OOC (Out of Character Application)
Username: Chicochang Prior RP Experience: Used to Roleplay on WoW and a little on minecraft, but have been out of commission for a bit. Why do you want to join Ravien?: I love roleplay and have free time now. The server lore is great and I like the aspect of faction interaction. Have you ever been banned? No
IC (In-Character Application) Character Name: Raska Age: Born during time of Hammerfall Sex (Male/Female/Androgynous/Transgender): An Backstory (3 Paragraph minimum, proper grammar and spacing required):
Created by the great dwarf wizard Ongar of Ravien, Raska was crafted from the body of a dwarven warrior who had been hung for treason. With a body made partially of gears and hands of hardened gold, Raska is the perfect fighting machine and guardian. To make sure that Raska stayed loyal he created him simple minded, totally dependent to Ongar. For many years Raska guarded Ongar; slaying his enemies, guarding his treasures, and taking the abuse of Ongar's magic. One day while working with powerful and dangerous magic, Ongar killed himself. Being a malevolent dwarf, Ongar's last order to subordinate Raska was to stay.
As time and nature took back Ongar's dwelling, simple Raska was left dormant. One day explorers came across the decrepit hovel. As the explorers ransacked the home, one came across the still Raska. Coveting his hands above all else, the explorer attempted to remove Raska's hands. Awakened by the touch Raska immediately slammed the thief, instantly killing him. Alerted by the noise the other explorers turned in shock to see the activated Raska moving towards them. As Raska raised his hand to smash another explorer, the explorer screamed "Stop!! Leave Us!." Suddenly stopping, Raska turned around and left the home.
Aimlessly roaming the land, a free undead, Raska finally found his way to a familiar sight, dwarves. Only knowing pain from the dwarves Raska often avoided the big cities and villages, sticking to the outskirts, only probing sometimes when something peaked his interest. Traveling through the country of the dwarves at night and staying hidden during the day, Raska looked for something he had once seen in a vision, an assassin who in his vision was killing another dwarf.
Alignment: Blue/White Profession/Intended Class: Warrior/Guard What is your intended race?: Undead Dwarf
RP (Roleplay Application)
As you disembark from the Imperial Ship Leviathan, you notice a group of soldiers standing in the gangway. They draw their swords, with the captain of the guard standing intimidatingly. "We have recieved an order to take you into custody - you are wanted for the murder of Sir Raleigh, Earl of Dragnor."
How do you respond?:
*Make slight gurgling noises and attempt to flee by diving into the water*
No where in your back story does it say that the tree is in Ravien you have to have in your back story that it is
Unwhitelisted because it was a mistake to have added you in the first place you need to fix your application, in addition you were griefing some people on the server
even if I did accept you the way you spell wouldn't be accepted, aside from that I already talked to the owner about you, he said no, because you lied in your application, and we have too many mean characters on the server anyway
I'm the only whitelister now and I have school from 6 - 9 pm PST although I am around during theday I can't focus properly on applications when my house is so noisy hence why I work on them at night
I should let you guys know a few things will be added to applications, one thing being that if you died to get into Ravien you have to have at least some memory lost you can't remember everything from your past life.
On another note, I'm extremely sad to say that Liloki has resigned from being a mod and white listing, that being said I may be the only white lister for a little while, meaning I won't get to working on applications and whitelisting until after 9:30 pm Pacific Standard Time because thats when I get out of school. I apologize ahead of time for the inconvinience
Accepted:
Dumb_bunny - please keep in mind that your character cannot remember how she died only remember that she did die and her soul was transported to Ravien
Denied:
fingerpaint - Reasons being that 1. Ravien is a world not a kingdom, you have to be born into it or die into it, unless your a demon then you have the third option of arriving via portal and 2. your paragraphs aren't properly spaced
DontCallMeSurly - born into ravien or died? state in your application example: Blank was born in a village in the world of Ravien." that's just an example you don't have to use it in fact I'd prefer if you came up with your own
Musicgirl434 - ... seriously? You may be the second person to recieve a two paragraph lecture on why your application is not accepted. 1. It makes no sense that she never wanted to be attached to anyone considering she had no parents to get attached to in the first place, no one to traumatize her to where she feared attachment or at least it isn't explained.
2. Demons kidnapping her to try and make her join them? Thats really stupid, demons wouldn't be intrested in forcing a child who has yet to sin, to join them. In addition she never developed a sense of right and wrong so why would she refuse to join the demons even if she was asked to join?
3. people think her parents were the most powerful but they don't even know her parents and neither does she? Mary-ing-Sue, we don't take kindly to mary sue on this server. In short your application is denied for 3 things, being an over powered character, inability to meet the backstory requirement of 3 prargraphs minimum, and bad grammar in your roleplay example
TheFreakinknight- the maid saved you then got rid of you... yea that makes total sense... then knights and rogues all together? that rarely happens, I suggest you read the applications that were accepted to give you insight as to how to write a proper application
Timothy_A - My eyes... the Grammar! please for the love of Lunidia fix your grammar!
Domdoom888 - Ravien is a world not a kingdom, you have to be born into it or die into it, unless your a demon then you have the third option of arriving via portal the other reason being that you to not meet the 3 paragraph minimum for your backstory, oh and, excuse the language but how in the are you tricked into getting beat up?!
Cormag778 - I'm sorry I must have confused you for someone else but my advice still stands. ah and as for your being denied, you didn't space your paragraphs properly and just to let you know if the mother tree is in ravien please pu tthat somewhere in your application
Skylord_Helios - True you added that you were born in ravien, however your paragraphs aren't 4-5 sentences long, in order words your application is too short. In addition theres a bit of god mod/power gaming in your roleplay example, quite a bit actually
Goldenmoment12 - the last paragraph of your back story was too short 4-5 sentences minimum
Zailemaos - you have to be born into Ravien or die into it, unless your a demon then you have the third option of arriving via portal, and your grammar is off please fix it
Chicochang - can't be a golem, the title of Ravien makes it seem like Ravien is a town which it is not you have to be born into Ravien or die into it, unless your a demon then you have the third option of arriving via portal
In the Dwarven Lore it says there are also rock monsters. are they just not allowed anymore or...? Can you give me the name of a city in Ravien? There isnt really a list anywhere
OOC (Out of Character Application)
Username: Chicochang Prior RP Experience: Used to Roleplay on WoW and a little on minecraft, but have been out of commission for a bit. Why do you want to join Ravien?: I love roleplay and have free time now. The server lore is great and I like the aspect of faction interaction. Have you ever been banned? No
IC (In-Character Application) Character Name: Raska Age: Born during time of Hammerfall Sex (Male/Female/Androgynous/Transgender): An Backstory (3 Paragraph minimum, proper grammar and spacing required):
Created by the great dwarf wizard Ongar (A locally famous wizard in Ravien), Raska was crafted from the body of a fallen lava golem and the brain of a dwarven warrior who had been hung for treason. With a body of stone and hands of hardened gold, Raska is the perfect fighting machine and guardian. To make sure that Raska stayed loyal he created him simple minded, totally dependent of Ongar. For many years Raska guarded Ongar; slaying his enemies, guarding his treasures, and taking the abuse of Ongar's magic. One day while working with powerful and dangerous magic, Ongar killed himself. Being a malevolent dwarf, Ongar's last order to subordinate Raska was to stay.
As time and nature took back Ongar's dwelling, simple Raska was left dormant until explorers came across the decrepit hovel. As the explorers ransacked the home, one came across the still Raska. Coveting his hands above all else, the explorer attempted to remove Raska's hands. Awakened by the touch Raska immediately slammed the thief, instantly killing him. Alerted by the noise the other explorers turned in shock to see the activated Raska moving towards them. As Raska raised his hand to smash another explorer, the explorer screamed "Stop!! Leave Us!." Suddenly stopping, Raska turned around and left the home.
Aimlessly roaming the land, a free golem, Raska finally found his way to a familiar sight, dwarves. Only knowing pain from the dwarves Raska often avoided the big cities and villages, sticking to the outskirts, only probing sometimes when something peaked his interest. Traveling through the country of the dwarves at night and standing motionless during the day, Raska looked for something he had once seen in a vision, an assassin who in his vision was seen killing another dwarf.
Alignment: Blue/White Profession/Intended Class: Warrior/Guard What is your intended race?: Mix of golem and dwarf
RP (Roleplay Application)
As you disembark from the Imperial Ship Leviathan, you notice a group of soldiers standing in the gangway. They draw their swords, with the captain of the guard standing intimidatingly. "We have recieved an order to take you into custody - you are wanted for the murder of Sir Raleigh, Earl of Dragnor."
How do you respond?:
*Look down at the guards and bellow a fearsome growl*
*Push the guards off the dock into the water*
OOC Info:
IGN Name: ChicoChang
Age:18
How did you find this server: Surfed the forums
Have you ever griefed/been banned on a server: No
IC Info:
Character Name: Immitis
Race: Human (Halegron)
Class (when RP starts): Warrior
Character Biography
Character appearance: Tall, brown skin and eyes with Dark Brown hair. Has a hard look on his face, like a frown or a scowl, but with a hint or wariness to it
Character Story:Immitis was born into the small tribe who originally lived in the southern desert. They lived by very meager means. This meant that only those who were deemed strong and smart enough a few days after birth were allowed to become part of the tribe. The other babies who were deemed not worthy to join the tribe were left in the wild to be exposed to the elements and die. This was the case for Immitis, but through the will of the gods, Immitis survived. Initially being raised by an Old Hermit, Immitis grew to become a young child. Unfortunately the hermit died on a cold night. From then on Immitus lived on the edge of society, tricking, stealing, and even fighting to survive; Learning what little he knows of the language from the people he stole from and the scrapes of writing he came upon. Soon this way of life was all he knew. Once big enough, Immitis began making his meals of the local farmers live stock, often beating the animals, and a few of the farmers who stood in his way, to death with a rock; This gave him the name of Immitis, or Cruel. Eventually the people grew wary of such actions and found Immitis's den and drove him from the land right into the territory of the Halegronians.
The limiting rule of the jobs is a good idea, but I would like to suggest a limited world (I.E. a 1500x1500 block world) so that some resources are Non-Renewable, thus providing an actual economy with supply and demands. This way i believe that factions will interact with each other more. For example if a faction own a vast majority of the iron in the world then other factions would be forced to barter, trade resources, or even forcibly take the resources from said faction. Also limiting of the world size would also cause there to be more interaction between people due to just simply being near each other. Rather then an economy driven by factions supplying themselves with the items they want/need, I believe that a closed world system would cause a true economy.Also of course as the world grows and some supplies are lost to deaths, machines built... etc. the world could be expanded again to include more resources.
Hey guys. I decided that we will take a vote. If you guys feel like having the server up, but no stats or abilities until later on, make a post saying you do. If you don't want the server go up until we can work it out, make a post saying you do. We have our the most essential plugins already in. Sorry for the inconvenience and lack of plugin knowledge. Keep in mind we are building before we start rp anyway. Also we could still easily do rp without of them for a bit, but it is your decision. We want your feedback!
I feel that we should set it up now. I mean making some of the cities and other basic things will take a little time to be made. I also agree that people may start be bailing.
IGN Name: Chicochang
Location: Pacific timezone
Age: 18
Why do you want to join our server?: I love Rp and have been looking for a minecraft Rp server to join
How would you benefit our server?: I have Rp'ed in WoW and minecraft and truly enjoy it. I feel I could attribute to this server with my experience, level-headed thinking, and ability to work hard
Do you understand the rules? :smile.gif: yes I did
Rp Character name: Immitis
Race: Iridians, lives with the Gaians
Class: Wanderer
Worship: None
Character appearance: Tall, brown skin and eyes with Dark Brown hair. Has a hard look on his face, like a frown or a scowl, but with a hint or wariness to it
Character Story:Immitis was born into tribe of Iridians who lived by very meager means. This meant that only those who were deemed strong and smart enough a few days after birth were allowed to become part of the tribe. The other babies who were deemed not worthy to join the tribe were left in the wild to be exposed to the elements and die. This was the case for Immitis, but through the will of the gods, Immitis survived. Initially being raised by an Old Hermit, Immitis grew to become a young child before the hermit died on a cold night. From then on Immitus lived on the edge of society, tricking, stealing, and even fighting to survive; Learning what little he knows of the language from the people he stole from and the scrapes of writiing he came upon. Soon this way of life was all he knew. Once big enough, Immitus began making his meals of the local farmers live stock, often beating them, and a few of the farmers who stood in his way, to death with a rock; This gave him the name of Immitis, or Cruel. Eventually the people grew wary of such actions and found Immitis's den and drove him from the land right into the territory of the Gaians.
Minecraft Username / IGN: Chicochang
How experienced are you with skyblock: Non at all, but I believe I can catch on quickly
Why do you want to join this server?: Interested in skyblock
Have you read the rules and realize that any griefing or stealing AT ALL is logged with the logblock plugin and you will be banned if it is reported?: Yes i have
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Meh. Works for me.
Much better. Accepted
Anyone can make wood. Wood things like doors, chests and trap doors? those are Carpenter only craft items.
This is the last application I am accepting with the cliche of 'raised by wolves' unless someone can make it interesting.
I can change it so a Old Hermit found me and raised me, but died early in my life. I was just trying to figure out how a baby can survive the Wild past a few hours.
User name*: Chicochang (Silvana Wins)
Age*: 18
Location/Time Zone*: Pacific
Did someone refer you?: No, I was just surfing for a new RP server to join
Minecraft Version (eg 1.8.1)*: 1.1
Land/Town: Ramonia or Falconreach
Job*: Carpenter, if I understand correctly can they build with wood also or is that under the task of Builder?
Race:Hunter
Name: Immitis
Age*: Appears to be mid 20's
Bio*: Immitis was born into tribe of people who lived by very meager means. This meant that only those who were deemed strong and smart enough a few days after birth were allowed to become part of the tribe. The other babies who were deemed not worthy to join the tribe were left in the wild to be exposed to the elements and die. This was the case for Immitis, but through the will of the gods, Immitis survived. Initially being raised by wolf mother, Immitis grew to become a young child before he was cast out of his den by the Alpha. From then on Immitus lived on the edge of society, tricking, stealing, and even fighting to survive; Learning what little he knows of the language from the people he stole from and the scrapes of writiing he came upon. Soon this way of life was all he knew. Once big enough, Immitus began making his meals of the local farmers live stock, often beating them, and a few of the farmers who stood in his way, to death with a rock; This gave him the name of Immitis, or Cruel. Eventually the people grew wary of such actions and found Immitis's den and drove him from the land right into Silvania.
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OOC (Out of Character Application)
Username: Chicochang
Prior RP Experience: Used to Roleplay on WoW and a little on minecraft, but have been out of commission for a bit.
Why do you want to join Ravien?: I love roleplay and have free time now. The server lore is great and I like the aspect of faction interaction.
Have you ever been banned? No
IC (In-Character Application)
Character Name: Raska
Age: Born during time of Hammerfall
Sex (Male/Female/Androgynous/Transgender): An
Backstory (3 Paragraph minimum, proper grammar and spacing required):
Created by the great dwarf wizard Ongar of Ravien, Raska was crafted from the body of a dwarven warrior who had been hung for treason. With a body made partially of gears and hands of hardened gold, Raska is the perfect fighting machine and guardian. To make sure that Raska stayed loyal he created him simple minded, totally dependent to Ongar. For many years Raska guarded Ongar; slaying his enemies, guarding his treasures, and taking the abuse of Ongar's magic. One day while working with powerful and dangerous magic, Ongar killed himself. Being a malevolent dwarf, Ongar's last order to subordinate Raska was to stay.
As time and nature took back Ongar's dwelling, simple Raska was left dormant. One day explorers came across the decrepit hovel. As the explorers ransacked the home, one came across the still Raska. Coveting his hands above all else, the explorer attempted to remove Raska's hands. Awakened by the touch Raska immediately slammed the thief, instantly killing him. Alerted by the noise the other explorers turned in shock to see the activated Raska moving towards them. As Raska raised his hand to smash another explorer, the explorer screamed "Stop!! Leave Us!." Suddenly stopping, Raska turned around and left the home.
Aimlessly roaming the land, a free undead, Raska finally found his way to a familiar sight, dwarves. Only knowing pain from the dwarves Raska often avoided the big cities and villages, sticking to the outskirts, only probing sometimes when something peaked his interest. Traveling through the country of the dwarves at night and staying hidden during the day, Raska looked for something he had once seen in a vision, an assassin who in his vision was killing another dwarf.
Alignment: Blue/White
Profession/Intended Class: Warrior/Guard
What is your intended race?: Undead Dwarf
RP (Roleplay Application)
As you disembark from the Imperial Ship Leviathan, you notice a group of soldiers standing in the gangway. They draw their swords, with the captain of the guard standing intimidatingly. "We have recieved an order to take you into custody - you are wanted for the murder of Sir Raleigh, Earl of Dragnor."
How do you respond?:
*Make slight gurgling noises and attempt to flee by diving into the water*
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In the Dwarven Lore it says there are also rock monsters. are they just not allowed anymore or...? Can you give me the name of a city in Ravien? There isnt really a list anywhere
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Username: Chicochang
Prior RP Experience: Used to Roleplay on WoW and a little on minecraft, but have been out of commission for a bit.
Why do you want to join Ravien?: I love roleplay and have free time now. The server lore is great and I like the aspect of faction interaction.
Have you ever been banned? No
IC (In-Character Application)
Character Name: Raska
Age: Born during time of Hammerfall
Sex (Male/Female/Androgynous/Transgender): An
Backstory (3 Paragraph minimum, proper grammar and spacing required):
Created by the great dwarf wizard Ongar (A locally famous wizard in Ravien), Raska was crafted from the body of a fallen lava golem and the brain of a dwarven warrior who had been hung for treason. With a body of stone and hands of hardened gold, Raska is the perfect fighting machine and guardian. To make sure that Raska stayed loyal he created him simple minded, totally dependent of Ongar. For many years Raska guarded Ongar; slaying his enemies, guarding his treasures, and taking the abuse of Ongar's magic. One day while working with powerful and dangerous magic, Ongar killed himself. Being a malevolent dwarf, Ongar's last order to subordinate Raska was to stay.
As time and nature took back Ongar's dwelling, simple Raska was left dormant until explorers came across the decrepit hovel. As the explorers ransacked the home, one came across the still Raska. Coveting his hands above all else, the explorer attempted to remove Raska's hands. Awakened by the touch Raska immediately slammed the thief, instantly killing him. Alerted by the noise the other explorers turned in shock to see the activated Raska moving towards them. As Raska raised his hand to smash another explorer, the explorer screamed "Stop!! Leave Us!." Suddenly stopping, Raska turned around and left the home.
Aimlessly roaming the land, a free golem, Raska finally found his way to a familiar sight, dwarves. Only knowing pain from the dwarves Raska often avoided the big cities and villages, sticking to the outskirts, only probing sometimes when something peaked his interest. Traveling through the country of the dwarves at night and standing motionless during the day, Raska looked for something he had once seen in a vision, an assassin who in his vision was seen killing another dwarf.
Alignment: Blue/White
Profession/Intended Class: Warrior/Guard
What is your intended race?: Mix of golem and dwarf
RP (Roleplay Application)
As you disembark from the Imperial Ship Leviathan, you notice a group of soldiers standing in the gangway. They draw their swords, with the captain of the guard standing intimidatingly. "We have recieved an order to take you into custody - you are wanted for the murder of Sir Raleigh, Earl of Dragnor."
How do you respond?:
*Look down at the guards and bellow a fearsome growl*
*Push the guards off the dock into the water*
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Haha I feel like that would make me laugh so hard, especially if they pulled it off.
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IGN Name: ChicoChang
Age:18
How did you find this server: Surfed the forums
Have you ever griefed/been banned on a server: No
IC Info:
Character Name: Immitis
Race: Human (Halegron)
Class (when RP starts): Warrior
Character Biography
Character appearance: Tall, brown skin and eyes with Dark Brown hair. Has a hard look on his face, like a frown or a scowl, but with a hint or wariness to it
Character Story:Immitis was born into the small tribe who originally lived in the southern desert. They lived by very meager means. This meant that only those who were deemed strong and smart enough a few days after birth were allowed to become part of the tribe. The other babies who were deemed not worthy to join the tribe were left in the wild to be exposed to the elements and die. This was the case for Immitis, but through the will of the gods, Immitis survived. Initially being raised by an Old Hermit, Immitis grew to become a young child. Unfortunately the hermit died on a cold night. From then on Immitus lived on the edge of society, tricking, stealing, and even fighting to survive; Learning what little he knows of the language from the people he stole from and the scrapes of writing he came upon. Soon this way of life was all he knew. Once big enough, Immitis began making his meals of the local farmers live stock, often beating the animals, and a few of the farmers who stood in his way, to death with a rock; This gave him the name of Immitis, or Cruel. Eventually the people grew wary of such actions and found Immitis's den and drove him from the land right into the territory of the Halegronians.
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Do I need to send my skype account stuff to get the I.P. later? if so its: Changchico
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^^^^^^^^^^ means he is responding to the above post
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I feel that we should set it up now. I mean making some of the cities and other basic things will take a little time to be made. I also agree that people may start be bailing.
Also you can make the thread a poll.
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Location: Pacific timezone
Age: 18
Why do you want to join our server?: I love Rp and have been looking for a minecraft Rp server to join
How would you benefit our server?: I have Rp'ed in WoW and minecraft and truly enjoy it. I feel I could attribute to this server with my experience, level-headed thinking, and ability to work hard
Do you understand the rules? :smile.gif: yes I did
Rp Character name: Immitis
Race: Iridians, lives with the Gaians
Class: Wanderer
Worship: None
Character appearance: Tall, brown skin and eyes with Dark Brown hair. Has a hard look on his face, like a frown or a scowl, but with a hint or wariness to it
Character Story:Immitis was born into tribe of Iridians who lived by very meager means. This meant that only those who were deemed strong and smart enough a few days after birth were allowed to become part of the tribe. The other babies who were deemed not worthy to join the tribe were left in the wild to be exposed to the elements and die. This was the case for Immitis, but through the will of the gods, Immitis survived. Initially being raised by an Old Hermit, Immitis grew to become a young child before the hermit died on a cold night. From then on Immitus lived on the edge of society, tricking, stealing, and even fighting to survive; Learning what little he knows of the language from the people he stole from and the scrapes of writiing he came upon. Soon this way of life was all he knew. Once big enough, Immitus began making his meals of the local farmers live stock, often beating them, and a few of the farmers who stood in his way, to death with a rock; This gave him the name of Immitis, or Cruel. Eventually the people grew wary of such actions and found Immitis's den and drove him from the land right into the territory of the Gaians.
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How experienced are you with skyblock: Non at all, but I believe I can catch on quickly
Why do you want to join this server?: Interested in skyblock
Have you read the rules and realize that any griefing or stealing AT ALL is logged with the logblock plugin and you will be banned if it is reported?: Yes i have
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Meh. Works for me.
Much better. Accepted
Anyone can make wood. Wood things like doors, chests and trap doors? those are Carpenter only craft items.
This is the last application I am accepting with the cliche of 'raised by wolves' unless someone can make it interesting.
I can change it so a Old Hermit found me and raised me, but died early in my life. I was just trying to figure out how a baby can survive the Wild past a few hours.
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Age*: 18
Location/Time Zone*: Pacific
Did someone refer you?: No, I was just surfing for a new RP server to join
Minecraft Version (eg 1.8.1)*: 1.1
Land/Town: Ramonia or Falconreach
Job*: Carpenter, if I understand correctly can they build with wood also or is that under the task of Builder?
Race:Hunter
Name: Immitis
Age*: Appears to be mid 20's
Bio*: Immitis was born into tribe of people who lived by very meager means. This meant that only those who were deemed strong and smart enough a few days after birth were allowed to become part of the tribe. The other babies who were deemed not worthy to join the tribe were left in the wild to be exposed to the elements and die. This was the case for Immitis, but through the will of the gods, Immitis survived. Initially being raised by wolf mother, Immitis grew to become a young child before he was cast out of his den by the Alpha. From then on Immitus lived on the edge of society, tricking, stealing, and even fighting to survive; Learning what little he knows of the language from the people he stole from and the scrapes of writiing he came upon. Soon this way of life was all he knew. Once big enough, Immitus began making his meals of the local farmers live stock, often beating them, and a few of the farmers who stood in his way, to death with a rock; This gave him the name of Immitis, or Cruel. Eventually the people grew wary of such actions and found Immitis's den and drove him from the land right into Silvania.