Sorry Cpl, this has been dead and inactive for a while now. For you and any others who see this, please look at the time the last post was made. If it is over a month ago, then people will have lost interest in it. You could still apply, and maybe even get accepted, (if the OP bothers to check the thread) but it is highly unlikely that anybody else will post. Sorry.
Sorry but I don't think this is going to get very far.
Firstly, grammar. People will take you more seriously when youuae some. I mean, look at that first paragraph- there's only two sentences on the whole thing. It just keeps going on and on. As a general rule, you should only use the word 'and' once or twice in a sentence. Capitalization at the beginning of sentences does wonders to improve readability as well.
Secondly, this just appears to be a bit too similar to the established FAYZ. Let's look at the basics. Everyone over the age of 15 disappears and if you turn 15 you do as well. Ordinary people strt to gain powers. Apocalypse. That's basically the same. If I was looking for a RP like this, and even though they have nearly the same plot, I would go for the FAYZ RP. Why? Because the grammar on this gives me a ba first impression.
Even if we put that aside, you're still missing some crucial things. What are the rules, for example? What defines having an OP power? Can you godmod? Double post? Instakill other RPers?
I hope this didn't come across as being too harsh. But if you take these steps in hand then we might see a really great RP coming from you
What exactly would be the point of this? If you don't want to build in creative mode then don't use it. You can still hunt for dungeons and now you have strongholds to explore. Singleplayer is still as fun as before. Nobody is making you use all of the 1.8+ additions (except for hunger, of course). Now, don't get me wrong, I loved Minecraft pre 1.8, but I love it even more now.
Sorry for my inactivity in the last few weeks. And I apologise in advance for the next month or so, because I will be away on a trip and I'm unsure if I will be able to access the Internet. If anything too major occurs then the other parties in the pacific alliance can kinda rp for me, but try to be neutral and not crazy and generally like something Ocealia would do. BTW has the wiki been updated recently?
-Human Rights Conference-
Ocealian delegates are about to touch down at the military base.
-Dumai conference-
Upon confirmation with the Ocealian government, Nick signs the proposal. "Today is a momentous occasion for our nations. Today, the Pacific Union is born"
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Firstly, grammar. People will take you more seriously when youuae some. I mean, look at that first paragraph- there's only two sentences on the whole thing. It just keeps going on and on. As a general rule, you should only use the word 'and' once or twice in a sentence. Capitalization at the beginning of sentences does wonders to improve readability as well.
Secondly, this just appears to be a bit too similar to the established FAYZ. Let's look at the basics. Everyone over the age of 15 disappears and if you turn 15 you do as well. Ordinary people strt to gain powers. Apocalypse. That's basically the same. If I was looking for a RP like this, and even though they have nearly the same plot, I would go for the FAYZ RP. Why? Because the grammar on this gives me a ba first impression.
Even if we put that aside, you're still missing some crucial things. What are the rules, for example? What defines having an OP power? Can you godmod? Double post? Instakill other RPers?
I hope this didn't come across as being too harsh. But if you take these steps in hand then we might see a really great RP coming from you
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Age (If Necessary):[redacted]
Location: Australia
Why do you wanna join?: Looks fun.
If you were to choose, would you choose
Builder,Redstone,Helpers?: Builder
Skype: Yeah
Been a Minecraft player for (ex.July 4,2011): Since the original 1.7.3, so about July 2011.
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Also, on my app I revised some stuff. I also have 30 mil instead of the 3 mil I accidentally wrote -.-
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Ocealian delegates are about to touch down at the military base.
-Dumai conference-
Upon confirmation with the Ocealian government, Nick signs the proposal. "Today is a momentous occasion for our nations. Today, the Pacific Union is born"
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