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Character Name: Aranai Taia
Race: Eventian (description below)
Abilities: Can turn trace matter into magical constructs, and can imbue magic into items.
Weaknesses: no particular physical strength, and dislikes non-magical weapons. Especially ones that use gunpowder, so does not use them.
Bio: Aranai was born on the hostile world of Eventia. She grew up among the giants of that planet, and learned several tricks to living there. Her life was rather normal, until an inter-stellar war was launched, with Eventia selected as a common ground.
She participated in the Eventian rebellion, and due to their unmatched survival prowess, they were able to eliminate the alien life from their lands, although their space ships and technology was left behind. These were adapted and imbued to create glorious citadels and magnificent space cruisers.
Now bored of Eventia, she bought a place on a cruiser heading for New Genesis, in search of adventure. With no funding, she found herself in the under-belly of society, although quickly worked her way to upper class-dom through explotation of the magical elements in the atmosphere. Even though they were weaker and more scarce here than on Eventia, they were still prominent enough to make sophisticated items.
Personality: Rarely speaks and trusts no one, although is very observant of her surroundings and generally seems to be good at intellectual things.
Location of Birth: Eventia, a planet in a similar orbit to Neo Genesis
Other: New Genesis. Also, why do 1A and 1B but miss 2? accidental?
Eventia is a cold and hostile planet. It has a phenomenally thick ozone layer, which stops a lot of light from getting in. Because of this, plants grow to huge scales and the creatures are many times bigger than a similar one would be should it have evolved on a normal planet.
The poles are dominated by colossal mountain ranges and famous peaks, while the tropics are huge snow flats and conifer forests. Only 3o north and south of the equator are warm enough to have naturally occuring liquid water.
The magical citadels float above the ground, away from predators, and are anchored to one place by massive titanium chains. The towns of foragers that develop around such anchors do so because predators fear the shadow cast by the cities, so stay away. Unfortunately, anyone who lives in the shadow of such a city for long enough is twisted into a vile and repulsive version of it's former self.
The main sentient life forms of Eventia, the Eventians, are human-like in appearance, but have longer ears and larger eyes to keep away from predators. They are one of the few sentient life forms across the galaxy that still have natural enemies. They are the best in the solar system when it comes to magic, although their atmosphere is too cold for either plasma or gunpowder weapons to work. un-magic wars fought there use traditional weapons like swords, bows and trebuchets.
The Eventians have a unique advantage when it comes to fights though. They are able to tame and ride beasts known as Wyverns. They resemble the dragons of popular folklore, but their wings are feathery and their bodies have soft, downy fluff between the scales. They also have beaks with teeth inside rather than jaws. Many Eventians collect Wyverns and use magic to alter their genetics and perfect them.
Okay that is much better, and I love it. The only problem I saw was that the picture didn't work, and I had to copy the images URL and paste it into the search bar. Other than the I see no other problems. Accepted.
Eventia will be added to the locations section, in a new subsection titled "Neighboring planets" once I make a large update to the OOC when I make the IC thread.
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Character Name: Chryslaz 'Chunky' Chbunky
Abilities: Predorians are highly active learners and can analyse and adapt to almost any situations regarding tactics. Predorians can also lift up to three times their body weight which is approximately 300 pounds; and communicates through telepathy.
Weaknesses: Predorians are quite new at trying to be social, and trying to understand so many feelings that other species share, for example they do not understand a statement with sarcasm, or hyperbole's.
Water is very acidic for the Predorians, Predorians are usually very hydrophobic making water based attacks one of their weakest point.
Bio: Chunky was born on his home planet, T'em Ruul. His parents were part of the Predorian intergalactic survey, they traveled all across space to find out more about the planets in their star system, and then traveled to other star systems. Growing up, Chunky wanted to follow his parent's footsteps and become a part of their space crew; this was because he loved outer space and was very keen to learn more about it.
As he grew older his dreams slowly shattered as his parent's space ship was destroyed when they attempted to make contact with a newly discovered alien species, who turned out ot be quite hostile. as Chunky grew older, he no longer longed to become part of the PIS. He works by lifting large packages to be delivered by cargo ship.
Personality: Chunky is unusually quiet, he doesn't feel comfortable around a cluster of different people than himself. He rather daydreams and get's distracted; often in the middle of a conversation when he thinks he's seen something out of the ordinary. Chunky is usually confused when it comes to feelings another person is feeling, he rather asks a lot of questions regarding it.
Location of Birth: T'em Ruul
Other: New Genesis!
I don't see much wrong with it. He seems to be one who would rather stay back and be cautious unless he has to, and the weaknesses are also balanced with his abilities as well.
The only real problem I see is that there is not much info about T'em Ruul. If you could please work on that then that would be okay. Otherwise accepted.
T'em Ruul much like Eventia will be added into a new subsection. However instead of it being added to the upcoming "Neighboring Planets" subsection it will be getting it's own subsection in the locations section of the Opening thread.