Hey I was just wondering, when will someone be whitelisting accepted players again? I would like to play on this server as much as the next guy, but I'll take every chance I get. See I don't have any other servers I play on, so I am watching this forum everyday to check when you guys are whitelisting.
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Ok, now that I have your attention you must feel terrible acknowledging that you just read the previous sentence. Congrats, you will never get this 10 seconds of your life back... umad?!?!
Hey SpartanLaserX1 I sent you a message about what Enclave branch I would like to be in, because you accepted me but I don't think you read my message after you added the 101st Hellfire devision. Also why are Enady and someone else saying "were whitelisting send us the page you were accepted and your ign" but nobody is getting whitelisted, as far as I know.
Ok non whitelisters only give out tips please or be quiet i dont want to hear your paragraph is too short let the whitelisters deal with that.
That is a tip. Infact that is one of the biggest tips to offer because nobody is making theirs long enough. Unless a member of the staff says don't help them, then we have all the right.
IGN:GM_Setsuna
Age:13
Role-Play Exp.:More or less will stick to rping
Why Us:I chose This server because it has guns and vehicles
Time You Can Dedicate:i can play on fri-Sundays for 2-3 hours
IC
Name:John
Gender:Male
Age:19
Appearance:a desert camo soldier
Fears:None so far...
Personality:
Occupation:None
Skills:Assassination and Long range shots and a good fighter
Nickname (Optional):(whatever they choose to call me)
RP Example (Add Dialogue):I like to stick with a group and help them prosper in return i get any type of resources that are useful and if they betray me its war."How dare you, Mark my words i will have revenge!"I said
"Well good luck(chuckles)!!!"laughed the king.
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs):Born in the Gibson desert, John learned to survive in the intense heat and survived with little or no water, he ate whatever he could hunt and/or find. He was an lonely as he grew up because his mother died when she gave birth to him and his father died when he was 9. Sooner or later a group of cave dwellers let him in his household and taught him the technology in the world. They taught him how to shoot guns and his favorite was the assault rifle and the sniper his most favorite thing about technology was the vehicles. He yearned to know how it helped you move faster or how it flew, his life was wonderful...for now... Soon a group of criminals took "shelter" in his new home and finished off the people, while John was still young and scared he hid, after a couple hours he came out sad, and...vengeful, He murdered off all the criminals and took what he could and left never looking back... He moved on a found a small tribe called Atychia to look foward to.
The tribe was suspicious when they saw the boy, but soon they warmed up to them when John taught them about technology or "magic" as so the tribe called it, after warming up to the Atychians they soon called them selves the Tycheros. He grew up in the new tribe and thought about leaving and exploring the world when he was 17. The Tycherians were going to miss him so they gave him food and water and weapons to protect him in his journey. He was also given the latest map and he used it well, he pinpointed to find the correct place to live in and so after 20 days and nights he soon found his new home, his new home named (the name of the new home will be the name of which group i join).
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I can't promise you that they will accept, but this is better. I still noticed some sentences that didn't make sense, or missing comas (,) or periods. There doesn't seem to be any whitelisters on so repost tomarrow.
IGN:GM_Setsuna
Age:13
Role-Play Exp.:More or less will stick to rping
Why Us:I chose This server because it has guns and vehicles
Time You Can Dedicate:i can play on fri-Sundays for 2-3 hours
IC
Name:John
Gender:Male
Age:19
Appearance:a desert camo soldier
Fears:None so far...
Personality:
Occupation:None
Skills:Assassination and Long range shots and a good fighter
Nickname (Optional):(whatever they choose to call me)
RP Example (Add Dialogue):I like to stick with a group and help them prosper in return i get any type of resources that are useful and if they betray me its war."How dare you, Mark my words i will have revenge!"I said
"Well good luck(chuckles)!!!"laughed the king.
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs):Born in the desert, John learned to survive in the intense heat and survived with little or no water, he ate whatever he could hunt and/or find. He was an lonely as he grew up because his mother died when he gave birth to him and his father died when he was 9. Sooner or later a group of cave dwellers let him in his household and taught him the technology in the world. They taught him how to shoot guns and his favorite was the assault rifle and the sniper his most favorite thing about technology was the vehicles. He yearned to know how it helped you move faster or how it flew, his life was wonderful...for now... Soon a group of criminals took "shelter" in his new home and finished off the people, while John was still young and scared he hid, after a couple hours he came out sad, and...vengeful, He murdered off all the criminals and took what he could and left never looking back...
Im sorry if the paragraph is short squeky516,but i added dialouge for the rp example.
Yeah well it is too short my friend. You are going to have to fix that or they will deny you, and thats no fun. Also some advice, specify place of birth and what desert or is it already the Mojave desert?. Also I laughed so hard right here "He was an lonely as he grew up because his mother died when he gave birth to him" Your mother is a male!? So yeah add about another paragraph to your backstory and you should be good. Be sure to read over it so theres not any spelling/grammar mistakes.
Role-Play Exp.:I've been on alot of roleplay servers and i am looking for something new and this looks perfect
Why Us:Because i need another good roleplay server that would be exciting and adventurous
Time You Can Dedicate: 4:30/5:00PM to 9:00PM middle school
IC
Name:John Emerson
Gender:Male
Age:23
Appearance: black hair blue eyes
Fears:Anything thats too much
Personality:Energetic
Occupation:Traveler/Trader
Skills:Talkng way out of bad situatons and pretty good with a pistol
Nickname (Optional):
RP Example (Add Dialogue):I can sell almost anything to anyone and have a nice time doing it but in crossfire you dont want to be against me
Backstory My dad was a wealthy man who got in trouble with people because of debts. One day a general from the Enclave came and killed my dad and kidnapped my mother and sister I quickly fled and took my dads pistol I learned how to talk my way out of sticky situations and have been trading old scraps as much as i can
Okay so I am not a whitelister, but you would get denied no doubt. Your backstory is not even a paragraph long, and has minor grammar errors. First off your backstory has to be your WHOLE life, from when you were born to where you are now. "a wealthy man who got in trouble because of debts" So if he is wealthy then how come he just didn't pay them off? Also where were you born? And what was the debt your father had with the Enclave? You really need to add alot to you backstory, elaborate as much as possible.
IGN: lgitshottz
Age: 14
Role-Play Exp.: Multiple minecraft servers
Why Us: I have enjoyed the fallout series and this server looks like alot of fun
Time You Can Dedicate: maybe 1 - 2 hrs per day
IC
Name: Kody
Gender: Male
Age: 21
Appearance: 6"1, Dirty Blonde, Fit
Fears: Multiple Radicatied Animals
Personality: Funny, Good , Mannered, Peaceful at first.
Occupation: Freelancer
Skills: Sniper, Assassin, Medic, Mechanic, Good with picking locks and Hacking into computer terminals.
Nickname (Optional): ColdHeart
RP Example (Add Dialogue):(Asked by BoS to Kill a High Ranking Officer) Me: "The Deal is... most interesting but, for my services i will need a bigger... Paycheck" (BoS Paladin Responds by a 500 cap increase in the job payment) Me: Alright but i want 250 up front and 250 once the job is completed" (BoS sighs and accepts to the terms) Me: Well its been a pleasure working with you"
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): Coming from a Ex-NCR soilder status, I've been struggling to find work, with no means of income i turned to the Freelancing or Mercenary status. I was kicked out of the NCR after i refused to Execute a BoS Paladin, resulting in a backlash from officers i was striped of my rank and kicked out of the military. While trying to find a good area of work i was confronted by some old friends of the NCR and asked me to re-join the NCR, i replied with a simple no and asked if they knew any good fields of work i should have tried to join. my oldest friend, John said he knew some Mercenary who got paid quite alot of money for what they did. I took his offer and started becoming a Freelancer. The most common factions who would hire are the BoS and the Independance.
I'm not a whitelister, but your backstory is only a paragraph long, add another paragraph. Also don't start your backstory way later in your life, it has to be your whole entire life, from birth to where you are now. There are some grammar/spelling errors so revise those. Also factions don't need assasins as far as I know, and i'm sure the whitelisters would say the same.
IGN: Degrono
Age: 14
Role-Play Exp.: a lot of it
Why Us: because i'm a major fan of fallout
Time You Can Dedicate: any
IC
Name: Frost Shepard
Gender: male
Age:24
Appearance: tall, blue eyes, muscular, white, and Icy blue spike hair
Fears: what are these fears you talk about
Personality: kind, nice, helpful
Skills: melee, small weapons, Speech, Energy weapons, and Being a Badass
Nickname (Optional): Shepard
RP Example (Add Dialogue): "Why are the legion trying to take over the hoover dam?" as Frost Shepard ask the NCR ranger. "will kid in my years I've been in both the first and second Battles of hoover dam but never got a damn answer from the legion we capture." as the NCR ranger finish his Sentence bullets came flying from the Door way. "****....legion get ready Shepard... Shepard?" as the NCR looks where Frost was he was not there but was behind the group of legion with a Bloody knife in his hands "what were you saying"
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): Frost Shepard has being traveling though the wasteland since he was 5 when his parents got killed in-front of him. when he was 10 he got his first gun a 9mm pistol (also he was part of a gang Great khan for 2 years until he got kidnapped by the legion) from his friend for his birthday. when he was 16 he met his First love. her name was Maria and she was a 5'10 blue eyed model. until one day she was killed by a legion Assassin that was trying to kill Shepard. when he was 18 he found out about Maria Death 2 days after it happen. since then he want to get revenge on them. at age 20 he got into the stripe for the first time and found out that the legion assassin was hired by Benny. when he found out that Benny was already dead he felt sad that he didn't get a chance to say bye to his love or see the look on her face when she open the box that carried a Engagement ring. so at age 22 he went to help the NCR.
His Slave life: when he got kidnapped he was forced into Child labor for 1-4 caps per day that he work hard(which was barely ever) he was 12 when he got kidnapped from the Great khans and was to work for the legion as a slave. at age 13 he got a promote to be a hired guns for Caesar where he made 4-10 caps per hit he did. its was age 14 when the NCR took notice of him when he left a note on one of the dead Bodies of James lock a NCR ranger Saying:
Dear NCR,
I'm sorry for Killing James. i was forced to kill him for the legion i didn't want to do, Because his kids was watching me bust down the door and hold a 9mm to his head. i start hearing Crying. i looked its was his Daughter she look like she could be around the age of 4-5. in my head " dude what the hell are you doing. do not kill him" but before i could drop the gun. i shot it. his child would now have to live without a dad and i live with these Guilt forever.
Sincerely,
Frost Shepard
p.s. i need help i'm a slave for the legion so are 10 other 14 year old
when it was my 15th birthday i got saved by the NCR and was told that James was still alive. thank god for this. when the time came the NCR Housed him until he was ready to go back out to the Wasteland and live a normal life again.
So everything is good except your backstory, the length is fine but allow me to explain. First off, who killed his parents? And why didn't they kill you ext... And if his parents were killed when you were 5 how did you survive and where did you go? Where did you live this whole time, from 5-16? Why was Benny attempting to assasinate you? And the Legion don't accept assisnation requests "when he was 18 he found out about Maria Death 2 days after it happen." How did you not know your model girlfriend was dead man... thats a model... infact models don't exist in fallout i'm pretty sure. Also you say that you were in the Legion at 13, which when 16 you met your girlfriend. How did you meet her if she wasn't in the Legion? And why would the legion assasinate their own people? Theres alot more you need to fix, infact after all the grammar and spelling errors about 3/5 through I just gave up reading. There is so much wrong with you backstory it's not even funny. Nothing personal, but you might just want to re-write it, but like I said I am not a whitelister and don't have the same expectations as these guys. But they are even more strict than this sometimes.
IGN: the_gastly_ghost
Age: 15
Role-Play Exp.: alot of games, fallout 3 and new vegas oblivion, ect
Why Us: i love fallout
Time You Can Dedicate: weekends
IC
Name: Kahn
Gender: male
Age: 17
Appearance: strong, shy medium build
Personality: a sad loner
Occupation: none, see backstory
Skills: recon, and tech
rp examples: he was part of the ncr for awhile but now is not in any group, Kahn is a nomad basicly
Backstory (1-2 LONG paragraphs): well Kahn was a child of the Great Kahns he was taken from his family at a young age then, taken by bandits. he excaped from the bandits then when he got home he discovered the legion had distroyed his home, and killed his family. he now sets out to kill every last member of the legion
I'm not a whitelister, but heres what you need to fix. You need to have some sort of occupation (survivor or something). Your rp example is horrible and contains no dialogue. And you backstory is not even a paragraph long. Make it alot longer and it has to be your whole entire life, so elaborate.
Anyone here excited for Skyrim? I am keeping a countdown of the days and am going for midnight release because I loved Oblivion, and Morrowind. Theres no doubt Skyrim is going to be awsome.
Hey admins/mods I don't mean to question your authority, but why do you have to tell the person your attempting to kill 10 seconds before you can attack? I mean you don't really do that in Fallout, but there is battlecries. In my opinion it ruins pvp more than it makes it better. Also I can see a problem with this in the future (People who didn't read rules kills on sight, then victim cries about it) I am not asking you to change it, I just want to know why you chose to do this.
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Buddy I was accepted on page 324... I am talking about them whitelisting the already accepted players.
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ToxicSnowmen
Page accepted: 324
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Ok, now that I have your attention you must feel terrible acknowledging that you just read the previous sentence. Congrats, you will never get this 10 seconds of your life back... umad?!?!
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That is a tip. Infact that is one of the biggest tips to offer because nobody is making theirs long enough. Unless a member of the staff says don't help them, then we have all the right.
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I can't promise you that they will accept, but this is better. I still noticed some sentences that didn't make sense, or missing comas (,) or periods. There doesn't seem to be any whitelisters on so repost tomarrow.
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Yeah well it is too short my friend. You are going to have to fix that or they will deny you, and thats no fun. Also some advice, specify place of birth and what desert or is it already the Mojave desert?. Also I laughed so hard right here "He was an lonely as he grew up because his mother died when he gave birth to him" Your mother is a male!? So yeah add about another paragraph to your backstory and you should be good. Be sure to read over it so theres not any spelling/grammar mistakes.
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Okay so I am not a whitelister, but you would get denied no doubt. Your backstory is not even a paragraph long, and has minor grammar errors. First off your backstory has to be your WHOLE life, from when you were born to where you are now. "a wealthy man who got in trouble because of debts" So if he is wealthy then how come he just didn't pay them off? Also where were you born? And what was the debt your father had with the Enclave? You really need to add alot to you backstory, elaborate as much as possible.
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I'm not a whitelister, but your backstory is only a paragraph long, add another paragraph. Also don't start your backstory way later in your life, it has to be your whole entire life, from birth to where you are now. There are some grammar/spelling errors so revise those. Also factions don't need assasins as far as I know, and i'm sure the whitelisters would say the same.
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So everything is good except your backstory, the length is fine but allow me to explain. First off, who killed his parents? And why didn't they kill you ext... And if his parents were killed when you were 5 how did you survive and where did you go? Where did you live this whole time, from 5-16? Why was Benny attempting to assasinate you? And the Legion don't accept assisnation requests "when he was 18 he found out about Maria Death 2 days after it happen." How did you not know your model girlfriend was dead man... thats a model... infact models don't exist in fallout i'm pretty sure. Also you say that you were in the Legion at 13, which when 16 you met your girlfriend. How did you meet her if she wasn't in the Legion? And why would the legion assasinate their own people? Theres alot more you need to fix, infact after all the grammar and spelling errors about 3/5 through I just gave up reading. There is so much wrong with you backstory it's not even funny. Nothing personal, but you might just want to re-write it, but like I said I am not a whitelister and don't have the same expectations as these guys. But they are even more strict than this sometimes.
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I'm not a whitelister, but heres what you need to fix. You need to have some sort of occupation (survivor or something). Your rp example is horrible and contains no dialogue. And you backstory is not even a paragraph long. Make it alot longer and it has to be your whole entire life, so elaborate.
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Man your lucky I want to play.
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