Quote from Mad Cowboy
Most of those are pretty good the snowball thing is really clever and so is the mushroom men (shroom dudes?) but the watermelon thing nup i don't reckon. And anyway you can't pick up watermelons they smash instantly. Also don't do the whole different colour text and font thing it just makes you look weird. Its fine if you use a sensible text size and grey font but anymore is just to "hey look at me"
EDIT: sorry either you changed the color thing or my computer screwed up but the fon't is still to shouty
lol my bad, i put the red font in to highlight the main points since i sort of wrote alot and didn't want people to TL;DR on this, and i just used comic sans as the font, didn't think it was that bad.
ill change it to regular font now!