Okay guys, I got through another paragraph of my fanfiction, and here it is. Yay or nay?
As the clouds cleared, and the pegasus guard and weather ponies departed, Ditzy Doo remained where she was. She was wet all over, shivering from the cold droplets of rain that had found places on her body. Subsequently, a voice called out from a balcony above. “I’m so sorry!” cried the feminine voice. Princess Luna flew down from her balcony and wrapped Ditzy Doo in a velvet towel with a blue “L” embedded in its stitching. “It’s all my fault,” she said. “I should have let you inside. Let’s hope you don’t catch cold.”
Anyways, I attempted to communicate through a certain "Quadren4", but failed. Anyways, I'm back. Unfortunately, for the moment, i must go. But musical remixes will herald my return!
*checks pony poll, dash equals 34 votes.*
*twitch*
Anypony lend me a diamond sword, or other weapon? The thoughts are entering my head again...
*walks away*
I saw a porn game featuring Rainbow Dash.
Welcome back!
Party time!
The Pinkie Pie account is still going and not yet abandoned? Hope 9Kbits doesn't come online/find out. (To Pinkie Pie: If you have not read it yet, read my signature and the document in my signature. For science. Or parties.)
9kbits should stop deluding himself that his blow-up sex doll is me.
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My name is Pinkie Pie, and I approve this plush toy.
Neutral until you add more.
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SasparillaCoca-cola all the way.
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"If it could be Google'd, don't post a thread about it."
I really, really wish they did.
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I hate peanut butter.
Y U NO UNDERSTAND JOKE.
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Seriously though, READ.
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I saw a porn game featuring Rainbow Dash.Welcome back!
Party time!
Have some brain bleach. It works wonders.
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I WARNED YOU ABOUT THE BOMBS, BRO.
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Sorry, but my life has your pet peeves, too. I'm just tolerant of them.
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I don't mind most bad grammar. I just get pissed off when I see those kinds of mistakes.
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9kbits should stop deluding himself that his blow-up sex doll is me.
I'l leave it at that.
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"Son, why are you clopping to 18+ pony fanfics at 4 in the morning?"
"I've lost control of my life."
I'd like to take Rainbow Dash past the fourth wall with me.
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Probably not!
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Of course you're alive and well. Internet, you know.
And you keep popping on and off. That's no fun.
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Huh!
RPing as a pony is pre-tty easy, in my opinion!
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That was a fake mustache!
It was for a picture shoot, silly filly!