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    posted a message on Road to Ages. [Updated to Survival Server][Closed read Thread]
    Accepted
    World_Hopper (Bjardsoen/Warrior) - Very nice, and now with a workable race! Welcome, welcome!
    Zyphuer (Kree/Archer) - Interesting use of Amyana in your bio, I rather like it (as long as you don't go around saying you're "The Chosen One" or something else like that; Gods are fickle in their ways). So welcome.
    advarsel (Bjardsoen/Miner) - Good application. I'm giving you benefit of the doubt, since even through all the punishment, you haven't left. But this is your one shot, mess it up and we wont allow another.


    Defered
    Geadsss
    - Iredoran applications are closed.
    Moltal - Grammar and spelling checks are needed. In addition, you need to remember that your character is going to be in Ofriheirn (so maybe specify that he went to an Imperial Army recruiter there). Since English is your second language, don't hesitate to send your application to Dragons for editting.
    jearwin - You need to base your character off of his abilities. You can't, in the short life you've lived so far (age 25), have become a wealthy trader, defeated valiant monsters, and trained in multiple professions. Keep it logical, and don't powergame through your application (I then slew 50 enemies with my bare hands!). On a final note, the entire continent is under control of the Empire; there is no other country.
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    posted a message on Road to Ages. [Updated to Survival Server][Closed read Thread]
    Accepted
    LuckyDuckySlaya (Kree/Miner) - No, you can't change class later (unless you have a good RP reason and donate $5 to the server). I do advise you to not seek out the bandit alone; remember, you're just a miner. But good luck!
    Crazyal888 (Bjardsoen/Warrior) - Nice story, I especially like the play by play of your fight with the three bandits (It shows you aren't powergaming, and know you aren't invincible). In the future, may I ask that you use paragraphs? My eyes hurt. But welcome!
    Shaiur (Cmok/Warrior) - While we say the Cmok race is nearly at capacity, I'll still whitelist a good one if I see it. Don't prove me wrong.

    Defered
    World_hopper - Wolves shouldn't be a problem. While your story is good, we have enough Iredorans (and most of them are herbalists). But we'd love to have you. So please change your race/class, write a new bio, and you'll probably be whitelisted next round.
    al97drew - Among other problems, Iredorans can't be miners. Try again.
    Geadsss - Full sentences would be nice. In addition, we have a lot of Iredorans. Would you like to change your race (class is fine if it is still compatible with your new race).
    Nekpek - Grammar check is needed (capitalization is a big issue here). But I do like the story of being imprisoned, those crazy bandits (since obviously they can't be anyone within the Empire, who is everyone on the continent). Just fix that, and apply again.
    rcb1996 - See comments for your last friend.
    nukakinght - See comments for last friend.
    biggboii69r - Alright, I like how you're going to apply and play together; nice roleplay opportunities. But there are several problems, and I'll address them all at once. First, I don't like this bit about the Bjardsoen army attacking your village (they're loyal citizens of the Empire; make it bandits if anything). Next, the city of Cmok is rather full, but I'd be willing to make an exception in a few cases. However, I cannot make an exception on the Mage class; that'll have to be off limits, so nuka, you'll have to change that (and if you guys want an easier chance getting in, you can change your race to Kree or Bjardsoen). Final note: check your grammar and spelling; it must be fixed. If that's done, I'd be happy to whitelist you.
    dev824804 - Your biography is too short and, to add insult to injury, Kree cannot be mages. In addition, the mage class is at capacity. Please try again.
    gamer9726 - A commoner doesn't know magic; actually, no one does, until they attend the Mage Academy. In addition, the Cmokan race is rather full; if you'd like an easier time getting in, try a different race. And while your story is enticing, perhaps you'd be able to work it that your parents didn't die? It's just so cliche.
    advarsel - Alright, what story are you doing? I read three of your applications in this same whitelist phase. They're all good; there are just three of them. I'll need to see a completed one, and a single entry, and then you can be whitelisted next round.

    A reminder to all those deffered: you can still apply again, once you fix your mistakes. We welcome your applications, we just want as close to perfection as we can get. Thank you!
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    posted a message on Road to Ages. [Updated to Survival Server][Closed read Thread]
    No Rp testing now, it has been removed
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    posted a message on Road to Ages. [Updated to Survival Server][Closed read Thread]
    I have the list but I am not home to whitelist people. So I will do that tonight.

    In other news: I have offically Closed Aplications for the Races of Cmokan and Iredorian until both the other races and their cities are more populated. As well I have closed the Professions of Herbalist and Mage. Herbalist are closed until potions making is more useful and easier to do. As well the mage is closed until the next class semster. So any applicate that applies after this post with those races or professions will automaticlly be denied.
    -Prongs
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    posted a message on Road to Ages. [Updated to Survival Server][Closed read Thread]
    Demon and Void are both added
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    posted a message on Road to Ages. [Updated to Survival Server][Closed read Thread]
    Quote from zachdudeguy

    Who should I talk to to get a house in Ofriheim? And why is every city other than Cmok a ghost town? -.-


    Because of the current bug in our respawn pllugin, people dont wanna walk when they die and Connor4donkeys is the lord of that city but is on vaction till tomorrowish.

    And Demon added you in a moment
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    posted a message on Road to Ages. [Updated to Survival Server][Closed read Thread]
    Quote from demonblades

    i was never added to the whitelist
    i was approved about a week ago

    IGN I prolly made a mistake.
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    posted a message on Road to Ages. [Updated to Survival Server][Closed read Thread]
    Quote from warhawkcrazy97

    How come I was banned, I did nothing?


    You did many things wrong over your time on the server. Including but not limited to: Stealing (A bannable offense itself)and creating log towers. These acts got you three warnings and now you are tempory banned from the server. Be warned if caught breaking a single rule upon rejoining you will be banned for good.
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    posted a message on Road to Ages. [Updated to Survival Server][Closed read Thread]
    List over the last couple of days:

    Accepted
    VoiD__ (Bjardsoen/Warrior) - Woohoo! Thrilling read, I enjoyed it. You'll have fun with the Gods on this server (a reminder though, if you're going to be "purging everything that doesn't pretain to your beliefs," RP it out.
    zachdudeguy (Bjardsoen/Archer) - Ha, a long hall instead of a mansion. Well, it works, welcome!
    Destoryer1995 (Iredoran/Archer) - Third time is the charm, yes.
    Grey_Hunter (Kree/Archer) - Interesting read; Kree Bloodlust and all. All clear!
    sjninefour (Cmok/Archer) - Are you planning on majoring in English when you get to college? Good read, welcome.


    Character Changes
    Salesman52 (Cmok/Miner) - Accepted, but I'd still have enjoyed the trial and subsequent execution.


    Deffered
    advarsel - Sorry I'm being so picky on this (but I do this evenly with everyone). Just check your grammar. If you think it's good, show it to your parents, or friends (marboy1, maybe?) and get them to fix it. Did you manage to google search "Homophone?"
    Crazyal888 - At least his father didn't take an arrow to the knee. :biggrin.gif: Anyway, the Bjardsoen are under the control of the Empire, and have been for over a century. They aren't fighting the Empire, so your story will have to change dramatically. Final note, about your class; if you're a warrior, you can't mine. Not as in won't, since it's not RP, but can't, like, the plugin restricts you from mining.
    Geadsss (Iredoran/Mage) - Too short! Also the mage class i currently and capcity as is the Iredoran race. You need to be a damn good role-player to become a mage, which you biography does not represent with the lack of effort. Finally you're character cannot know how to cast magic before attending the Academy.
    TaylorStriffe (Cmokan/Swordsman) - Your biography is far too short! The entire family dying backstory is cliched at best, and you give no explanation for your class choice. Finally the Cmokan race is at capacity please choose a different race for your character and apply again.
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    posted a message on Road to Ages. [Updated to Survival Server][Closed read Thread]
    I apologize for me not being here the last couple of days, I was busy with Real Life issues. I am reviewing the lists now and will post them shortly. Thank you.
    -Prongs
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    posted a message on Road to Ages. [Updated to Survival Server][Closed read Thread]
    Yeterdays whitelist from Dragon:

    Accepted
    X01 (Cmok/Mage) - Honestly, I like your bio (and girlfriend's) and it'll create really nice roleplay. Just keep in mind that classes won't start for about a week, and then that continues for a few weeks. And you aren't guaranteed on passing the classes.
    LadyKakyuu (Cmok/Mage) - See above.
    Leonerdus (Kree/Miner) - LadyDana has a good suggestion as to what Kree look like on page 33. You'll know if you're good or not (someone had a werewolf skin, and he could tell from the laughs on vent that it didn't work). Welcome!
    Vectorz (Cmok/Farmer) - Slight issue I have is that you say you were outside the Empire. But I'm inclined to let you into the server, since you waited patiently for 8 days (Sorry for skipping your application!). Just, if talking about your past, don't say you were outside the Empire, and welcome to the server!
    Gigaknight1 (Bjardsoen/Warrior) - No, you don't have to fix anything, all clear!


    Deffered
    gold7888 - Several problems; first, the Empire wouldn't kill your entire family because you didn't pay your tax. That's just not realistic. Second, your biography seems to indicate a miner class, but you've decided to be an archer. Third; Mango? As a name for a Kree? Try again please.
    zachdudeguy - Just a few edits needed, really. You have a good character in creation, if you were going for a Cmokan. The Bjardsoen are more of the viking type society, and while the betting and drinking sounds familiar, the intense societal pressures and country side manors don't sound right in that type of society. You could maybe say your family had lots of honor from their fight against the Empire centuries ago, and your father dishonored you in some way recently; you keep the story, and you then have lore and correct society.
    Destoryer1995 - Grammar edits are needed (go to google and search Homophone). As for your biography, watch out for the powergaming; killing an entire group of hardened rebels after a single night of archery training isn't just impossible, but complete fantasy. Finally, I'm not really the fan of you being a rebel, and I'm sure you wouldn't be either when you get RP killed in about two days and have to make a new character (you can hate the Empire, but don't be an open rebel).
    advarsel - Grammar and spelling check please (Suggestion - "Both"). Also, perhaps you want to change your race (and subsequently, your class) to Kree, because they actually have a mine. Glad you'll be active; that's kind of expected. On a final note; change your last name.
    Yorik - I don't like the "I'm coming from a different continent," deal, since people only know of this single continent, which is entirely ruled by the Empire. Also, the classes are pretty straightforward (if you've read the first post), and you seem pretty set on who you want to be.
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    posted a message on Road to Ages. [Updated to Survival Server][Closed read Thread]
    Last Nights (The 18th) whitelist.

    ACCEPTED:
    Niklas_wood1 (Kree/Miner) - Well written and an interesting backstory with plenty of detail for your class choice.

    Verilith (Kree/Miner) - Nice biography and welcome to the server I hope you enjoy your time with us.

    TRY AGAIN:
    advarsel (Iredoran/Farmer) - I find your biography hard to read, with your grammar and spelling. I would suggest you change your race choice to either a Bjardsoen or Kree as these are the races we're most looking for.

    VoiD__ (Bjardsoen/Swordsman) - Please change your character's name and remove the bit about being exiled by the Bjardsoen people as only the Lord can do this in-game.

    Dayshade (Cmokan/Mage) - Please choose a different race and class as we're currently overloaded with these. Also you can't say your father was a high ranking member of the Academy.
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    posted a message on Road to Ages. [Updated to Survival Server][Closed read Thread]
    Yes, two weeks is too long on average our players wait on tops roughly 32 hours depending on the time they apply and when I recieve the whitelist from my whitelisters.
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