Quote from CalebTheBanana
wait why am i not allowed to make a night kin or super mutant
Look, mate, i'm going to be nice. You CAN'T be a nightkin or super mutant. They are too overpowered for RP, and unless we KNOW you can Rp VERY well, and KNOW you well, we won't let you be one. And even then, you'd have to have an absolutely AMAZING app for it, which...frankly....yours isn't the best.
And, for your second app with the normal human: Your special is messed up. A perfect shot would have a perception of 8-10, not 2. Character description-wise: What a character LOOKS like are like his facial features, hair/eye color, etc. Clothing is where the Tux would go. And really, your character shouldn't be too overpowered, like yours is. Your character is wayyyy too overpowered. Use punctuation more in your Backstory. WAYYY more. And, please, fix that RP example. Put it more like this
Raider: I will get the rest of my Raiders!
Frank: Okay, do that, I am a professional Bounty Hunter.
And so on and so on.
Punctuation is a HUGE thing in an application for an RP server like this. If you can use punctuation and grammar well, it can take you a long way.