I'm going to apply in a minute. This server looks absolutely beautiful, *sniff*
In Game Name: World_Hopper Age: 16 How did you find out about the server?: Cruisin through the MCForums. Have you played on the server already? Negative, I'm one of those people who reads through something then decides if I like it, I've decided I love this and so I don't want to play until I get the full, opportunity to, if you understand. What's rule #4?: No advertising, unless K'd by an Admin. Past Servers I've played on: Stronghold 2, Battle of Eldaran, Elsaria, Fallout: Wild Wastelanfd, CivRP, CraftHammer, LoTC, Etc... Special Key: 12ol6
Thanks for the compliments
And I've already received a tour of everything by Droogy and I must say; the human place is looking might fine! Also the Dryad tree is a bit too small, don't ya think?
Previous RP Experience: Fallout Servers: LOTC, CivRP, Battle of Eldaran, Mount & Blade mods, Etc...
Previous MC Experience: Playing since Alpha or so, I'm not very good with brewing or enchanting or any of the new stuff though.
Why I wish to join: I really love the races you've come up and have checked out the server and it seems to have lots of potential and seems great!
What I bring to the server: Besides my 5000 words of suggestion, I can bring an active player who loves to roleplay as much as possible, and another orc
In Character
Name: Grunkhalar
Age: 26
Gender: Male
Race: Dark Orc
Appearance: Tall and more muscular than lots of other Orcs, Keeps his hair very short and always keeps his face clean shaven. Has many battle scars from being in various fights.(Not 100% sure since I haven't done the skin yet)
Personality: Very headstrong and confident. Often seemingly cocky but Grunkhalar is just very sure of his abilities. Not too reasonable but thinks his decisions through. Grunkhalar loves to fight and brawl, so he rarely passes up on a fight. Somewhat suspicious which adds to him being hard to reason with.
Background Epic: If you want to be powerful, you must start weak.
Grunkhalar's trainer told him that when he was 12, that's when he was recognized as a strong and different fighter from the other orcs of his age, the others were all strong, muscular fast and stealthy, while Grunkhalar was ridiculously tough, strong, fast but not too stealthy. Compared to Humans & Golems he was still a shadow, but he was nothing compared to most others, his strength size and speed allowed him to beat most other orcs in physical fights, which lead to him being found, trained and raised by Kraagar.
Kraagar was one of the greatest Dark Orc warriors, helping them obtain riches from the other races through his sheer force and leadership qualities. Of course, the best leadership for an orc was their power, which he had no shortage of ever. He was often considered the first orcish warrior in the land, while every orc is a fighter, assassin, thief, archer or something similar, none of them had been hand to hand warriors like Kraagar. Tales were told of how in battles he had been surrounded by 4 Golems, all armed similar to him and he had slain them, barely taking any wounds himself. Of course, these tales are greatly fiction as his scars are equal to that of 5 other veteran orcs.
Kraagar was sure of himself and often told me stories of his battles and victories, but he hated when they were spun falsely. Even though his name was a legend to all Orcs he hated to be praised falsely and would often fight someone if they told a tale wrongly, no matter if they heard it that way. I obtained many of my traits off of Kraagar, both good and bad. He taught me the saying I live by "The weak turn to strong with work.". He is a perfect example of this, at first nobody would accept him as a warrior in the Orcish armies, so he trained for many years, always pushing himself, always trying to better it. He became Chieftain of the Orcs through a challenge to the current Chieftain. He slaughtered the Chieftain and earned the respect of every Orc in the area. He led the Orcs to many victories and became feared among the other races.
(Now more to Grunkhalar's story)
When he turned 12, Grunkhalar hadn't been trained at all which led to him humilitation often in the training yard. It wasn't until late that year when they got to wrestling, swords and other melee combat head to head fighting techniques that his real talent was revealed. He crushed all the other Orcs that were near his age and he was pitted against. Often he'd injure them by breaking a bone or similar from his powerful strikes. He started to train with the older orcs after 2 weeks of him dominating the yard. His fight average was decent among the olders, winning almost as much as he lost. Kraagar, who wasn't the chieftain anymore but still trained all the young noticed him almost immediately, fighting with a stance similar to that of his own.
Grunkhalar would grip the sword in his right hand and would keep his left arm close to his body for many defensive and offensive moves. His opponents would move in fast, slashing and jabbing as quick as they could, Grunkhalar would parry, block, deflect their blows for about 1 or minutes until they slightly tired and then he would start to go on the offense, not only would he use his sword but also his legs and his arms to distract or hurt them.
Kraagar took him as a young warrior and trained him over the years, constantly being better than the other orcs. While most focused in stealth killing, he focuses on brute strength and how to fight melee. He had a few others he trained with that specialized in the same thing but he was always the best. Kraagar said he could become a great warrior if he kept at the training, as long as his ego didn't get in his way and cause him to make rash decisions and he listened to advice. So, when Grunkhalar turned 18 he was put into the army, even though he wasn't done training. He would go to battles and often got scars from fighters that he didn't know how to fight, he always managed to survive from his pure strength and determination to kill.
He was called bloodthirsy by Kraagar, he said that was a bad trait because it would eventually get him into a fight he cannot win. Grunhalar shrugged this accusation off and kept training, they would train together every free moment they had. Eventually Grunkhalar became known through the area as a fierce warrior and he would get challenged by orcs travelling from different areas to test their mettle. He only ever lost one battle, and his opponent used 3 small swords. At the start of the battle he hurled a sword with intense speed at Grunkhalar's face, which needed to be blocked and was, but by the time Grunkhalar recovered form it the opponent had already closed in on him so he had no time to prepare. After a long and hard fight the orc conquered Grunkhalar, managing to disarm him and submit him.
Grunkhalar's training increased after that, getting much more intense, difficult and tiresome. All the training and fighting left him very strong but also hungry for battle to test his skills. He stopped training with Kraagar when he got sent to a different area by the Chieftain, so Grunkhalar continued his training by himself, having no other swordsman experienced enough to train him. His life since then has been a bloodbath, constantly killing and fighting, Grunkhalar once went to a human town and offered himself as a warrior for the arena fight. Many humans recognized him from battles and so he was pitted first against creatures of great power, after slaying them he was promised great amounts of coins and jewels if he managed to kill the next 2 challengers, both were fighters in the arena previously and were considered powerful with swords. He welcomed the challenge but was caught off guard when both emerged at the same time charging him, he had no time for complaint so he immediately picked up a breastplate from the slave he killed and hurled it at them, charging in as quick and vicious as possible. "The only time you go on the offensive is when you're fighting multiple opponents." he learned from Kraagar, using that and the strategy he learned from the orc who defeated him in his own area he managed to get the upper hand early in the battle. After taking many wounds he managed to kill them both and so earn his coins. The humans grudgingly gave him the coins and sent him on his way out, he returned home a hero, being one of the first Orcs to return successfully from that venture.
Oh my god.
This seems pretty fantastic!
I'll be finishing up the lore and reading the races then I'll be writing you an application, sir!
(Great job coming up with unique races, I must say )
Your character has leadership even though he's never led a thing in his life?
Burned down whole towns, robbed them and killed there traders? And then a courier managed to get the better of you?
That makes no sense and isn't realistic at all.
Denied.
Alright, I've been asked/told I can whitelist, so I'll be reading over all the applications from the past and any more posted here, so please post applications!
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You're asking useless questions that are just looking for a fight.
Especially if when it gets answered you persist to try and get on their nerves.
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In Game Name: World_Hopper
Age: 16
How did you find out about the server?: Cruisin through the MCForums.
Have you played on the server already? Negative, I'm one of those people who reads through something then decides if I like it, I've decided I love this and so I don't want to play until I get the full, opportunity to, if you understand.
What's rule #4?: No advertising, unless K'd by an Admin.
Past Servers I've played on: Stronghold 2, Battle of Eldaran, Elsaria, Fallout: Wild Wastelanfd, CivRP, CraftHammer, LoTC, Etc...
Special Key: 12ol6
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And I've already received a tour of everything by Droogy and I must say; the human place is looking might fine! Also the Dryad tree is a bit too small, don't ya think?
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This seems pretty fantastic!
I'll be finishing up the lore and reading the races then I'll be writing you an application, sir!
(Great job coming up with unique races, I must say
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Good application but choose 1 Backstory, make your character older and better roleplay example.
I see what you did there
Accepted.
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Pretty good application but the RP example was rubbish and give us some roleplay experience, not a number.
Denied.
Pretty good app
Accepted
Good application, but you're 13 so denied.
Kidding,
Accepted
You need more roleplay example, also more backstory would help.
Denied for now.
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Denied, no ninjas and your backstory doesn't make sense.How did you know the codewords?
Denied. Why does Dexter hate the NCR, what did his dad do, explain more in the backstory. And improve your RP example.
Your character has leadership even though he's never led a thing in his life?
Burned down whole towns, robbed them and killed there traders? And then a courier managed to get the better of you?
That makes no sense and isn't realistic at all.
Denied.
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