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    posted a message on blitz RP
    Sorry but I don't think this is going to get very far.
    Firstly, grammar. People will take you more seriously when youuae some. I mean, look at that first paragraph- there's only two sentences on the whole thing. It just keeps going on and on. As a general rule, you should only use the word 'and' once or twice in a sentence. Capitalization at the beginning of sentences does wonders to improve readability as well.
    Secondly, this just appears to be a bit too similar to the established FAYZ. Let's look at the basics. Everyone over the age of 15 disappears and if you turn 15 you do as well. Ordinary people strt to gain powers. Apocalypse. That's basically the same. If I was looking for a RP like this, and even though they have nearly the same plot, I would go for the FAYZ RP. Why? Because the grammar on this gives me a ba first impression.
    Even if we put that aside, you're still missing some crucial things. What are the rules, for example? What defines having an OP power? Can you godmod? Double post? Instakill other RPers?

    I hope this didn't come across as being too harsh. But if you take these steps in hand then we might see a really great RP coming from you :)
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    posted a message on The New World (OOC)
    Woo indeed. I've added pages for the Pacific Union, Singapore and the UAR/NAR.

    Also, on my app I revised some stuff. I also have 30 mil instead of the 3 mil I accidentally wrote -.-
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    posted a message on The Space Race [Revival]
    ((Wow guys, remember to stay within the timeframe here. It's 1958-9 and one of the most common computers looks like this:

    and costs the equivalent of $920,000 in 2013 money. It's 2-3 years until a small-ish computer (IBM PC, google it) comes out. even then, the basic model (64kB RAM, 5.25 in. floppy drive, monitor) sold for the equivalent of $7,588 in today's money. Don't get too far ahead.))
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    posted a message on MorTowers [Balanced] [NOT Modern] [Useful] [Fun to Use] [Not Call of Duty] [Not any shooter game] [Definitely not Call of Duty!
    Mortar towers? Mortars might be OK but I think that is ridiculous.
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    posted a message on MorTowers [Balanced] [NOT Modern] [Useful] [Fun to Use] [Not Call of Duty] [Not any shooter game] [Definitely not Call of Duty!
    I don't think that this fits in with Minecraft. Even if it is less recent than pistons it just doesn't feel like it would work.
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    posted a message on Frogs
    Swamp biomes!
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    posted a message on Tree Wood Sometimes Drop Planks
    What would be the reason for this? Planks are the processed and refined version of logs. It doesn't make sense.
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    posted a message on My dad ruined my username!
    You don't need to tell anybody that it's your birthday. And it's not that bad; two of my friends used their school CASES code for their username (examples are HAR0013 or LIM0007). At least uMiner sounds cool. Also, 1202 is the error that the crew of Apollo 11 had when they were landing on the moon :P
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    posted a message on [RP] The Untold Empires [Forge Your Empire][Multi Worlds] (Always Accepting!)
    -SEF III-
    Supply Stage: 29%

    -Space Elevator IV-
    60%

    -Helios Explorer III-
    Construction of Helios Explorer: 40%

    A space-dock is being constructed. It will sit in areostationary orbit (geocentric orbit over mars) a few kilometers to the west of the Mars Space Station, now called Aldell Station.
    Space dock construction: 20%

    -Dione Station II-
    The UPA government is holding a public contest to select the Colony's name. Some that have come forward already are Unova Colony, Areaxis and Erresian Colonies. International citizens are encouraged to submit names to encourage international relations. Exeptional names will be cataloged as a 'good' list for further colonies. This list will be published on the Internet.

    -UN-
    The UPSS Sovereign has left for the UN station with workers and blueprints and supplies. Also with them is an UPA representative. He carries with himself a message, one that says:

    Quote from UPA Ambassador »

    "I feel that the UN is a international and shared space. It, in my opinion, should have areas, and/or that country's housing areas, built by them. Therefore if a country does not wish to join the UN, and they have every right to want or to not, they do not construct a space and do not have one provided to them. If a country wishes to join the UN after it's initial construction, they need only construct a new area. Concluding this, I feel that we should have one Martian day, as that would be our new timescale, every martian year as a day of remembrance. Earth day, for all that have died on Earth, not just in the recent earth near-extinction event, but for every human being that has ever died, in wars, through sickness and poverty, and for the great Earth itself, without which I would not be dictating this message or have anyone to deliver it to. May we have a era of peace, and not have any more needless bloodshed.

    UPA Ambassador, 2371
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    posted a message on Why tekkit will die and FTB will take the lead.
    'They are of their own bubble'?'they ruin youtube'? Tell me now, how do the Yogscast ruin YouTube? the two-million or so subscribers did so because they enjoy watching their videos. Do you think CaptainSparklez ruins YouTube? Or on that matter, why not any of the of 11-year-old kids who upload videos with their squeaky voices? And even more than that, the Yogscast helped introduce new players to Minecraft. I know. I was one of them. And about those mods-Take redpower for instance. Modpacks like tekkit help these mods become well-known, and therefore get more players using those mods. And isn't that what mod makers want? to get people to use their mods?
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