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    posted a message on The frozen Phoenix: Winterfall [Chapter 6]
    Nope, the man is supposed to talk that way. It will make sense.
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    posted a message on CLOSED: Please go to CrunchCarrot's thread
    Quote from draconic_cat

    "oh NETHER." gwen mutters, as she sees Srebro weilding the sword. "why does nothing ever have to be easy..." she holds Dragonbreath up, and prepares to block, dodge, or counter anything he threw at her. she had a few tricks up her sleeve as well. not very sure how effective it would be, she casts another trio of fireballs before putting away her spellbook.

    Gwendolyn: 47/50

    Srebro: 47/50 (( i'm guessing the fireballs didn't hurt him here, correct me if i'm wrong.))


    [[The fireballs before DID hurt him, but not those now. His health is at 38 I believe.]]

    Srebro was hit by all three fireballs, but they did no damage to his armor.

    He approached Gwendolyn, the sword in both hands:" Not feeling so arsonistic right now?" Overhead.
    "Don't you want to make a small fire?" Sideways.
    "Right now, it may be hot, but soon you will have VERY cold!" Thrust.
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    posted a message on The frozen Phoenix: Winterfall [Chapter 6]
    Ze great chapter 4.

    If you are smart, then.... HAHAHAHAHAAA.
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    posted a message on Minefic [Broken][See Parting Words]
    I usually only listen to conversations about nanotechnology.

    On another note: My chapter four of me story is probably out today.
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    posted a message on Nether's Encryption: The Wither's Plan [App System] [Progress: Book Two/Intro]
    I do too. What plot twist will there be in chapter 4 ?
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    posted a message on CLOSED: Please go to CrunchCarrot's thread
    Quote from draconic_cat

    ((I actually have a nasty feeling that the tide's about to turn. But you know, who's counting. It's not like Srebro got a buff from his Phylacter or anything. -_- /sarcasm. ))


    [[MUAHAHAHAHAA. I might be a bit godmoddy here, though so tell me if I am]]

    Srebro screamed in fear as the fire covered him. He ran around like a headless chicken. And then the fire extinguished.
    A part of his power had returned to him, just at the right moment. That meant Sharlon was watching him.
    "Well, I didn't get the The-Universe-Hates-You spell finished, but maybe I don't need it." He extended his hand and a sword made from ice appeared.

    "Prepare for the slice of your life !" He shouted triumphantly.

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    posted a message on CLOSED: Please go to CrunchCarrot's thread
    "Thou hast no idea who thou art facing ! I am Srebro Tonton The 1213rd of Altkuink...."Srebro says as he lands another Punch on Gwendolyn's nose

    Srebro 50/47

    Gwen 50/48
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    posted a message on Minefic [Broken][See Parting Words]
    Quote from Immortus

    Really? When I was in Chicago last year it was very, very, very warm. Like... hot. So hot. Though I suppose it depends what bit of america you go to. If you want cold weather, come to Britain. In northern Britain, Yorkshire area, it snowed last week, no joke. In may. Ouch.






    Lossos? That has quite a cool ring to it actually. And after the sequel the initials will change to LoSBoS, because of the second book. Bet you won't guess what it'll be called...


    Banner of Skiamance ?
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    posted a message on The frozen Phoenix: Winterfall [Chapter 6]
    I hast never experienced this Music. I usually listen to the Isengart Theme to get meself in my good mood. :P
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    posted a message on Minefic [Broken][See Parting Words]
    Quote from Immortus



    I write out my plots. It takes a while, but it helps in long run. Mindmaps and stuff are quite nice ways of developing plots.


    Indeed. And I just got the perfect nickname : LoSSoS.



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    posted a message on Destroy the Godmodder
    Better a sparrow in the hand...

    Red switch.
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    posted a message on The Aether's Rage (Finished!)
    Okay. I like stuff. Though one thing that had me bothered for quite the time: Errr, you write monstrous sentences. sc1020 has the same problem in my opinion, though not as much I think. Try breaking down the sentences, otherwise your characters seem to speak like this: Wellwhatdowehavehereinteresting !
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    posted a message on Minecraft "Quest for the Real World"
    Meh, this could use improvement. Try to write longer chapters. Also, if you want your story to be read you have to make it a bit different. There are maaaaanyyyyy maaaanyyyy survival fanfictions in this forum.

    10/4
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    posted a message on [FMF APPROVED!] InFinity: A world of which is hidden. OCs still accepting.
    Aha. Quite interesting. I would suggest adding spoilers. It sizes down the text ALOT.
    The actual story is nicely written, the plot seems good too, I don't have problems with the pacing, and...

    Just because I can, I will offer you the title of a Lich Lord in honor!
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    posted a message on Minefic [Broken][See Parting Words]
    Quote from Immortus

    I can't really have a nickname... Poor me.


    Imomortus :P

    Quote from OnceInALongTime

    Chapter 11 (Winning On A Double Sided Mirror) is out! Click my banner!

    Yay !
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