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    posted a message on THE ANERIAN CHRONICLES [RP][Airships][Classes][Player-Driven-Story][Extensive Lore]
    Quote from Zymph

    Deferred:

    Yhittazz/Arrrgasm- Let's go over these again then, shall we? :)

    - Your grammar is going to make it difficult for some people to RP with you on the server if you are accepted. I atleast ask that you use spell check when writing your app to correct things. And, if it's because you type too fast.. Just slow down and chill, bud. The application isn't going anywhere. :P

    - The skin is now fine, so there's a small improvement, good job.

    - The ICRs feel a bit unrealistic. They're causing me to question your character and your RPing abilities.

    - You can NOT start knowing magic or start out having once used magic. There is also no 'time vortex' in our lore, so this could not have happened to your character.. Not to mention, it's kinda cliche.. This isn't up for discussion. Change it, or find another RP server.

    - Your character needs more of a personality. You can still be the 'mysterious old man' if you really want.. But you NEED to show more personality in your application for your character. I'm sorry, but Ellard is boring.

    Also, next time you post your app, just make a new post. Do NOT edit your previous one. It isn't spamming, but thank you for being considerate. It makes it easier for me and the other Whitelisters to review your app.

    Your character may also write books no matter what class he is (Though it'd make sense for him to do so as a scholar, but you'd need to become one through the academy to get a degree and whatnot - But, a craftsman can certainly write books) so long as he is literate.

    You have one more chance to get accepted, this means you can only post your app ONE more time before you are denied.

    Please try again, and good luck! :)

    Denied:

    Yhitazzz's friend/oric8520- I apologize, but your app was very bland, cliche, and poorly written. Also, you included the Dovahkin in your app..?

    Also.. "I have played on your early server book of Halegron by the name Oirc8520 and from then till now i had earned even more roleplaying expirience." You both wrote this in your sections of the app.. You couldn't have both been Oirc8520 (I thought it was oric8520..?) back in BoH. -_-

    Do not apply again. Thanks for taking the time to fill out the app though (unless you and Arrrgasm are just the same person. :l ).


    Well, that makes me sad, i did my best to make an old man character type but i guess im just not into it, i give up on this character and use my last attempt on another character if possible, i will use all your notes to make my next application as good as possible and it will be written below, i am sorry for wasting your time twice and i hope it wont happen the third time, i really do.

    Also, i have to clear that me and oric are not the same person, i have NO idea why he wrote that he played on the server before, but just for you to know, i wont be looking for sneaky ways to come to the server like that, if i dont get accepted guess i deserve it, joining your server last time was easier than now and i tough i could get in as easy as before, that probably made me to relaxed and unfocused on my character writing.

    Im making my last attempt, and i hope it works.



    Out of Character Information

    IGN:

    Arrrgasm

    Real-Life Age:

    15

    Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot):

    I do have skype but i dont usually use it.

    Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?:

    Yes

    What is the definition of “Powergaming”?:

    Powerming is a term that is used to describe a roleplaying situation where a player would roleplay his character without any seen borders, such as having unlimited power and unrealistic abbilities thus not fitting his role into the character he is playing.

    What is the definition of “Metagaming”?:

    Metagaming is a term used to describe a situation when a player uses imformation that he knows in real life to his own benefit in the roleplaying life even if the character in the roleplay does not know any of the info.

    What is the definition of “Roleplay”?:

    Roleplaying is taking the role of a caracter or a hero and acting accordingly, the roleplay should be realistic an fitting into the character, that means that a simple old man cant have the power of flght or any unhuman physical abillities.

    Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?:

    No-one


    When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?:

    You are allowed to cause death only when the RP situation is providing the reason to do so, you cant just go on a killing spree an slaughter all the townsfolk, you must use RP and make the townsfolk be co-operative with your roleplay.

    When are you allowed to speak out of character?:

    Whenever you want to add side notes, describe a person, an action or to ask general questions and give more information of a purpose that is not neceserealy needs to be mentioned in the RP.

    Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?:

    Yes

    Who is allowed to use magic?:

    At the beggining of a character roleplay, nobody, troughout the time the character could however learn magic and spells.

    Who are the Fallen?:

    The Fallen is a peacefull race of old people living in an isolation far away from the human race, the fallen have a deep and ancient culture and most of it is passed orally from parent to child, the fallen are closer to magic the the regular humans.This practice of storytelling is what keeps their community together, and the idea of the community is a very big part of Fallen culture.

    When and how did our current government come to be?:

    the first form of the goverment was created in 0 A.R Summer when the Linyera family used their wealth to buy and capture land leaving some no choice but to join the small kingdom. at 4 A.R the church started growing, lead by a man named Reginauld which afterwards was joined by the Linyera family ancestors which were controlling the land under total monarchy. Linyera declared Reginald as the first Waren of the East. after long time a new prophet came up to the church - Kaldun who organised an assasination of the monarch and thus giving the church a bad reputation. Tybalt Bennet, the Warden of the East at the time, organized a rebellion against the linyera family, after winning Bennet sets up his own government with the three Masters of Sword, Coin and Word in 169 A.R.

    Who are the Order of Aradin?:

    A weak group of people formed to protect the Chancellor and address the threat of Bloodstone Island.

    What are the Net and Essence?:

    The net is a magical force that prevents falling from the island and keeps the belongings of the falling being to the bing itself therefore keeping all the living beings on the islands safe from falling to their doom. Essence is a sort of mana which is used for spells and magic, it can also be stored in emeralds an used as a currency.


    What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?:

    I have played on your early server book of Halegron by the name Oirc8520 and from then till now i had earned even more roleplaying expirience.

    If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left:

    I have played to many RP server to count. I was moving from server to server to find a decent strict RP server but i didnt manage to stumble across one since all of them were more focused on raids than Roleplaying, untill i remember a server i played long time ago, the book of halegron.



    Character Information

    Name:


    Talon


    Age:


    21



    Class:


    Ranger

    Race:

    Human

    Physical description:


    A fine, brown-haired looking guy, dark brown eyes, has decent strenght, a very fast and agile guy, his small body frame gives him more sneakyness but also makes him more vulnerable.

    Screen capture of your skin:
    As i am roleplaying an assassin, i probably should change cloths from time to time, so illbe altering thoese skin (not to much, if i cant do that, tell me which is is more appealing)




    Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.):


    Talon was the only child in his family, he grew up as regular kid, he had friends and buddies and he hanged out with them, he used to stay late on the streets for the good breeze that went trough the city after dawn.


    Talon was a thin boy and was not the strongest kid in the neighborhood, his strenght was in his agillity however, Talon started practicing gymnastic at an early age, he racticed everyday, he was one of the fastest runners in town and sometimes one of the sneakiest little brats too.


    Unfortunately, Talon's family wasn't the richest family, so it was hard for them to get food and come around living, as a response, Talon used to sneak around the back of the shops an taverns and snatch a couple of loafs and bottles for his family, he wasn't seen at the act of the crime often, but when he was, he managed to escape with his quick feet, Talon got a bad reputation from doing so and so did his family, Talon tought that what he did was for his familys' good but it ended up slaping him in the face.


    Talon's family got banned from the community and was constantly teased by kids from the neighborhood, Talon's mother Helda had some anger management issues, Helda lost her last piece of sanity after the ban, she blamed it all on Talon and his little tricks, she screamed at him about how much of a disgrace he is and hos mad she is, Talon, as a young kid, was insulted by what his mother said and ran away from home the same night, he never saw his family afterwards.


    As he was not welcome to his city because he had a bad reputation, he had to drift from village to village to survive, the roads were dangerous and soon enough Talonn was forced to learn how to andle a blade, he snatched a steel dagger from a little villages' blacksmith and practiced for whole days and nigts, it was hard for him to get used to the blade as it was pretty heavy for a guy like him and he ended up with a lot of bruises after every training.


    Soon enough, Talon started mastering the art of the blade and was finally able to defend himself properly. As he was drifting from town to town he went to bigger towns every time, soon he ended up and huge cities with a lot of population and the most important thing - a lot of guards, Talon found it difficult to stay alive in thoese cities since he could not steal food that easily and was caught a lot of times. Talon knew that he would have to learn to be more sneaky to outsmart the guards. And so he did.


    Talon's earliest memories are the darkness of his citys' underground passages and the reassuring steel of a blade. He remembers no family, warmth, or kindness. Instead, the clink of stolen gold and the security of a wall at his back are all the kinship he has ever craved. Kept alive only by his quick wits and deft thievery, Talon scraped out a living in the seedy underbelly of the city. His mastery of the blade quickly marked him as a threat, and city guards were dispatched to hunt him down for good.


    The assassination attempts of the guards grew increasingly dangerous until one assailant met Talon blade-for-blade in a match of strength. To his surprise, Talon was disarmed and facing down his executioner's sword. The guard introduced himself as Sergeant Anders and he provided Talon with two options : To die by his sword, or to get away from the city for good. Talon was shocked from being defeated and was barely able to speak, but after a few moments of silence, Talon crawled away from the guy, stood up, and ran as fast and as far away from the city as he could. After hours of running Talon got lost in a thick spruce forest, he set up a little camp in the midle of nowhere from supplies he found in the wild. He will soon dispatch to find another city and to start a new life there, the life of the hired assassin.


    And so, the story begins...



    What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation):


    To survive and to get more expirienced with his skills, his main goal is to get his name as the city's assassin for hire.



    Strengths (Both physical and personality):


    He has a small body frame which makes him more agile than a regular person.

    He is a sneaky little guy who always looks for a smart and comedic way to answer a question, he is able to stay cool even at the most depressing or dangerous situations and doesnt really talk that much. He is confident and knows how to handle with ladies. Altough he killed many people in the past and has no feelings towards his target when he is killing him.

    Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.):


    He has a small body frame which makes him more vulnerable and will probably get his bones broken if he would fight a big guy in a direct fist fight, altough he is a ladies man he is afraid of a broken heart, so he never gets into serious relationships and usually leaves the girls himself but he still has a hard time getting around in public places with a lot of people from the fear that someone would notice him. Talon has no feelings towards his target when he is killing him.



    Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.):

    I posted a "wanted" topic on the forums, i am looking for a hirer which could give me a steady amount of work flowing.

    In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)


    Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.


    *Talon walks in the streets late at night and notices two men torturing a girl, Talon grabs a nearby stone and proceeds to whistle to the direction of the men, the men stop whatever they were doing to the girl and look at the whistle's direction. They notice Talon leaning on the wall throwing the stone in his hand up and down, they see talon as a no threat and keep torturing the girl, another whistle comes from Talon's direction and this time the menleave the girl and stand up giving angry faces to the guy, the men proceed to scream* "Leave now or get your face crushed!" *After a moment of silence the men notice a slight grin on talon's face. Talon stands up an after a second of aiming he throws the stone into one of the guys' head, the man get his head struck by a rock and get furious, he releases a loud, mad scream and begins charging at Talon, as the charging guy is to big and clumsy for Talon's agillity, Talons menages to get out of the way from the men's charging and punch, Talon than proceeds to run away from the men as they chase him making enough distraction for the girl to get out of there. As the men get to tired from chasing Talon, Talon is able to run away from the men. After a short period of panting an breathing Talon procees with his deeds*



    A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded.


    *As the men approaches Talon who is sitting on a lone bench in the midle of a small street, the man sits nearby Talon and proposes him the proposition* "Hey there mate, aint it a beatiful day?" "-Sure is..." "-You sound like a straight to the point guy, so let me get right into it" *Talon listen to the men's request and than roceeds with a-* "and how much will it cost to you?" *the man shows Talon 3 Emeralds full of essence and than asks* "is that enough for a guy like you?" *Talon stands up looking at the emeralds and says* "Consider it done, meet me at this same place tomorrow evening" *without further redue Talons runs away to the direction of Bloodstone. After a long trip of running Talon reaches Bloodstone, He notices an incredibly large amount of monsters walking around the place, he decides to wait for night so he could use the dark to get around the monsters without being noticed. After night comes and after a lot of sneaking Talon reaches to where the treasure was supposed to be, he find an old used map which has an X on a location which he cant recognize, he puts the map in his belt and carefully goes back to the city. Next day evening Talon and the man meet again at the same spot and the deal commerces, the man gives Talon 3 emeralds while Talons gives the man the ma, the man proceeds to thank Talon, Talon respondes with "My Pleasure" and walk away*

    You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.

    *The same evening after making the deal with the man Talon wanders around the streets of the city, he notices an old dying beggar laying on the side of a street, he approaches the man and helps him stand up and than tells him to wait here. Talon runs to a nearby Tavern, at the tavern he notices few guy drinking beer and the shop keeper greeting the customers, Talon approaches the shopkeeper and asks for a beer, the shopkeeper goes to fetch the beer, Talon look's around and when nobody is looking he snatches a few loafs of bread from the counter. The shopkeeper soon arrives with a big cup of beer* "That'll be 2 gold coins mate" *Talons gets an Essence emerald out of his pocket and puts it on the counter, the shopkeeper opens his eyes widely from the surprise* "keep the change, Ill be right back, save the beer for me" *Talon than proceeds to walk back to the old man which was standing there all that time, he gives the man the bread he stole and tells him that it should be enough for a while, the thin old man gives a "thank you" movement with his head while chewing on the bread* "Take care" *said Talon and than proceeded to go back to the tavern*



    In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.

    *Talon was sitting in the bar slowly drinking his beer when he got interrupte by a drunk guy* "Oi! You there! the guy with the hood!" *Talon turns to the guy as he speaks* "Send this message to your mother!" *The guy proceeds to move his waist and pretends kissing Talon's mom. Altough Talon has no memory of his mom he wont take such an insult, Talon stands up and puches the guy to the face with his right arm, the guy stands back and after a moment charges at Talon, Talon was to close to the guy so he could not avoid the charge and gets pinned down to the floor and so begins a bar fight, Talon gets hit by a few punches from the guy but in response spins around and kick the guy from the ground, all this happens while the crowd that gathered around is cheering, Talon than stands up, gives a few more kicks to the guy and the guy finaly falls like a log of wood on the floor, Talon than proceeds to take whatever is left from his beer and pours it slowly on the guys face, after finishing, he gives the cup back to the shopkeeper and leaves the bar*


    You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.


    *Talon, being exhausted from the fight at the bar slowly roams the streets, after a while of walking he encounters a fine girl his age wearing a beatiful necklace, he cannot choose wheter he wants the necklace or the lady, Talon than stops, bows to the lady and speaks with a charming voice* "Good evening madam" *the girl answers Talon with a susicious voice* "-Good Evening" "-Say, what a fine lady like you is doing on the streets? that late, it is angerous around this time" *the girl grabs her purse wth her both hands since she's afraid from Talon stealing it" *talon gently takes the girls' hand and kisses it in a gentle manner* "Im Mark, pleasure to meet you" "Im Maria, it's nice seeing a nice gentlemen like you" *Talon gets closer to Maria while speaking* "Say, woul you allow a guy like me to order a drink for madam?" *Maria's cheecks begins to blush for shyness, Talon gets to a whisper distance and whispers to Maria* "And than maybe we could go to your place" *while Talon talk he slightly removes the safety pin from behind the necklace's chain, Maria doesnt notice that and says* "Well for a start we can go for a dri-" *Talon doesnt let Maria finish speaking and runs off with the necklace in his hands, Maria is surprsed and does not understand what he is doing for the first couple of seconds, she sees Talon with a necklace in his hand, she reaches to her neck to check for her necklace and realises it's gone* "HEY! COME BACK HERE! GIVE ME BACK MY NECKLACE! GUARDS!" *until the guards arrive it is too late because Talon menaged to run away with the treausure in his hands*




    Do you have any questions about the server or our lore?

    Not anymore



    Other notes: Good luck reading :D , i hope i get accepted this time. Note that i will be roleplay all my assassinations and will do thoese said assassinatons only when asked or hired, no random people killing so no rp getting ruined.
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    posted a message on THE ANERIAN CHRONICLES [RP][Airships][Classes][Player-Driven-Story][Extensive Lore]
    since the forums are not allowing my friend to upload the application on his account (no idea why) im uploading him for me, (note that everything is his so i just used copy and paste)


    IGN:
    oric8520

    Real-Life Age:
    15

    Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot):
    I ineed have skype and my skype name is devidini

    Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?:
    Yes

    What is the definition of “Powergaming”?:
    powergamming is a kind of a term that is usually used to describe a situetion where a player get to much out of his charecter abillitys and alike playing. For example infinty health or powers.
    Powerming is a way where a player uses items
    What is the definition of “Metagaming”?:
    Metagaming is a term used to let people know outside charecter knowledge as such as the charecter name, skills, possesion and anything that you dont know in the game itself like the charecter name in minecraft that you can see above the player is a Metagaming if you use it to know the charecter name.

    What is the definition of “Roleplay”?:
    Roleplaying is taking the role of a caracter or a hero and acting accordingly, the roleplay should be realistic an fitting into the character, that means that a simple old man cant have the power of flght or any unhuman physical abillities.

    Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?:
    No one in the world

    When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?:
    You are allowed to cause the death of another charecter only in a demending situation while playing in RP. as such you cant go around killing people in towns just like that but you have to be in a situesion that demands the death.

    When are you allowed to speak out of character?:
    You are allowed to speak out of charecter only whenever you want to add side notes like helpful information, charecter adding, command helping or in a global chat if there is one in the game.

    Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?:
    Yep

    Who is allowed to use magic?:
    At the start no one is allowed to use magic. magic is a skill that you can get only in time playing the game.

    Who are the Fallen?:
    The fallen is an old race of people living in an isolation away from the other human race while they there the live in peace. The fallen have a very ancient cultere that passed to people through father to child. The humans are releated to magic but the fallen are evan closer to it then the human race. The idea of a community takes a big part in the fallen culture as such as storytelling.

    When and how did our current government come to be?:
    The first form of the goverment had been created in 0 AR in the summer when the Linyera family captured and bought land with their welth forcing people to join their kindom. 4 AR the church started developing and growing that was led by a man named Reginauld that later joined the Linyera famaly ancestors that were controlling their land under total monarchy. The Linyear ancestors declared Reginald as the first waren of the east. after some time the new prophet came up to the church. Kaldun organised an assasination of the monarch and those who were given the church its bad reputation. Bennet Tybalt the warden from the East in that time orginized a rebellion against the linyera family. He won the rebelion and seted up his own goverment with the three Masters of the sword, coin and word in 169 AR
    Who are the Order of Aradin?:
    The Order of Aradin is a weak group that was created to protect the Chancellor and to adress the threat of the Bloodstone island.

    What are the Net and Essence?:
    The Net is a magical force that keeps the charecter from falling from the island since the island are in the sky and a way to keep your belonings safe from falling. That allows all the creatures and people on the islands keep theirself safe and preventing them to fall down to the next world.
    The Essence is kind of mana that can be used for magic and spells. It can also be used to charge the emeralds to be used as a currency.

    What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?:
    I have played on your early server book of Halegron by the name Oirc8520 and from then till now i had earned even more roleplaying expirience.

    If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left:
    I have played to many RP server to count. Some were my freinds and my own and the most known server i played is abridell the skyrim server. I quit most of those servers because i just wanted to see more and more servers. The reason i quit the abridell is because it started costing real money in the open beta. i play there as oric8520

    Character Information:
    David has strong legs and arms so he runs fast he is right handed both legs and hands but when he uses a bow he uses a bow he uses his left hand more. he has brown hair with a bit bangs. David knows how to write and read but he isnt the smartest person there is. David is tall about1.9 meters.

    Name: David

    Age:22 was born in october

    Class:
    Bladesman

    Screen capture of your skin:


    http://imgur.com/JzsUK0m


    Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.):
    The story of David begins at his childhood where he always used to follow his father around since he lived at a small village he didnt meet people often and always followed his father around since he thought that he was the smartest person in the world and followed his father in his work as a farmer.
    David as in every story aged with time so i am going to tell you about his life when he was 22.
    i was just coming from the closest city back home since i needed to get some food home i came across a gang of people beating up few people. I dont know why but i just jumped in there to help those people like i am some kind of a hero. But in the end i got beat up and i was left there bleeding painfully in the street.
    I had a nice welcoming at my home my mom panicked and started shouting at me and so did my ex-lovly father, i always was different then my parents, i always looked for an exiting adventure like in the books i read such as dovahkin. I never understood how i used to adore my father when now the only conversation we have is only in shouthing so i bever really got my great adventure and i was tired of this life. I remember my parents talking to me but i wasnt really paying attension and i remember they asked me "got it?" and i said yes to something i didnt listen to. At the end it was my parents asking me to go to the forst and direct my mother's freind into our farm. I walked peacfully down the forest where the trees were so high that you couldnt see even the sun it also was kind of foggy so i made it thougher to me to see. after few hours walk i stamped into something and fell, it was my motherl's freind body i was freaked out i never saw a body before in my life, i started running back nt knowing how it happened or who did it. I ran and ran and ran until i saw my farm. The farm looked really normal and it was like always.I ran into the house and started calling my parents but then i didnt get an answear, they are probably down at the room under the kitchen so i went there, but the floor was on fire and my parents are still inside that underhouse room, i didnt know what to do, i looked for water but the fire was too strong, and then i looked for the source it was the oven.Did my mom forgot to stop the fire after the food i didnt know. The house was starting to go on fire i couldnt do a thing i ran upstairs and took my father's sword and i got out of the burning house. I cried alot my parents were dead but i didnt know who did this was it the person who killed my mom's freind or was it something else. It took me few days when i was only me and my sword on the road that i remembered what my mom asked me to do few days ago. (flashback)"son be sure tommorow to close the oven tommorow since i will be with your father at the room under the house we need to find the gift to my freind. Then i relized it was me who didnt close the oven, it was me who my parents asked, it was me who set the farm on fire.... It was me who burned my parents.
    I didnt know what to do i was freaked out and i was lost in the world when suddenly i looked down at my sword and saw a note on it. The note said "Hello brother i know i didnt come to your 20 birthay i know you have this cute son now and i really want to meet my nefew, so take this sword as a gift, from your brother Ellard".
    I got still some family left, i never knew abou Ellard. Now i know what i am seeking i am seeking my uncale Ellard and my dream the adventure.
    What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation):
    My charecter main goal is to find his ultimate adventer while looking for his uncale Ellard.
    Strengths (Both physical and personality):
    David is young so he has pleanty of strenght, he runs alot and he always wants to be the best.
    David is carefree and doesnt care what anybody thinks of him while he always trying to be a hero.
    He doesnt think alot so he does more that he thinks but he got brains somewhere for sure.
    Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is
    David isnt a person to think alot he does stuff without thinking and always gets into trouble because of that,
    he never really listen to people so he doesnt pay attetion to people and then he has missing details.
    David is afraid of fire not a bit like when it is coming from a torch but when he sees fire he gets scared and weak.

    Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.):
    Yes, the only family he has left is his uncle Ellard he seeks for him while he desnt know where he is.


    In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)


    Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
    David would scream at the people while running toward them telling them "leave the girl alone".
    David would start telling them to back off.
    If the people wont David will attack them with his fists and punch the people in their stomach,
    David will kick their knees to slow them down
    David will take the girl and run for it while the guys are recovering.

    A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded.
    "sir. tell me where it is, the place sounds like an adventure so sure i will go there for a nice little reward"."where is it?". the man will show me where it is while David is barely listening so David goes to the place and then he took everything with a value with him since he didnt listen to what he was suposed to retrive.
    You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
    If David had food on the moment with him he would give a bit to the old man and then go away. While David doesnt have food on him he would just keep going since he doesnt care much for a stranger.

    In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
    David will turn his head toword the person who insulted his mother and say "say it one more time and..."
    the person insolted David mother again that made David put his beer on the table and jump on the person no matter who he is and punch him in the face making him fall and then David will punch him more till he sees that the man regreats that and only then David will go somewhere else.

    You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
    David will stop whatever he was doing and start staring at the necklace and say to the woman "this is one of a hell of a neclace my lady". The lady says "thanks" and i will just ask her where did she got it while trying to pay attension to what she says so he could one day buy to himself something nice.

    Do you have any questions about the server or our lore?
    Not really the server sounds awsome.
    Posted in: PC Servers
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    posted a message on THE ANERIAN CHRONICLES [RP][Airships][Classes][Player-Driven-Story][Extensive Lore]
    Quote from Zymph

    Deferred:

    Yhitazzz/Arrrgasm (Nice name.. <_< )- There were mutliple things wrong with your app. Let's take a look at them, shall we?

    - There were many grammar and spelling errors. You often had commas where you should have had periods, which made your app very frustrating and difficult to read. If English is not your first language, we understand. Please understand, that you will have to be able to speak it well enough to keep up in order to avoid frustration and confusion.

    - Your skin seems.. Inappropriate for your character.. Looks a little.. Dwarf-y. :P Maybe give him a shirt or find a more fitting one for an old man. There are folk on our forums (http://aneria.enjin.com/) that may be able to create you a skin if you ask nicely. ^_^ Please don't do this until/if you've been accepted, however.

    - Your app includes quite a bit of magic.. There are quite a few problems with this. Your character is not a mage. Your character was not given permission to start out as a mage. And lastly, your magic may (Most likely will) clash with our magic-lore. Please change this. If you wish for your character to become a mage of sorts, you may include in your app that he is planning on attending the Academy.

    - Lastly, your character seemed rather bland - Not a whole lot of personality. Flesh him out more. The ICRs could be a bit better aswell.

    Please do try and apply again! Good luck! :)


    Well, thanks for reviewing my app, here are some responses about what you claim is wrong.

    -My Grammar, well, the typing errors with the commas and dots are probably because of my furious typing, i type to fast sometimes and often use commas instead of dots and vice versa, i do have great english if i may say so myself altough it's not my mother language so i think ill be fine when RPing.

    -The Skin, if you can understand, i am absolutely INLOVE with this skin and created a part of my bio around it, i'll be really dissapointed if i was forced to give up this skin so im asking you nicely to allow me to keep it. i will however give him a shirt and post the new link :)

    EDIT: i did a Slight change and just added a shirt to my skin so it woul be mor appropriate, everything else remains the same.

    -My character, i agree my ICR is a bit bad, that is probably because i got tired of all the writing before and i understand this is my bad, i will edit my previous post to make my ICR better cause it seems that posting the application all over again is spamming. Now about my character, it is supposed to be a bit mysterious, not much personality should come from an old man anyways, i did however mentioned that he is a serious and straight-to-the point guy, i also mentione he's curious an likes to read books, i dont suppose i need to write the stuff he likes to eat and etc. cause i dont think thoese stuff are really that necessery, i gave you his basic personality without making him to un-mysterious, i hope you understand it.

    -The magic, as i mentioned in my bio, Ellard WAS using magic, BUT, he was caught in the time vortex therefore losing his memory, that means he also probably forgot how to use spells and how to mess with magic, i mentioned it in my bio on purpose to avoid my character being linked to magic from the beggining of my play.

    Notes: I will edit my last post cause i find it easier for both of us, and also,
    you might have not seen my question about the book writing so ill write it here.
    I'm going to really focus my character around book reading and esspecialy book writing (Book & Quill) is there a way for me to start or LEARN that ability as i play, and if so, which class fits it the most?

    Also, my friend will be applying soon trough my old account Oric8520, so he might aswell mention something about me in the character linking.i invited him to play cause i remember how awesome the server was.

    EDIT: all the things i mentioned i will change are now done, so you can go ahead and take your time and check my corrections :D
    Posted in: PC Servers
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    posted a message on THE ANERIAN CHRONICLES [RP][Airships][Classes][Player-Driven-Story][Extensive Lore]
    Out of Character Information

    IGN:
    Arrrgasm

    Real-Life Age:
    15

    Do you have a Skype? If so, what is your Skype Name? (This is by no means required and holds no weight on your acceptance. We just use Skype a lot):
    I do have skype but i dont usually use it.

    Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?:
    Yes

    What is the definition of “Powergaming”?:
    Powerming is a term that is used to describe a roleplaying situation where a player would roleplay his character without any seen borders, such as having unlimited power and unrealistic abbilities thus not fitting his role into the character he is playing.

    What is the definition of “Metagaming”?:
    Metagaming is a term used to describe a situation when a player uses imformation that he knows in real life to his own benefit in the roleplaying life even if the character in the roleplay does not know any of the info.

    What is the definition of “Roleplay”?:
    Roleplaying is taking the role of a caracter or a hero and acting accordingly, the roleplay should be realistic an fitting into the character, that means that a simple old man cant have the power of flght or any unhuman physical abillities.

    Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?:
    No-one

    When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?:
    You are allowed to cause death only when the RP situation is providing the reason to do so, you cant just go on a killing spree an slaughter all the townsfolk, you must use RP and make the townsfolk be co-operative with your roleplay.

    When are you allowed to speak out of character?:
    Whenever you want to add side notes, describe a person, an action or to ask general questions and give more information of a purpose that is not neceserealy needs to be mentioned in the RP.

    Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?:
    Yes

    Who is allowed to use magic?:
    At the beggining of a character roleplay, nobody, troughout the time the character could however learn magic and spells.

    Who are the Fallen?:
    The Fallen is a peacefull race of old people living in an isolation far away from the human race, the fallen have a deep and ancient culture and most of it is passed orally from parent to child, the fallen are closer to magic the the regular humans.This practice of storytelling is what keeps their community together, and the idea of the community is a very big part of Fallen culture.

    When and how did our current government come to be?:
    the first form of the goverment was created in 0 A.R Summer when the Linyera family used their wealth to buy and capture land leaving some no choice but to join the small kingdom. at 4 A.R the church started growing, lead by a man named Reginauld which afterwards was joined by the Linyera family ancestors which were controlling the land under total monarchy. Linyera declared Reginald as the first Waren of the East. after long time a new prophet came up to the church - Kaldun who organised an assasination of the monarch and thus giving the church a bad reputation. Tybalt Bennet, the Warden of the East at the time, organized a rebellion against the linyera family, after winning Bennet sets up his own government with the three Masters of Sword, Coin and Word in 169 A.R.

    Who are the Order of Aradin?:
    A weak group of people formed to protect the Chancellor and address the threat of Bloodstone Island.

    What are the Net and Essence?:
    The net is a magical force that prevents falling from the island and keeps the belongings of the falling being to the bing itself therefore keeping all the living beings on the islands safe from falling to their doom. Essence is a sort of mana which is used for spells and magic, it can also be stored in emeralds an used as a currency.

    What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?:
    I have played on your early server book of Halegron by the name Oirc8520 and from then till now i had earned even more roleplaying expirience.

    If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left:
    I have played to many RP server to count. I was moving from server to server to find a decent strict RP server but i didnt manage to stumble across one since all of them were more focused on raids than Roleplaying, untill i remember a server i played long time ago, the book of halegron.



    Character Information

    Name: Ellard

    Age: Specific Age unknown but he is old

    Class:
    Craftsman, Although i would really appreciate a class that focuses on books and writing since i am planning on writing in the future and i read that sadly craftsman cant craft books and paper.

    Physical description:A white old man with brown eyes , huge old white beard and a constant serious look

    Screen capture of your skin:
    http://i.imgur.com/JymioZA.png

    Biography (Minimum 400 words. Cannot include loved ones being killed, kidnapped, tortured, or the like, unless you can do it in a non-cliche manner.):
    As a kid, Ellard had a pretty regular life, he came from an educated familiy and had 6 brothers and sisters, he was the youngest one, his mom was a cook and his dad was a smith, his brothers and sisters were seeing up to following their parent's path but Ellard, Ellard was special he always used to sit in his bedroom and just play with his sandclocks that he made himself, he always seemed to be in a hurry and always were busy in something, he liked reading books and e even wrote one when he was 4, a typical child's book toughEllard, being obsessed in time as a teen was ussualy spending his time in the clock tower in his town, Ellard always had been living a peacful way of live and had never witnessed a murder or violence in his town. as time grew Ellard became an adult and starting expiriencing with pwerful temporal magic to divine all possible futures, hoping to find a peacful solution for the future wars. But Ellard's enchantments affected his perception of the passage of time and when it was to late Ellar found himself in a contemplative stasis. Ellard barely had time to grieve the momentous loss before he learned that his dangerous research had a cruel side-effect ; chrono-displasia. the mystical desease has granted him a much longer life span, but detached his consciousness from its anchor in the present time. he was caught in a time vortex. which made him lose his memory an grow much bigger in age, he lost his great physical abilitty and became an old man with a long beard, he forgot everything he knew prior the vortex. The only thing he had from the past time was his pen which was embarcked with his name "Ellard". But the urge to discover more an to mess with time was still in him. untill this day Ellard is wandering slowly and safely aroun the kingom to iscover more about his destiny Ellard hopes to find the secret of time and hopes to have the abillity to control it. Whilst traveling around the kingdom Ellard looks to find out about his past knowing that if he would be able to understand his past, he would be able to understand the future. "The is no greater grief than for a loss that is yet to come" -Ellard

    What is your character’s main goal? (Motivation):
    Discover his past, uncover the secrets of time and learn to use it for peaceful meanings, pass his knowlege to others and overall make the humanity thrive with intelligence.

    Strengths (Both physical and personality):
    Well, he's an old guy, not really anything to say about physical strenghts, but, he is a serious guy, when he decides to do something he will stick to it until he's done, he's always calm and spends most of his time reading and writing books.

    Weaknesses (Both physical and personality. Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness. IE not knowing how to use bows and magic, if you are a swordsman.):
    His weakness is physical ofcourse, he has bad hearing and can sometimes need more than one try to hear something, dont expect him to fight in the front lines in his city altough he will do whatever he can to help.

    Does your character have any connections to currently-existing characters or characters yet to be accepted? If so, which? (See “Character Linking Aid”. Please post a link to the topic.):
    No, Atleast Ellard doeasnt know about any, i guess i could discover new connections in the process of my roleplay.


    In-Character-Responses (ICRs. For each scenario, write at least a paragraph describing entirely in-character how your character would respond to the situation.Your ICRs will be used to see how well you can RP. Please post them as if in IC chat. An example can be found after this form.)


    Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
    *Ellard notices two men harrasing a young girl, he sees the girl is nothing more but a child and immideatly reacts* "Leave my grand-daughter alone!" *Ellard attracts the attention of the men to himself* "Aren't ya lads dont see this girl is young for this stuff, dont you have wives and kids home? I would be ashamed if i was you, ya better leave 'er fast or else you're going to have some problems with the capitol guard, *Lie* I may look old but i have the legs and heart of a lion, i could easily outrun you both without any sweat, you'll be in the prison in the matter of seconds if you dont leave the girl alone" *while Ellard was talking the girl took the opportunity of the men being distracted and ran away as far as she could* "Now go away from here, i dont want to see yer spoiled faces again anytime soon. *Ellard proceeds to walk confidently in between thoese guys as the guys look at him with confused faces*

    A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded.
    *Ellard stops after seeing a man approaching him, he turns to the man with his arms crossed behind his back* "Hmm?" *After listening to what the man had to say to him Ellard responses with:* "Well excuse me young lad. Ya see, i barely heard half of ye'r sentence but i am assuming you want me to go somewhere and do something, well if you would look at me closer, im to old for thoese kind o' stuff, and if i did go there the time it would take the old man to get there wouldnt probably be worth it ya see? you should look for a younger guy, a one who can do the work more properly, Now please excuse me, i have to get to the library, i have important matter to be done"

    You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
    Whilst walking, Ellard notices a starving beggar laying on the street. *slowly turns to the man whilst holding his arms behind his back* *Ellard gets a condoling feeling for the man and feels sorry for the poor guy, Ellard quickly takes his right arm and shoves it into his pocket, after a while of searching he gets 13 coins,slowly ducks and hands them to the beggar* "ye'r should find a place to sleep mate, it's not very comfy on the streets,ya? here, take those coins, grab some food and buy a room, ya still got a lot ahead of you, dont give up on yer life mate!" *Ellard escorts the man to a local tavern, makes sure he gets a room and food, and than kindly leaves without waiting for the man to thank him*

    In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
    *Raises his big white eyebrown towards the brat* "Tell me kid, how old are ya, aint you to mature for thoese kind of insults? I forgive you yes, but other people might have not, so be carefull pal" *points at the most muscular, evil looking guy in the pub* "you should be more carefull with yer mouth pal!" *gives a coin to the guy* "Here! have a drink on me!" *slightly smiles at the guy* and Ellard would carry on with his doings.

    You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
    *Elard smiles whilst noticing the necklace*"Well rip my beard off, this is the most beatiful necklace i ever saw" *coming closer to observe the necklace* "-Thank you" "-Oh, Dont thank ME, thank the guy who gave it to you, it just adds a touch to your beauty, if i would be you young lady i'd keep it in a chest somewhere safe in my house, there are some people around here who might want and snatch that little beauty, and madam might get hurt" Ellard than would nicely smile and part ways with the lady, he would carry on walking thinking to himself "Well that's a fine looking lady, she could be my daughter"


    Do you have any questions about the server or our lore?
    Yes, is this Possible for me to somehow get into writing since it's a big part of my character and i would really much appreciate it.

    Other notes: Good luck reading :D , sorry for any kind of typo's.
    Posted in: PC Servers
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    posted a message on :::MC OLYMPICS::: Fully-automated 24/7 Events Server! Come play your favorite MC events! [Spleef][FFA][CTF][TDM][Much more...]
    Im defenatly joining but i dont know the server info
    Posted in: PC Servers
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    posted a message on Custom Map Builders Wanted
    IGN :oric8520
    Skype (required):maximyakushew
    Best Designs:http://www.planetmin...-bhawan-palace/
    Age:14

    i also have a decent redstone knowlage so i can do that too :)

    EDIT: actually after seeing the whole post, i can do all of the jobs, im expirienced in all of them so i guess ill have a lot to give
    Posted in: Maps
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    posted a message on Minecraft server: Hunger Games, Spleef, CTF and more!
    I cant get on the server, why?
    Posted in: PC Servers
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    posted a message on New small survival server DerpCraft Whitelist only
    IGN:oric8520
    Age:15
    Why you want to join the server:i always wanted a small server to make some friends and play with them
    Will you follow rules:ofcourse!
    Posted in: PC Servers
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    posted a message on † T H E B O O K O F H A L E G R O N † ENTER THE WORLD OF ÅRÆTHON! † ROLEPLAY † WHITELIST † NATIONS † WAR †
    damn it, i think my spawn is far away from the server's spawn cuase i slept in a bed, and usualy when i travel long distances i die, eoither die or go out of food...and then die, is there anyway to solve this?

    EDIT: Scratch that, im quite close to the spawn, just found out about it
    Posted in: PC Servers
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    posted a message on † T H E B O O K O F H A L E G R O N † ENTER THE WORLD OF ÅRÆTHON! † ROLEPLAY † WHITELIST † NATIONS † WAR †
    i edited my last post and did my best to make a good Biography for an orc character :), one question if i do get accepted as an orc, ill restart like a new character from the spawn, right?
    Posted in: PC Servers
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    posted a message on † T H E B O O K O F H A L E G R O N † ENTER THE WORLD OF ÅRÆTHON! † ROLEPLAY † WHITELIST † NATIONS † WAR †

    OOC Information



    Username:


    oric8520
    Age:
    16
    

Country/Time Zone:
    UTC/GMT +2 hours

    

Define Roleplay:
    Pretending to be something or most likely some that you are not always in real life, therefore, a boy that roleplays can pretend that he is a mighty warrior that slays a dragon even if he's just a boy in real life, roleplay consist of realistic actions fitting to the charter that is played, for example, if someone roleplays a medieval warrior, the warrior most likely wont grab a shotgun and shoot the dragons face, he will probably use a sword or any other kind of weapon that was avaliable at thoese times

    

What is Meta-gaming?:


    Meta gaming is using knowlege that you know in real life but your roleplay character doesnt knows, for example, secret locations and hidden temples that the roleplay character never heard about and never really saw one, but you still go to it cause you know there is such a thing from real life, that is Meta gaming

    What is Power-gaming?:


    Power gaming is forcing Roleplay, which means creating actions that cant be reacted upon by other roleplayers, for example, "oric8520 comes to [player] and pounds him to death" the [player] cant react to this situation cause basicaly oric8520 just decided the whole phase of the roleplay for his own good.

    Who can use flymod?:


    Only the players who are responsible to the server such as owners and admins in cases they need to fix something or add something to the server

    IC Information



    Character Name:


    Gorgutz
    Character Race:


    Orc (or Ork, dont know which is better)
    Character Class:
    Warrior
    Character Role (out of the set roles):

    Soldier
    

Character Biography (should be at least 250 words):

    Personality:

    Gorgatz is huge,dumb,ugly,living chunk of meat that all it cares about is blood and gore, he tends to speak in 3rd person ("Gorgutz likes melons, Gorgutz loves cats") and gets mad when it comes to insulting him or acussing him for something he is not.

    Bio:
    Gorgutz was born into a warrior family like the rest of his tribe, his family was always going on hunting inorder to get some food to the tribe, Gorgutz as a baby was satisfied, he liked sharp things and always got himself hurt.

    As a child, Gorgutz wasnt educated and he didnt knew how to read and how to write and the little language he learned was from the daily life of his tribe (not that his tribe was very educated either).
    he always broke his plush toys and kept the heads in his closet, he laughed after every toy he "slayed", mysteriously enough, his cat toy survived, infact, it wasnt even touched, Gorgutz could sit all day and play with his cat toy without killing it.

    As a teen, Gorgutz was already 1.8 meters tall, he had a face that only his momma would recognize and love, teeth sticking out of his jaw, stinking breath coming out of his jaw, a necklace on his neck, with 3 of his "slain" toys heads, a hammer in one hand and a big stone in the other one, and once again, a tribal war began, Gorgutz insisted helping his tribe to fight but the tribe made it without him only with small injuries here and there, as he grew up his family grew older too, and in the end his parents were no longer capable of war and stayed home to take care of the children, Gorgutz was now one of the warriors of the tribe.

    as years passed Gorgutz surived more and more wars, with scars all over his body and face, he became even taller and uglier than ever, he decided to buy himself an axe and some armor, and go find the tribe that always atacked him, one night when every body were a sleep, Gorgutz "sneaked" with his massive body near another Orcish camp, prepared him self, and after a moment all the camp could hear it..

    "WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaagh!!!!!!"

    Gorgutz rushed screaming into the camp and began butchering everybody there, bloodshed everybody, body parts flying around, on the rise, Gorgutz was the only one left in the camp, all the rest either, hid, ran away or died, there is where he decided to call himself, "Gorgutz" (try thinking what two words this name has in it), the wars between his tribe and other tribes stopped and the was peace on the land, gorgutz which was a little baby back then, is now, a mercy-less killer which is interested solely in blood in gore, when he rages his eyes becomes blood-red and noone can stop him from his spree, the necklace which he one wore, is now full of real heads and not toy ones, his breath is heavy and his walking is slow and steady.

    He left his tribe, in order to find a bigger place to live in, he heard about Araethon.

    A new journey begins....

    

What are your character's ambitions:


    To unleash his mighty "WAagh!!!" on anyone who stands on his way and to enjoy it
    What are your character's strengths?:
    2.3 meters tall killing machine which only cares about doing his job and when he begins he never stops until he's done.

    Gorgutz says: "Imugin a humin hed, now imugin Gorgutz popping it wit his two bear hendz"

    

What are your character's weaknesses?:


    He has a short temper, he really dumb and ugly, spiders scare him but if he needs to, he'll smash one like a raisin
    What are your character's fears?:
    Spiders
    A guard walks up to you and tells you that you have been convicted of treason. What is your reaction?:

    Gorgutz gets all red, mad and angry, he grabs the guard by his neck and says:"Trison you say?! Du You know whu I am?! I AM THE MAYTI GORGUTZ!! How dare you to tell mi i am trisonin?!" without even knowing what treason is Gorgutz proceeds to smash the guard into the ground and walk away.

    I did my best trying to find a fitting story to my character, hope it's enough. :)
    Posted in: PC Servers
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    posted a message on † T H E B O O K O F H A L E G R O N † ENTER THE WORLD OF ÅRÆTHON! † ROLEPLAY † WHITELIST † NATIONS † WAR †
    I see there are only 3 orcs in the server and the rest races have tons of players in them, is it possible for me to make another application as an orc and pretty much "dump" my human character?
    Posted in: PC Servers
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    posted a message on † T H E B O O K O F H A L E G R O N † ENTER THE WORLD OF ÅRÆTHON! † ROLEPLAY † WHITELIST † NATIONS † WAR †
    Quote from Yhitazzz

    OOC Information




    Username:



    oric8520

    Age:

    16

    

Country/Time Zone:


    UTC/GMT +2 hours


    

Define Roleplay:

    Pretending to be something or most likely some that you are not always in real life, therefore, a boy that roleplays can pretend that he is a mighty warrior that slays a dragon even if he's just a boy in real life, roleplay consist of realistic actions fitting to the charter that is played, for example, if someone roleplays a medieval warrior, the warrior most likely wont grab a shotgun and shoot the dragons face, he will probably use a sword or any other kind of weapon that was avaliable at thoese times

    

What is Meta-gaming?:



    Mete gaming is using knowlege that you know in real life but your roleplay character doesnt knows, for example, secret locations and hidden temples that the roleplay character never heard about and never really saw one, but you still go to it cause you know there is such a thing from real life, that is Meta gaming

    What is Power-gaming?:



    Power gaming is forcing Roleplay, which means creating actions that cant be reacted upon by other roleplayers, for example, "oric8520 comes to [player] and pounds him to death" the [player] cant react to this situation cause basicaly oric8520 just decided the whole phase of the roleplay for his own good.

    Who can use flymod?:



    Only the players who are responsible to the server such as owners and admins in cases they need to fix something or add something to the server

    IC Information




    Character Name:



    Taylor

    Character Race:



    Human

    Character Class:

    Craftsman
    Character Role (out of the set roles):

    Rare gems collector

    

Character Biography (should be at least 250 words):

    Taylor as a yound kid, was very energetic, he had many friends and always had something to do, he was a creative and smart little boy. He was obsessed wih shiny things, especialy his mother's ruby necklace, sometimes he used to climb up all the way with hiss little feet to the closet, jsut to "borrow" the necklace and play with it.
    As Taylor grew up he learned new things, such as a little of blacksmithing which he learned from his uncle Ulfric, some speech-skill which he learned from his aunt Viola and some mechanics which he learned from his dad.
    Taylors favourite subject was ofcourse mechanics, not thoese kind of huge electrical machines, the smaller ones, such as a wheel and a bow, but Taylor was abmitious for more, and always was trying to find out and discover new things.
    Ofcourse, lets not forget Taylor's obssesion for sparkles.

    Taylor was already 16 years old and was already ready for his first mining expedition, while the expedition was going, Taylor got a little side track into a small hole in the wole, he saw something red and shiny in it, he couldnt wait and rushed to it, he moved some rocks and discovred a soft, red kind of rock, the rock was filled with veins of some kind of powder, Taylor couldnt hold it in and took a bit of the strange powder into a small jar he had in his backpack.

    Later that week, Taylor was blacksmithing and helping his uncle Ulfric, when by mistake he pushed his backpack from the table and the jar with the powder broke, all his notes jumped straight into the blacksmith's fire, but a little bit of the strange dust fell on the ground near it, Taylor saw it, he noticed it was glowing, a very deer, red glow, he was amazed, he tried putting it in other places but it only worked near fire.
    "This dust is glowing only when it is nearby a fire, maybe i can use that!"
    He immideatly began testing, he tried heating stuff with it, smelting it into ore, feeding it to his neighbours dog, which then died of an "unknown" stomach deseasem nothing was succsessfull, until one time when he decided to put sewing machine near it, the sewing machine went crazy and started spinning and shaking and ...Working!

    Taylor was stunned! he found a dust which powers things! all by itself! it could change worlds and generations!

    Taylor put the dust back into the jar, and went exploring, while he was exploring he found out a small cave, he began searching for this unknown dust, he searched, and searched, and searched, he even risked his life jumping over a small lava pit, he had no rest until he found it, the glorious stone, he took a bunch of it and ran back home excited, at home he started creating, a nudge by nudge, first the sewing machine, than some doors, then tylor tried putting a panel on a box with a pusher mechanism, it was called piston thoese days, the dust actually made it move!
    After deep searching in the library, he found out that this strange powder is calle dredstonek, and that there are more experts of it in other city's especialy in araethon.
    This is where he aimed to go to, to learn more about this strange and amazing powder and to know how to use it for good

    Months passed and taylor was locked up in his room trying to figure out what he can do with the red powder, he tried to contact araethon, see if its possible to move inside, he found out that there is still plenty of places to live and the land is rich with culture and races, he began preparing. as he stayed inside the house, his friends kept steering away from him, him became lonely, but he didnt worried about it, cause all he needed at that time was redstone.

    Some people called him crazy....

    Now, his new journey begins, as he became 19 he left his house and went onto a journey to araethon inorder to learn more about that mystical powder, Taylor remained curious, and the rest will be found out.


    

What are your character's ambitions:



    to collect the rarest gems he can find and to become the world's greatest redstone engineer

    What are your character's strengths?:

    Open minded, Intelligent and creative, has decent skill with speech and trading

    

What are your character's weaknesses?:



    Shy, never been into a real fight,bad cook

    What are your character's fears?:

    Legend of herobrine, losing his family, and ofcourse, death
    A guard walks up to you and tells you that you have been convicted of treason. What is your reaction?:

    Since Taylor is a polite and quiet person he would probably react like this:

    Well, my good sir, i dont see and reason for me beeing acused for treason, after all, i live in this city, i love it, i really do, it supplies me food and a rood, why should i do such a horrible thing? im sure its a misunderstanding and if it really is, i forgiv you for your mistake, we are all at the same side right? nobody's perfect. if the guard would still ask me to come with him, i would ask for solid proof or evidence that shows me im guilty, if the guards wont show me any proofs u would beg their pardon and leave. :)


    i think this should work, i fixed everything that i fount unrelative and un fitting
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    posted a message on † T H E B O O K O F H A L E G R O N † ENTER THE WORLD OF ÅRÆTHON! † ROLEPLAY † WHITELIST † NATIONS † WAR †
    Quote from jacobom

    I see there are no Orcs applying... This is getting quite annoying as whenever I am on the server I am generally the only Orc ever on...


    Well, is it possible for a human to walk around the orc city? i mean, if its not trespassing, ill give you some company if i get white listed :)
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    posted a message on † T H E B O O K O F H A L E G R O N † ENTER THE WORLD OF ÅRÆTHON! † ROLEPLAY † WHITELIST † NATIONS † WAR †
    Thank you for replying for my application, i did my best and fixed it as i could, and yes :) Ulfric Stormcloack, i play a lot of skyrim too :)

    EDIT: almost forgot, since im a human i can be a guard so i have no problem wth it aslong as its temportary and not permament

    i am having problems ataching the application ot this message as it quotes wrong, so sadyl you'll have to search for it on the previous page :(, sorry
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