First off, this comment isn't constructive criticism and is pretty useless. Plus your statement of 'bland areas' and 'complaints about the late monument', while may be valid complaints, it doesn't define the map as 'bad'. If you want to play a bad CTM map, have a go at making your own, before making an account to shun people who try.
Secondly, the map overall isn't bad. While the builds aren't refined and a lot of areas have boxy or redundant design choices, fundamentally, the map is pretty good. The monument being late is NOT a bad thing, as it adds an aspect to the map in making sure that not only are you getting out of the areas with the wools, but you are also transporting them safely between intersections. As a very first CTM map, I'm excited that they finished a 16-wool map complete with genuine challenge.