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Quote from krazaz

((This argument is cute and all, but I'm going to ignore it and give you advice on how to restructure Kylie.
1. Drop the murdering part, it's off lore and a would be off lore to most, if not all, iterations of reapers. reapers don't kill people outright, their job is to collect the soul of the recently departed, at the very least you can skew a person's fate toward their bitter end.

2. Drop the queen of Styx bit. It's off lore as well, not to mention the little "thought" your character had about bringing a Stygian force to deal with Cyrus IS THE WORST THING YOU COULD DO. I really don't want to break out the interdimensional war plot arc out of my ****.

3. Don't blindly jump into a relationship, it's unnatural, even for a seductress demonic entity, get to know the guy first, get to know his friends, and don't suddenly act like you want to be friends with the lot of us when we just met you

4. Kind of an extension of 3, don't jump into conclusions, you immediately jumped to the conclusion that Cyrus hated you when you only interacted a little bit, when, in fact, I'm sure that Andrew was going to hate Kylie more than Cyrus was. Whether your character sees us as targets, threats, allies, or friends, try to see what happens first. A character whom might seem weak might just be your nightmare, people who you want to be friends with might end up being a bully.

5. (More of an aggravation) your introduction wasn't subtle at all, your first thoughts were Kill kill kill! While you were standing at the front gate, and jumped at Cyrus immediately. You could have pretended to be a normal person for a bit, you could have pretended to be a classmate none of us remembers. Or you could have hid in the shadows waiting for one of us to be alone or distracted.))

Quote from ZixUni

((You're trumping about like a damn child acting like you know or characters better than we do. I was restating what I already knew. I'm allowed to be annoyed by character inconsistences. Xaya is a character from my story I am writing, She is emotionally unstable, And wants to be evil like her ancestors who ruled over the land of Styx, But as the next heir to the throne of styx, she finds herself unable to be evil. Every evil act she commits, she feels the hideous demeanor behind it all. She feels the pain of every victim that falls to her, Scarring her even more with every kill. She is not meant to be evil. quit acting like you invented my character, If you want to deny claims to having done so I have people in the arena RP that can prove my claims with your constant OOC derailing everything, being so RP nazi in a RP that is meant to be fun. Any RP is just as fun as you make it. This what I'm talking about by character inconsistencies: First Xaya seemed outright sadistic, now your giving me her entire backstory because I was accusing you of basically waving your character in front of Engie's and going 'HEY, LET'S ROMANCE!'You making Cyrus annoying and emotionless with lack of care is annoying, and your constant OOC derailing is annoying
Emotionless? Since when. All I've been doing is talking about his emotions. Mostly amusement and boredom, but those are still emotions. To be emotionless, he would have to show no feeling at all, which he has. His 'lack of care' is not something I'm sure about. And it's not derailing, I am talking about IC in OOC, in as short a post as possible. Meanwhile; You just gave me the entire backstory of your character, something that was completely unrelated. I haven't made him annoying. I've made him keep things moving when it slows down. You yourself stated previously that all I was doing was throwing coffee. If you had a problem with it then, then you should have said so.))