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    posted a message on THE ANERIAN CHRONICLES [RP][Airships][Classes][Player-Driven-Story][Extensive Lore]
    Out of Character Information

    IGN: Sir_Chompy
    Real-Life Age: 15
    Skype: Already given

    Have you read all of the rules, agree to abide by them, and by the decisions of our staff?: Yes

    Defintions
    Roleplaying: Acting out the life and interactions of a fictional character
    Metagaming: Using information obtained out of character, in character.
    Powergaming: Roleplaying aggressively giving others insufficient opportunity to respond, acting out of the reasonable physical bounds of your character

    Who can use flymod, X-ray and other such clientsided mods?: No one.
    When are you allowed to cause the death of another character?: Upon the consent of the player being killed.
    When are you allowed to speak out of character?: Over OOC chat channels or in double parentheses in local chat, when you need assistance or have an issue.
    Have you read the primary server lore of our server and agree to roleplay in accordance with it?: Yes.
    Who is allowed to use magic?: Characters who have received in character training and have staff approval

    Who are the Fallen?: Those who were separated with the rest of humanity during the Ascension
    When and how did our current government come to be?: When the monarchy dissolved, it became the Chancellery and the system has been in place since then
    Who are the Order of Aradin?: A group of knights dedicated toward protecting the Chancellery

    What previous roleplay experience have you had, if any?: Book of Halegron, Shrines of the Ancients Minecraft RP servers
    If you have played on other RP servers, please say which and why you left: Both servers shut down

    In Character Information

    Name: Adam Ceva
    Age: 23
    Class: Craftsman
    Physical description: Adam is tall and slender. His skin is pale and his eyes are a dull blue.

    Skin: http://www.minecraft.../1144282/noble/

    Biography:
    Adam Ceva was born into a wealthy farming family, with a loving mother, strict father, and multiple younger siblings. As a child he was quiet and kept to himself often, but was exceptionally close to his twin sister, Clarissa. The two of them worked, played, and grew up together. As their father was cousins with the island’s Master of Coin, Adam spent much of his time being lectured by his parents about the Chancellery, politics, and economics. Adam’s father held strict political views that imposed upon his children; however, Adam was the only one to listen as he picked up an interest in the island’s government. Adam aspired to leave the farm and pick up a career in the treasury. His parents gave him an excellent education and at age 16, he became an apprentice to the treasurer himself. Growing up, Adam was never energetic or playful, but hardworking and dedicated. He devoted himself to studies and work alone, leaving little time for work around the farm and hardly any play. Other than his family, Adam talked to few people. He kept to himself mostly, lost in history books and his own writing. His father approved and his mother was supportive, but other children considered him strange and laughed at him behind his back. Nonetheless, he continued with his own interests. It was his dream to one day become the Master of Coin himself. At age 18, Adam Ceva became the youngest manager in the Island Treasury. Despite this achievement, he was never satisfied. He always wanted a promotion, the better job, the greater recognition. But socially, Adam was withdrawn and kept to himself. He rarely talked to others or sympathized with them, trying to be rational in all aspects of his life. His days were dull and repetitive, but Adam enjoyed them. Wake up. Get dressed. Go to work. Monitor transactions in the treasury. Eat lunch. Monitor more transactions. Go out to dinner, the same restaurant each night. Go home. Read. Sleep. That was his life, and he was content with it. He never wanted it to change.

    Motivation: Adam is intrigued by politics, but lacks any outstanding goals other than to make a living and carry on with his life each day.
    Strengths: Determined, incredibly hardworking, and very sharp. Physically agile and quick.
    Weaknesses: Lives in fear of other people, staying out of their business; constantly struggles with getting out of his compulsive daily cycle

    Factions: None
    Character Linking: Twin sister Clarissa Ceva (Madame_Sukii)


    In-Character-Responses
    Walking down the streets of the Capitol, you encounter a pair of heavily armed and armoured men harassing a young girl.
    Adam walks past the men, glancing in their direction as they surround the girl. None of my business, he thinks. He freezes and stares at the thugs. They are heavily equipped, and there is no way he could take them all on. Nothing you can do about it, he reassures himself. He shakes his head and continues on his way, humming quietly to try and distract himself from the girl’s painful screams behind him.

    A man approaches you with a proposition - Go to Bloodstone and retrieve something for him, and you will be well rewarded.
    Ridiculous, Adam thinks, but he is unsure of himself. “Sorry sir, I cannot help you with that.” He promptly walks away, toward his workplace. To keep his mind off the offer, Adam tries to focus on his agenda for the day and his plans for dinner that evening. It probably would have been a boring waste of time, he thinks, failing to distract himself.

    You pass an old man lying on the side of the street, begging for food.
    He’s like that because he chose to be that way, Adam thinks, trying not to sympathize with the beggar and continue walking. Not your responsibility. He moves on, thinking about an interesting article he’d read in the news that day about the coal market.

    In a tavern, a slightly inebriated fellow insults your mother.
    Adam stares at the man. That was uncalled for, he thinks to himself. Holding in his anger, Adam stands up, pushes in his chair, and brusquely walks away. Fighting is wrong, he reassures himself, trying to ignore the man’s loud taunting.

    You take a liking to a beautiful necklace a passing woman wears.
    Pretty, he admires. Continuing on his way, he forgets about it shortly.

    Do you have any questions about the server or our lore? Some, but the LMs are always helpful and available.

    Other notes: SUMF
    Posted in: PC Servers
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    posted a message on Shrines of the Ancients Roleplay [RP][Factions][Player-Driven Story]
    In tears reading Jidek's post. Man, this is gonna be fun to watch.
    Posted in: PC Servers
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    posted a message on Shrines of the Ancients Roleplay [RP][Factions][Player-Driven Story]
    Haha, Mallachie! Changing things up based on your own judgement! I love it. Just remember to notify the rest of us beforehand next time, please :P
    Posted in: PC Servers
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    posted a message on Shrines of the Ancients Roleplay [RP][Factions][Player-Driven Story]
    Sorry for the delay, both of you. I'm sort of a back-up whitelister and won't be doing this often, but Mallachie seems to be our main whitelister and sadly he's been worked to the bone since the Prologue started... we'll be opening staff applications soon.

    Accepted
    Welcome to the server! You are invited to join upon our opening this September.
    In the meantime, register on our website (http://shrines.enjin.com) and meet the community!

    Queenling1538
    A well-formated, clean, and solid app. No faults whatsoever, and your biography was well-written and original... No doubt you'll be a great inclusion to our community. Welcome to the server - a friend of Gamer's is a friend of mine.

    Tiffosaur
    Kyia Layne! :D I remember you. I was Silence Collins- just another guard. It makes me really happy to see some our veteran players return. Another solid, interesting application. Your ICRs could be a bit longer, but it's fine given the rest of the application is good quality. Welcome back; I'm sure everyone will be glad to see you.

    Deffered
    Your application lacked certain important qualities. You are invited to repost your application with any neccessary revisions, explained here.

    None

    Rejected
    Your application, upon several resubmissions, failed to meet expectations- or you broke the rules in some way (explained here). You cannot reapply. We wish you luck in finding a new server.

    None
    Posted in: PC Servers
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    posted a message on Shrines of the Ancients Roleplay [RP][Factions][Player-Driven Story]
    Compiling character lists, and I've been pretty busy lately, so once again I will bypass the huge post with a:
    Welcome to the server, RomanTS! All you needed was that simple fix, great.
    Welcome Stormtrooper2000! Your bio was really good. You'll be a welcome addition to the server.

    Both of you: Go into OOC chat when on the server and ask an OP or admin for your living area and starting gear.
    Posted in: PC Servers
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    posted a message on Shrines of the Ancients Roleplay [RP][Factions][Player-Driven Story]
    Sukiiwtf's revised application is accepted.
    Don't have time for a large post right now.
    Also, future reference; deferred apps should be reposted.
    Posted in: PC Servers
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    posted a message on Shrines of the Ancients Roleplay [RP][Factions][Player-Driven Story]
    Accepted
    Welcome to the server! You are invited to join upon our opening this September.
    In the meantime, register on our website (http://shrines.enjin.com) and meet the community!

    HydraliskJohn
    Great app! I liked how you incorporated the lore into your biography. Welcome back to the community!

    Inflictum
    Wow, another stellar application. You put an immense amount of work into this. I'm really impressed right now, this is one of the best I've seen. I enjoyed reading the biography a lot. You'll be a great inclusion to the server, no doubt. Welcome.

    cal123456789
    Finally got around to posting your app, I see! :P Really no faults here, a solid app. Welcome to the server.

    Deffered
    Your application lacked certain important qualities. You are invited to repost your application with any neccessary revisions, explained here.

    None


    Rejected
    Your application, upon several resubmissions, failed to meet expectations- or you broke the rules in some way (explained here). You cannot reapply. We wish you luck in finding a new server.

    Zekermei
    After being given advice and possible revisions to your application, you added in excuses to justify your out of lore content, rather than actually changing it. Furthermore, you accuse us of not properly reading your application, rather than listening and taking our advice into consideration. Please do not reply to this message, contact me, or PM any of the staff. We wish you luck in finding a new server.
    Posted in: PC Servers
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    posted a message on Shrines of the Ancients Roleplay [RP][Factions][Player-Driven Story]
    Giant posts that only talk to one person seem ridiculous, but I'm OCD about these things so... oh well.
    Mallachie, you are not ninja-ing me this time.

    Accepted
    Welcome to the server! You are invited to join upon our opening this September.
    In the meantime, register on our website (http://shrines.enjin.com) and meet the community!

    None

    Deffered
    Your application lacked certain important qualities. You are invited to repost your application with any neccessary revisions, explained here.

    Zekermei
    The second you mention magic powers and demons, you start treading on thin ice. It can be pulled off, sure, but we have to very careful about these things. As is, your character is very overpowered. These demons cannot be summoned at his at will, first off. It's a clear advantage for your character over everyone else. They can be psychological weapons (I'm still hesitant to allow that), potentially scaring off enemies, but they can have no physical power whatsoever. You really need to tone down your character's strengths and give him more weaknesses. I would recommend removing his 'magical' powers and replacing them with profound psychological ability, but if you're bent on the idea, you need to execute it well.
    Also, reread the part of causing the death of another player in the OP and fix yours, please.
    Good luck reapplying! You have clear potential, you just need to understand these RP limits better.


    Rejected
    Your application, upon several resubmissions, failed to meet expectations- or you broke the rules in some way (explained here). You cannot reapply. We wish you luck in finding a new server.

    None
    Posted in: PC Servers
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    posted a message on Shrines of the Ancients Roleplay [RP][Factions][Player-Driven Story]
    Accepted
    Welcome to the server! You are invited to join upon our opening this September.
    In the meantime, register on our website (http://shrines.enjin.com) and meet the community!

    WheatleyLabs777
    Alright, I can tell you really hate the idea of just posting a ordinary biography. Instead, what you have given me is dialogue and actions. Three times, despite being told exactly how to fix it twice.
    I like that. I'm glad to see you heeded our advice by adding to the story. Your first biography lacked any true characterization or explanation of the characters life, and your second was on the fence. But this time around, you have enough dialogue content to tell that story.
    Admittedly, I'm being a bit lenient because you're clearly trying very hard to get this right. Efforts what counts- and it goes without saying you'll be a great RPer. Welcome to the server, my good man.

    Deffered
    Your application lacked certain important qualities. You are invited to repost your application with any neccessary revisions, explained here.

    None

    Rejected
    Your application, upon several resubmissions, failed to meet expectations- or you broke the rules in some way (explained here). You cannot reapply. We wish you luck in finding a new server.

    gamer9726
    I've read your app through and through, and I sincerely feel you do not belong on this server; simply put, you would not fit in with our community. We're really not looking for your type. Please do not respond to this message or PM any of our staff; we wish you luck in finding a new server.
    Just kidding! Please understand, they put me up to it D:
    You've got a great application. I tried my hardest to find any flaws whatsoever (I really did), but failed. Welcome back to the server, Gamer. We've missed you.
    Posted in: PC Servers
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    posted a message on Shrines of the Ancients Roleplay [RP][Factions][Player-Driven Story]
    I'll allow it Renee.
    Please repost your app with edited IC information.
    Posted in: PC Servers
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    posted a message on Shrines of the Ancients Roleplay [RP][Factions][Player-Driven Story]
    ^I am Sir Chompy, and I approve this message
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    posted a message on Shrines of the Ancients Roleplay [RP][Factions][Player-Driven Story]
    You've kinda been doing the job of a whitelister these last few posts. Also, we could use more whitelisters. Besides Issie and I, we have two others, but they've been busy with other things as of late. Formal staff applications aren't open anymore, but if you're willing, feel free to PM me on the Enjin forum (Sir_Chompy) and I'll send you the details.
    Posted in: PC Servers
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    posted a message on Shrines of the Ancients Roleplay [RP][Factions][Player-Driven Story]
    Mallachie... you should consider signing up as a whitelister.
    Posted in: PC Servers
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    posted a message on Shrines of the Ancients Roleplay [RP][Factions][Player-Driven Story]
    Pending Applicants,
    I'm really sorry, but I couldn't get to whitelisting this evening. I was busy with all things homework and doctor appointments, but rest assured tomorrow I will be here to review your applications. There is a chance Issie might decide to do it herself sometime tonight, as she lives in a very different time zone than most of us here. Keep your fingers crossed, and keep those applications coming! :]
    -Chompy
    Posted in: PC Servers
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    posted a message on Shrines of the Ancients Roleplay [RP][Factions][Player-Driven Story]
    WheatleyLabs777- Congratulations, you get to be the first experiment for our new whitelister, Issie! :D
    Also, I see Welk has been keeping an eye on the thread for me. Thanks alot, it helps.

    Accepted
    Welcome to the server! You are invited to join upon our opening this September.
    In the meantime, register on our website (http://shrines.enjin.com) and meet the community!

    ottobeals
    Thanks to that simple fix, you're all set. Welcome!

    Cswartz9
    I see you've applied some of my suggestions to your biography. Good work! I'd say it expands on the character enough now. With that out of the way, meet some of our community on our website. Join a faction, everyone's already grouping off!

    spoonynoob
    Solid application! You might run into problems with the whole "experience with other classes" thing; you can have knowledge about the other classes (say you know what is required to make potions as a herbalist, or what is required to craft things as an artificer), however you won't actually be able to do any of those things, even minorly. Our plugins just don't work that way. Everything aside, welcome to the server!

    Deffered
    Your application lacked certain important qualities. You are invited to repost your application with any neccessary revisions, explained here.

    AmrothKnight
    Great application, and an interesting character as well. However, your metagaming definition is wrong. I'm going to have to ask you repost a revised application. Sorry! D:


    Rejected
    Your application, upon several resubmissions, failed to meet expectations- or you broke the rules in some way (explained here). You cannot reapply. We wish you luck in finding a new server.

    None
    Posted in: PC Servers
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