asking me first, it's impolite.))
((Speaking of *cough cough* I'm sick.
Seriously though, I'm ending breakfast tomorrow, so keep it rolling guys. Don't wanna push, but I can't keep the day students waiting.))
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((A mile is overdoing it a bit, not to mention it's about as subtle as riding an elephant through town with a giant sign that reads 'I'M NOT HUMAN!'))
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Mkay. I'll try to keep posted, but msg me with any developments, if you'd be so kind.
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((Should be alright now.
Just on the topic of my bio (or lack thereof), I'd like to hold off on writing it for awhile. A, because I'm a bit uninspired ATM. And B, I think that if I do it as a free writing project (I just write up stuff in a word document whenever I feel like it.) I could get something pretty good done.))
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Sadly, I didn't get to finish proofreading, but I love this. I'll be happy to help contribute in the future.
Also, you may want to add a section about starting your own RP, so that people have the appropriate knowledge of the amount of devotion and thought has to be but into a forum roleplay.
I don't think that section would really be relevant to the topic, nor would it be easy to do.
On the thread itself, I agree with Krazaz. This wasn't entirely necessary, but I think you did well with it.
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I heard from a reliable source that slots have opened up again. I'm still up for it. (Read your post about waiting until Friday, it's Sunday for me so I'm assuming it's past Friday for you as well.)
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((Huh, my post didn't actually post. Odd. Anyway, the basic gist was: Give people a bit of time; human beings lead busy lives and quite a few people are presently relying on Mafi *COUGH HACK HURK* One of the first things we discovered is that hibernation is fairly common.))
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~Azarias~
Azarias pushed his headphones over his head and turned the little dial to the correct station, past the static, past the other other stations, and past the calls of the dead, to the only station he ever listened too. His phone did have a few songs on it, but Azarias preferred the radio. The calm.Put your spoiler here.
Azarias began his trek through the halls, slowly weaving his way back towards the commons room. He span and twirled, completely ignoring the world around him, his icy breath creating small clouds in front of him. He wrapped his scarf tighter around his face, completely obscuring his features. And then, out of the corner of his eye, Azarias spied the Elvakhin girl, crying and being comforted by Emma. Taking one ear bud out, Azarias approached the two.
"Is everything okay?" He asked with genuine curiosity. To which the Elvakhin girl replied with something along the lines of "Kasey is gone." A frown crept it's way across Azarias face. Emma spoke to Azarias more clearly. "Her friend disappeared last night and isn't on campus." She explained.
"I see. You sure she didn't just get lost." Azarias asked, already knowing the answer. Almost immediately the Elvakhin girl screeched about how Kasey would never do that. "I believe you." Azarias said, the chill winds blowing the crying girl's hair every which way. "I'll sort this out." Azarias said, patting the Elvakhin girl on the back. He didn't believe his own words, he didn't even know where to start, but he was smart enough to know when a lie was not a bad thing.
((Gonna split this up so I can write the rest later.))
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~Wade~
Wade exited class and walked through the halls. Bored bored bored bored bored. He had almost an entire hour to kill, and no blade with which to poke it. Wade stepped up to a vending machine and bought himself a can of
FALCONCOLA PAWNCH! Though Wade was rather disgusted by the idea of energy drinks, he couldn't help himself. The taste was intoxicating, and the Cola one didn't taste nearly as disgusting as the others. Though Wade had grown rather fond of other drinks by the same brand. Magi-Cola, or something.Swallowing the putrid blend of sugar and flavoring, Wade felt oddly refreshed. It was then that he noticed the aura of the strange boy from earlier, Dusk, exiting the building. Though faint, Wade followed it out into the stadium. Wade smiled. This boy was interesting.
Wade approached Dusk, the strange boy with the strange manners who acted strangely. "Yo." He said, as casually as possible. Dusk had adapted faster than Wade had anticipated. Though, he supposed, one could not accurately judge another from a single meet, even with observational skills as keen as his own. "How are you, amici mei?" Wade asked, looking around the stadium as he walked closer to the strange boy. The dark aura had fled, though Wade could still sense it's shadow. The shadow of a shadow. What a strange concept.
((Azarias post approaching))
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((Sorry guys. Was intending to post tonight, but I just don't have it in me. I'm a little bit under the weather, my brain's all mushy.))
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[[Reserving a space for when I have more patience.]]
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((It's fine. If you think you need some help I'm not the greatest but I'm available. Solawind is also pretty good at this stuff, though it's up to him whether he wants to or not. Always welcome to re-submit your application!))
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((Seconded. To expand on what Krazaz said, your bio says you were left in the forests near the school, which have been stated as having deadly creatures in them which would have eaten you alive within seconds.
Also, you described her as having superb social skills, despite never having left the forest and never communicating with any other humans.
Finally yo described your father as having just dumped you in the woods when he saw wolves. So, he carried his daughter into the woods, at night, on his way back from work, and then just dropped his child and ran?))
9:45
English has ended, it is now recess.
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((Please don't redirect without asking me first, it's impolite.))
((Speaking of *cough cough* I'm sick.
Seriously though, I'm ending breakfast tomorrow, so keep it rolling guys. Don't wanna push, but I can't keep the day students waiting.))
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((I understand. Have fun guys!))