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    posted a message on (WIP) The Wanderings of Sniilari (a story about snow golems and bad-guys from the nether)
    Here's my review.

    1. It isn't about damn Endermen, Notch, Steve, or Herobrine. Props to you.
    2. It's not about Endermen, Notch, Steve, or Herobrine. Props!!!!
    3. It's actually creative, and I can't copy+paste it to half the other stories here and end up reading the same story.

    Good job!



    (Yeah, it has endermen in it, but they aren't the main characters in the story.)
    Posted in: Literature
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    posted a message on The Legend of Enderbrine
    Quote from Superguin200


    Trust me, the story gets much more unpredictable from here on out. Also a bit confusing...


    Lemme guess.

    'Steve' is Herobrine.
    Herobrine will gather all the Endermen and rebel against Notch.
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    posted a message on The Legend of Enderbrine
    Herobrine and endermen. I can't believe you combined the two most cliche storylines together.

    Props for creativity. But in the end, it's still about Notch being god, Herobrine being his brother, and Endermen being Herobrine's minions. (I'm assuming the last note.)
    Posted in: Fan Art
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    posted a message on Letena (Lithuanian for something or another)
    Quote from minty115

    -bunchofcrapI'mnotquoting-


    If you ever get code like that do the following steps:
    1. Open Notepad
    2. Copy+Paste code into notepad
    3. file>Save as
    4. Save as type: All Files
    5. Save it as "anything.html" to your desktop
    6. Open anything.html on your desktop
    7. It won't be as pretty, but it will be readable.


    Alternatively, refresh your browser, or use a different browser.


    Also, Mage, I've read a few of your stories that you released about 5 months ago. They were pretty great, and the first paragraph of this one was as well. I'm busy writing my own story now, as well as getting distracted. Keep up the good work.

    Oh, and um, put a little more effort into the editing side. I like how your text size randomly changes.
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    posted a message on Bob's Story - 6 days till completion
    I added a bit of story to the end of Chapter 4!
    Posted in: Literature
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    posted a message on Bob's Story - 6 days till completion
    anti-troll has been initiated.


    Oh yeah, and I'm writing chapter 5 right now.
    Posted in: Literature
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    posted a message on Bob's Story - 6 days till completion
    Chapter 5 has taken an awful long time to write. Mainly because nobody is making the mods for me, so I'm making them myself.

    Oh yeah, I don't know Java, or the Minecraft code. Yep, teaching myself it as I go. So far I've got the wireless redstone down. It was pretty simple, really.

    Teleport button should be EXTREMELY easy.

    Boombox.. Eh, maybe alittle extra time. One I completely finish wireless redstone and add in the trigger block, I'll finish Chapter 5.



    tl;dr Chapter 5 will be up tomorrow!
    Posted in: Literature
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    posted a message on I will make skins for free CLOSED FOR GOOD check out my gallery! Thats not closing!
    So I'm gonna be kinda picky here. And I'm goint to request two skins. I know, I'm so horrible. They're for my adventure map, I want players to have the best experience playing it, so I need a couple skins people can use when they play it, if they want to. (Plus, I'll definitely be using them myself. :D)

    Because they are from a story I wrote, I have no images of them. And I can't draw for the life of me, so I'll just describe them both as best I can. I'm a writer, I should be able to do it I guess..

    The first would of course be the main protagonist, Bob.

    Seeing as he's homeless, I want his clothes to reflect that. I'll describe him, but most of his clothes will be a little ragged/torn. Just saying ahead of time.

    Uhh, black shoes. Not much more to em, they were cheap.
    Blue Jeans
    Brown Jacket with a dull blue shirt underneath.
    Hazel eyes, or brown. You choose. :)
    Lighter brown, shaggy hair.


    Again, his clothes will for the most part be dull, ragged, torn. I want him to look, well, homeless. Despite eventually becoming y'know, a legend of sorts.

    As for Alice, she came from a better life, and her clothes are much neater and not torn/ragged. Now I gotta design some women's clothing... Bleh, I'm not good with this. :(

    Long, flowing red hair. Quoted from story. :)
    Deep blue eyes, again quoted from story.
    A scar on the left side of her chin, if you could get that in without it looking.. weird.

    As for her clothing. Yeah, no. I can't think of anything at all. She's a 17 year old girl. What I do know, is boots+jeans+black shirt. I'm not sure about much else. I'll leave you and your imagination alone here. Just remember she's a fairly nervous, shy girl at times. She's a little nerdy-ish, but not too noticable.

    Thanks in advance! And again, your skins will be distributed with the adventure map I am working on, as well as within the thread that contains my story. They will, of course be credited to you, with a link to this thread. Just letting you know ahead of time. Your skins look AWESOME!
    Posted in: Skins
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    posted a message on Sig for THIS MOD!!!
    http://www.minecraft...3#entry13966103

    Really?

    Must you beg for a sig for every mod you make? Sure, they're different mods, but you say the exact same thing when asking for both.

    And neither are even worth putting that much time into it. Take a picture of the items, put em on a black screen, write your sig name on it. Problem solved. Make a really great mod, then you can ask for sigs.
    Posted in: Fan Art
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    posted a message on [Story] Disciples of the First (Sequel to My Story, My Adventure) [June 20 Update]
    Quote from marquini67

    *facepalm* First, I do have paragraphs. Second, colors... are you serious. Third, the reason the paragraphs are so long is that this is story/novel hybrid, hence the long paragraphs.
    *sigh* You guys are driving me up the wall...


    You don't get it, do you? Here, I'll explain a little more in depth so you can understand this simple idea.


    Your paragraphs HAVE NO SPACING BETWEEN THEM. Yes, you have paragraphs, but they are NOT spaced, and on forums do not format properly, and just don't show as paragraphs. If you'll continue reading this useless paragraph that I filled with absolutely meaningless information, I'll be able to explain the problem to you in the next paragraph. For you see, the problem is not with the paragraphs, but rather what is between the two.
    As you can see here, I have two paragraphs. But there is no spacing between the paragraphs. If you'll continue to read this paragraph, which is also filled with meaningless information that nobody cares about, I'll explain what you should change, or add between the paragraphs.

    As you probably saw, that is incorrect.

    Your paragraphs HAVE NO SPACING BETWEEN THEM. Yes, you have paragraphs, but they are NOT spaced, and on forums do not format properly, and just don't show as paragraphs. If you'll continue reading this useless paragraph that I filled with absolutely meaningless information, I'll be able to explain the problem to you in the next paragraph. For you see, the problem is not with the paragraphs, but rather what is between the two.

    As you can see here, I have two paragraphs. But there is no spacing between the paragraphs. If you'll continue to read this paragraph, which is also filled with meaningless information that nobody cares about, I'll explain what you should change, or add between the paragraphs.

    As you can see here, there is a space BETWEEN paragraphs, allowing for one to easier tell where the paragraphs actually are, and it splits up the text.


    And yes, colours. While black is universally acceptable, other brighter colours can change how people are feeling. Black typically makes people feel however, just neutral. Bright, vibrant colours make people happy. Dark, gloomy colours make people feel down.


    You can keep using black, it won't make a difference except in how people feel as they read your story. But if you actually want people to continue reading your story, you need to use spacing between paragraphs.
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    posted a message on [1.2.5] [SSP] [Forge] Upgrade Tools V1.5 (Now with forge!)
    You really want a mod review, so I'll give you one.


    The first thing to say, is that it is NOT worth a mod review. You said it yourself, it's your first mod. If you expect it to be worth anything, you've picked the wrong thing to have as a hobby. You can't pick up programming, and instantly have a good mod.

    To be honest, the mod sucks. It's absolutely horrendous. Just like EVERY OTHER MODDERS FIRST MOD. My first mod sucked, and I could barely make my second mod. Neither of which were even good enough to release. They were just a couple shelves/extended chests with minimal GUIs. I'm working on my third now, only because I have to for my adventure map. Modding alone, is difficult because you are using somebody elses code. It's essentially like learning a brand new programming language.

    It's definitely not worth the sig you are begging for, and it's definitely not worth a thorough mod review. Sorry, but it's your first. With practice, you can make nice things, but not off the bat.
    Posted in: Minecraft Mods
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    posted a message on Slime Chunk Finding - Without Tools nor the Seed
    If they don't tell you the math, chances are they probably don't know it.

    And without having the seed, trying to solve anything in the world is like solving the algorithm

    x=x y=y z=z

    x+y=z

    What is x/y/z?
    Posted in: Discussion
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    posted a message on Which is the most powerful hostile mob?
    Most POWERFUL mob? Charged creeper/Ghast take the cake.

    Most SKILLED mob? Skeletons, by far.

    Most DANGEROUS mob? None, really.. They're all pretty easy to kill once you get used to it. But I'd have to say in a 1v1 fight, spider jockeys. They can typically hit you once or twice before you kill them. I rarely get hit by anything else, so I'd say skeletons in a 1v1.

    Most dangerous mob in a group? Cave spiders, by far. If you run into 5 cave spiders, and they all start attacking you. You're as good as dead, unless you conveniently have milk. But who really carries milk with them..

    In a free-for-all brawl of all the hostile mobs, this is how I believe it would go down.

    1. The creeper would blow itself up, killing nothing but damaging a few mobs. First idiot, I mean mob, to die.

    2. Slimes and Magma cubes would be the next to fall. They're rather worthless.

    3. Cave spider, and silver fish the next. Having similar AIs, and just rushing EVERYTHING stupidly, they would deal minimal damage and die. Alone, both are rather worthless. It's their being in a group that is scary.

    4. Cave spider's poison would kill off a skeleton that just killed a regular spider.

    5. The ghast and blaze would kill off the rest of the mobs, without a doubt.

    6. Ghast is immune to Blazes.
    Posted in: Discussion
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    posted a message on [REQ] Bleach Mod
    Quote from LittleBreadLoaf

    Ok, we'll see how much we want to put in this mod, and just start with the basics first. I don't want to end up with a mod that has way too much content, where you can't walk 5 steps without running into some random new mod. And we could just throw in ulquiorra as a random guy just because....
    As for leveling up the Zanpakuto, I was thinking that there should be some way of transferring your levels onto it to level it up, and when it gets to a certain level you can activate Shikai/Bankai. It would be something like the Enchanting Table, but you put your sword in the slot, and can simply move levels from your level bar thing onto the sword in increments of five or so, and they would stay on the sword. Just an idea.



    It would probably be better if the Sword itself became stronger the more often you connected with it.
    IE: Using it's special moves, entering it's dimension, etc.
    The 'stronger' it becomes doesn't dictate how much damage it does, but the abilities that you would unlock, so to speak. There would be training your own reiatsu, and training your zanpakutou. They are two different things. Take Kenpachi, for example.

    Kenpachi on his own is just as strong as he is with his Zanpakutou. Though he does eventually make an effort, it's too late for him to fix the errors he made. Clearly, using purely brute strength could increase your own speed and strength to immense heights, or in this case just your level. But you would need to connect with your zanpakutou to level it up, such as is seen many times as Ichigo is brought into Zangetsu's dimension multiple times.


    A Bleach mod would definitely be a very difficult mod to create. If I had any experience with modding, I'd help out. All I can do is offer design tips. :( I'm definitely going to use this mod when it's finished though!
    Posted in: Requests / Ideas For Mods
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