Grongis/Gillagne - Though I am not completely satisfied with the reason for reaching Enris, acceptable I suppose Welcome aboard the ship known as FTA and to the crew known as the Silver Gaming Community!
Exzanosis/LiamVoidDev - Grah! That Skin! *Eyes melt* On a more serious note, while you are accepted for now, do take note you would not be able to use any of the Saviesa's divine magic or gain faith points without a follower trait! As of now though, Welcome aboard space shuttle FTA, the other astronauts known as the Silver Gaming Community are ready to explore with you!
Deferred
darknesscrusher/Darknesscrusher - Strengths and weaknesses, check. What happened to traits >_< (Also, Martial weapon proficiency requires simple weapon proficiency)
thewarriorreborn/Baltora - Your biography was abit odd, he learnt not to trust people too easily but he is still loyal? Expand abit more on his strength, weaknesses and personality as well and you stand a chance to win a one way ticket to FTA!
Grongis/Gillagne - Pretty good bio but I just need a short expansion of his story to Enris! Also, I require at least one physical weakness that would hinder him in combat! Still, pretty good read! Was hooked to it. (Eyezooms at pesky marks) DENIED! (jk)
darknesscrusher/Darknesscrusher - Your biography needs more! In particular, how he heard of Enris, why he chose to go there and how he got there! At least 2 more strengths and weaknesses and you should be free to go! (You can choose to not have a bonus language so don't worry!)
Oneleg/Bruneth - Everything is passable except for the biography! It's only the ending but please elaborate on how your character heard of Enris. Also, Enris is definitely not the place for a quiet life as rumours about it would describe it as undead infested and dangerous! Fix those and you would be good to go, hope you reapply!
tylerthebrain/Khaivornum - Definitely a quality application! It was an interesting and enticing read. Welcome to From the Ashes and the Silver Gaming Community! Hope to see you server side!
P.s (Your character's age of 33 human years will make your character a 22 year old drow. Just point that out =P)
Elystian - I was surprised by the improvements to the strengths and weaknesses! Good job. I'll accept you now but I would require you to change his bonus human trait as it does not fit with the character but we can do that server-side. Welcome aboard to From the Ashes
SlimeWarrior00/Pearl_CrystalGem - Leaving forever you said ... Fun read Welcome back
Deferred :
Elystian - It would be nice to restate your character's goal. Also, note that stonemason and carpenter requires the basic miner and basic lumberjack trait! (Both cost 3 points each) Expand on the strengths and weakness a bit more (maybe at least 2 more lines each, if you can't, 1 is okay) and you're good to go
wymoup - Barely meeting criteria but after seeing how you changed the personality section (which would have been better in the bio instead) ... I'll open the gates. Welcome to SG
wymoup - I see some effort in the application but there are a few things lacking before this turns into an accept. Firstly, the bio falls short of 8 words of the minimum and I reccomend describing your character's personality or how he got it to improve the bio. Minor point to note is that the name irks me slightly as it is more of a human's name but if you can't change it, it won't affect your next app. Thank you for applying and I hope you re-apply
scoobylink/Anexor - I am sorry but this means you can no longer apply to From The Ashes. There are several glaring points in your application which led to your denial so I'll go through it. Your biography didn't make sense and while there is inclusion of FTA's lore, it's not enough. The biography also talks more about why your character has his skillset rather than about the character itself. Other points in the bio to note is that people don't learn languages just by having heard them. Repeatedly committing crimes also would surely have your character locked up thus that part is inconsistent as well. Strengths and weaknesses ... both lacking and weaknesses clearly stated that (Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness). The staff of Silver Gaming wish you all the best in finding a different roleplay and hope that you have learnt something from applying.
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Accepted :
darknesscrusher - All changes clear! You're free! Enter at your own risk! Addiction possible! Only on FTA and Silver Gaming :D!
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Accepted :
Grongis/Gillagne - Though I am not completely satisfied with the reason for reaching Enris, acceptable I suppose Welcome aboard the ship known as FTA and to the crew known as the Silver Gaming Community!
Exzanosis/LiamVoidDev - Grah! That Skin! *Eyes melt* On a more serious note, while you are accepted for now, do take note you would not be able to use any of the Saviesa's divine magic or gain faith points without a follower trait! As of now though, Welcome aboard space shuttle FTA, the other astronauts known as the Silver Gaming Community are ready to explore with you!
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darknesscrusher/Darknesscrusher - Strengths and weaknesses, check. What happened to traits >_< (Also, Martial weapon proficiency requires simple weapon proficiency)
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thewarriorreborn/Baltora - Your biography was abit odd, he learnt not to trust people too easily but he is still loyal? Expand abit more on his strength, weaknesses and personality as well and you stand a chance to win a one way ticket to FTA!
Grongis/Gillagne - Pretty good bio but I just need a short expansion of his story to Enris! Also, I require at least one physical weakness that would hinder him in combat! Still, pretty good read! Was hooked to it. (Eyezooms at pesky marks) DENIED! (jk)
darknesscrusher/Darknesscrusher - Your biography needs more! In particular, how he heard of Enris, why he chose to go there and how he got there! At least 2 more strengths and weaknesses and you should be free to go! (You can choose to not have a bonus language so don't worry!)
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Accepted :
Oneleg/Bruneth - Not the best of changes but I can accept them! Welcome to FTA and the Silver Gaming Community!
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Deferred :
Oneleg/Bruneth - Everything is passable except for the biography! It's only the ending but please elaborate on how your character heard of Enris. Also, Enris is definitely not the place for a quiet life as rumours about it would describe it as undead infested and dangerous! Fix those and you would be good to go, hope you reapply!
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Accepted :
tylerthebrain/Khaivornum - Definitely a quality application! It was an interesting and enticing read. Welcome to From the Ashes and the Silver Gaming Community! Hope to see you server side!
P.s (Your character's age of 33 human years will make your character a 22 year old drow. Just point that out =P)
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Accepted :
Ma boss /WholeGrainWheat - B-Boss! Accepted for outstanding quality! Not cause you're ma b-boss! (Runs to hide in her cubicle)
Chilli50/Rinion - outstanding quality! Welcome back to SG and FTA!
P.s I swear you guys are trying to kill me, doing apps while sick
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Accepted :
Daash 99/DarkDaash - you were dearly missed. Welcome back to SG
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Accepted :
Elystian - I was surprised by the improvements to the strengths and weaknesses! Good job. I'll accept you now but I would require you to change his bonus human trait as it does not fit with the character but we can do that server-side. Welcome aboard to From the Ashes
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Accepted :
SlimeWarrior00/Pearl_CrystalGem - Leaving forever you said ... Fun read Welcome back
Deferred :
Elystian - It would be nice to restate your character's goal. Also, note that stonemason and carpenter requires the basic miner and basic lumberjack trait! (Both cost 3 points each) Expand on the strengths and weakness a bit more (maybe at least 2 more lines each, if you can't, 1 is okay) and you're good to go
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Accepted :
con68 - Roll out Grey junior! Your life as batman of Enris awaits!
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Accepted :
wymoup - Barely meeting criteria but after seeing how you changed the personality section (which would have been better in the bio instead) ... I'll open the gates. Welcome to SG
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Deferred :
wymoup - I see some effort in the application but there are a few things lacking before this turns into an accept. Firstly, the bio falls short of 8 words of the minimum and I reccomend describing your character's personality or how he got it to improve the bio. Minor point to note is that the name irks me slightly as it is more of a human's name but if you can't change it, it won't affect your next app. Thank you for applying and I hope you re-apply
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Accepted :
Tiffosaurus/Tiffosaur -You lied! That's not 4k words! Rejec ... well ... This is already under the accepted tab ._.
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Denied:
scoobylink/Anexor - I am sorry but this means you can no longer apply to From The Ashes. There are several glaring points in your application which led to your denial so I'll go through it. Your biography didn't make sense and while there is inclusion of FTA's lore, it's not enough. The biography also talks more about why your character has his skillset rather than about the character itself. Other points in the bio to note is that people don't learn languages just by having heard them. Repeatedly committing crimes also would surely have your character locked up thus that part is inconsistent as well. Strengths and weaknesses ... both lacking and weaknesses clearly stated that (Not knowing how to do something that is outside of your class is not a weakness). The staff of Silver Gaming wish you all the best in finding a different roleplay and hope that you have learnt something from applying.