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    Here is the one thing.. the goblin lore i made a while ago, i think i posted it and deleated it last month..

    Any ways... This is it..



    My application for " Greenskins " a faction made up of Orcs & Goblins!

    ***The Lore of The Goblins***

    After the Forgotten ones created the Dwarves ... one brother worked in secret...building. He didn't think the dwarfs were strong enough and wanted to make a warrior to fight the dwarfs, he spent days making the goblins, but when they were being made another forgotten found out what was going on and the one who was making the goblins was killed, but before that he managed to make two more races the: orcs and the trolls. The goblins were vulgar, horrid, mean, and greedy. Although they were created with many Mistakes but the forgotten let them live as they did not want to destroy a creature they made... However imperfect. All were kin to each other and lived peacefully for a time, but then a disagreement developed between the Orcs and Trolls, so the two tribes began "The Great War of the Greenskins." They fought for 2 years before the Goblins tried to help. The Goblins helped both the Orcs and the Trolls making the orcs resent them as cowards. A great Orc shaman cursed goblins to live forever as ugly, disturbed creatures. During the war the Trolls and the Orcs allied and killed many, many Goblins, forgetting their own war. The war was Blood thirsty and ravaged the land for some time; the Goblins felt that they should press onward to victory, so they did. The war lasted for many years and years to come, The war ended when the feuding between orc and trolls thinned out their people and killed them, in addition the other races found them hostile and slaughtered them where they could...The goblins hid and were not found as they had gone off to the bowls of the earth to find themselves at peace.

    The Goblins Above ground were named traitors to their brethren, their own flesh and blood, they were to be killed on sight, never to be seen in daylight, which foretold there great movement to the depths of the world. There they came to make themselves hate their enemies. They were scattered all around the world and was to be never cared for the years to come. They never sought to seek each other out until they accidentally came to find one another underground. One Goblin set out to find the rest, his name is Queth, One of the greatest warriors of the golden ages of the goblins. Queth tried to seek out all goblins and unite them under one banner, the banner of the Goblins. The Goblins Discovered new Things and new ways to build items and tools... they became stronger, faster, smarter. They created a massive cave system and a huge main city, lit up by very few torches, the city was made by scraps they found foraging the world, what wood they can find is used to light and maintain the city, as few trees grow beneath the earth. The city is mainly a huge circle rock formation with houses in the rock and around the circle with many roads that lead nowhere, or to houses, or slums. This city is called, City Of Rocks. There are Small clans of goblins like the royal Wargriders or the horrid Mefsins owning their own towns close enough to the main city for trade, but far enough off from it to not be directly threatened in case of war.

    After many years of lost knowledge the Goblins were found again by the dwarves, the leader of these were Tirral Greatbeard, a loyal dwarf to his brethren. The Goblins didn't think when they killed the fist dwarf taking the first blood, the Goblins then started wanting more, and more blood that was their first instinct to kill. They were hardwired to this, to kill... The Dwarves like the Orcs and Trolls were angered by the goblins and a mass killing spree began. The dwarfs were Strong foe, shorter but stronger and better armed... They fought the Goblins like they were digging for gold! The war went on for ages not knowing were each main city is. The dwarves found the Goblin city first but were unable to take hold of it, for there the goblins has amassed a great host, and the goblin hordes were able to fight back the dwarfs to their halls of gold... The Goblins lost many but remained strong, to this day they are still searching for the other lost goblins of The Great War of the Greenskins, and after this was done the dwarves, thick in their drinks and luxuries, came to forget the goblins, like all the rest.

    ***Lore of the Orcs***

    After the "Great Greenskin War" The Orcs were atacked by the other races, the found the and killed them where they standed. After many years of putting up with this the orcs retreated to the edges of the earth so thinned out there was only two orcs every mile or so... The two greatest orcs were Durg and Zurg. Brothers they be, they united to become the kings.The comanding kings Were Strong as a rock and tough as steel, able to move mountains to to make a new things. They are truely the greatest orc kings.

    The Orcs lived above ground Commaned by the great brothers there the built many citys there and were connected with trade routs and roads. The orcs saw many sturctuers and archetec befor they were bannished from the land.. They built out of the strongest stone and the Shineyest rock. They forged their Army with anger and hatered.. soon after the orcs gained power they raided villages and burned them all down. The orcs soon wershiped the forgotten that made his brothers. The orcs almost forgotten about their Goblin brothers they now seeked them for help, not war. They watned to unite the army of the Greenskins. They called out under rocks, under trees, under buildings.. they could not find their great brotheren. One day whiel the orcs marched on they fell in a hole it felt like there was a million twists and turns the orcs soon saw light, no it was not lava, it was made from torches they came to an end of this journey, they all fell out and found many small creatures standing around them whispering to each other talking of them...Then, they noticed that they were all goblins and all were brothers. A Goblin came out with robes and a crown, the goblins name was Queth. Durg and Zurg picked their selfs up and told him of their victory and would wish to unite each of their forces. Queth accepted this and showed the orcs around And the goblins quickly made a great throne beside Queth and from there the orcs and goblins devised a plan to Destory the above ground and to help to kill many humans that is enemys of the orcs. They also started to make houses and citys like each other many citys.. The orcs and goblins started to control parts of the world.As the world fell to them a Group started to rebell and attack the Orcs at their bases setting them ablaze. The orcs and goblis were pushed back to the Edge of the Region of Aeonis, almost entering Ederwyn. But, the Orc's homeland was at the very same spot they were pust to. The Orc's numbers grown and grown into a mass army.. the orcs never giving up pushed back to the goblins homelandand still controlls all that land.

    The orcs and the goblins never fell and the alliance betewen each other is strong and never ending.

    ^^^ ***This is still a wirk in progress*** ^^^



    -the ancient notes of the one who created the goblins an orcs-

    Chp.1: The Creation.

    It began all began when the creator…<<page is torn, a note resides in its place>>… (As you read the note you begin to hear words In your head)

    *sigh*,

    It was the fifth year of our existence as the <<the word has been scribbled out and replaced with ‘The Forgotten’>>, and we were naive. So very naive, we believed that all creatures could live in harmony, well, that was not the case. Our brother, <<the word has been erased>>, became jealous of us. He envied us, hated us. I came to accept that fact, and him, over time, but I could never accept what he did. We had created the holy races: The Humans; intelligent and cunning, The Elves; agile and lithe, and The Dwarves; stout and brave. But he, he could not bear them so <<erased>> did what he always did, and hid himself away, for years, in the bowels of the earth, and in his anger began work on a race that would be perfect, but we stopped him, unfortunately, not in time. His creations were unfinished, hideous, but With our naïve hearts, young and gentle, we could not kill them, however we could not let them roam the earth for that would be folly. So we left them to rot, and hoped they would die. They did not.

    Chp.2: The rise of the Goblinkind

    In the centuries that followed, the monsters, goblins and orcs <<erased>> called them, slowly drifted out of our minds. Little did we know that under the surface of our world a threat grew, unknown to man and god alike. For years our children had fought and died, we were used to it, so when villages on the borders of the known lands began to burn we thought little of it. However from vision, whence we had readily in those days of yore, we saw a great host amassed in the west. Like nothing we ever saw before, it burned and pillaged all in its path and when we spied closer they were the monsters returned, stronger, smarter, and faster than our fledgling experience had allowed us remember. Our hearts broke, and our anger flared. We banished <<erased>> from this world and gathered a great host of our own, commanding them. We dared not use divine intervention for fear of rebuke from our father almighty, who had warned against such things. We clashed at the spot where <<the words here are smudged beyond comprehension>> today. The battle lasted a month and more, the hosts both numerous in number and skilled in combat. When finally the goblins’ leader was slain and the host fled did we breath a sigh of relief. Destruction of the children had been averted. However the goblins, like the last time, did not die. Forced to retreat to the bowels of the world, they stayed there for lifetimes and more, fighting amongst themselves and becoming more warlike. Their civilization grew and great cities under the world were constructed. I fear their time is coming again.

    -Signed, <<erased>>



    <<you flip the page>>

    <<you see the very edges of the page still intact, nothing legible upon them, another note stuck in place>>…(the hand writing he is different and newer)

    Ch.3: second coming of the goblins

    Today the world is at rest, peace but not for long. In the rare visions we are granted upon occasion have shown us the goblins rising up like an angry storm, envy and hatred in their souls. Grand constructions are taking place in the west and north once more: quarries being mined, towers being raised, and metals fired. The sounds of conquest are in the air, but only time will tell the outcome of the disfigured ones: Acceptance? Or death? I am writing in the case of our destruction, lest all knowledge of the green hordes be lost.

    -signed, <<erased>>



    __-...:The Story of Tirral:...-__

    ....Tis' be my story, brothers....

    *takes a gulp of ale from his mug* Tis' be me only way i be say'in tis'.. Yer gonna want to take a chair....




    I was there when my brothers broke into a massive cave.Gold! an' lots of it we started puting torches up all around the massive cave. we striped mine the cave we branched off in many directions and angles, if you went in you may've never came out.. some got lost but we found each outher, all safe when a rigimin saw some thing sparkel, Diamond! We saw much diamond in that cave, 1..2...3...4..5..6 ...7 pockets of diamond! We were rich! For a while we stayed there. But, some one went missing, we searched for days...

    I saw all my brotheren call to arms.. Glogan, Dul'ulkrik, Blis they were the ones i remember an' their at tis' tavern er' right now,
    all i could remember was there was lots of Chaos, with the pitter patter of many feet, screaming, Barking through thoughs Caves, I still remember the Screams of my brothers falling to 5-7 goblins yelling for help trying to make them stop gnawing on his leg * Tirral Shudders As if a cold wind suddenly came through the door * ....an' blood, ye' lots 'o' blood every were, so much I could swim in it, Goblins! There were many of 'em! good thing we had freinds to help us!

    I kept every thing in this book 'er *hands over a leather Book, binded with string, and coverd with a bit of ale and some dirt stains, some pages also have drawings..* All my note are there... take a look.


    __-..:Tirral's notes:...-__

    Day 1 in the mines Lots of dirt on meh' boots an' beer in meh' belly! We hit a cave system!

    Day 2 in the mines .... broke 2 picks, and lost my stone one.. maby i droped it in that lava pool... any way, got tones of Stone, coal, an' iron.(picture)

    Day 3 in the mines... almost fell in a hole... fine though, we hit Gold an' some Diamond! were gonna be rich!

    Day 4 in the mines, Some one went missing, were geting help from the town can't get th- (note was obscured by some dirt)

    Day 5 in the mines i could of swore i saw some one behinde one of the rocks down there, they just told me to sleep, I saw some one.. an' i'm gonna find out who that someone is!

    Day 6 in the mines we found him.. his skin was torn of his body, his head was missing and there was a note by his hands, couldn't read it because it was obscured by blood, lost dwarf was killed his name I must forget, he was a close freind it might bring - (the rest of the note was wore down by water, tears perhaps?)

    Day 7 in the mines, We uncovered an ancient evil, we perfer to call them, Goblins.

    Day 8 in the mines, We made contact with them, they attacked, wounding 4 killing 1 i got out my axe killed only 2 and wounding 6

    Day 9 in the mines, We found a camp of them killing all 13 of them, and got an' scroll of some sort of profession system:

    Day 10 in the mines... Were off to there base of opperations to kill them.. one, by one.

    Day 11 in the mines... WE FOUND THEM!

    Day 12 in the mines they are fighting hard i'm wounded bad but i can still fight

    Day 13 in the mines They followed us when we ran back! Oop! got to go...(there are pencil lines that run from the last letter to the edge of the page)

    Notes - Goblins... All i got from that stupid scroll..

    The goblins were made in secret by one forgotten he didn't think the dwarfs were strong enough and wanted to make a warrior to fight the dwarf he spent days making the goblins but when they were being made another forgotten found out what was going on and the one who was making the goblins were kill but before that he manged to make two more
    races the orcs and the trolls thow he made them to fast and didn't care what happen to them they became to hate each other due to there own hatred of them self they broke out in war called the green skin war the goblins that were spend more time on tried to help each race in there battle but at last the orcs started to hear of the goblins helping the trolls so
    they attacked the goblins to also on the other side the trolls start to hear of the goblins helping the ores so they also attacked the goblins after a few years there wasn't many goblins left beside a few who had made a small government in the under ground cave they lived and worked they without any problems soon the
    ores and trolls died out and the goblins remained underground in till one day the dwarf dug into the goblins cave and they didn't know what they were and thought they would do the same as the ores did so as soon as one came in the goblins striked in a mad way they killed dwarf after dwarf in till the hold mining group was gone they soon realized that they were not meant to be
    nice and caring they were warriors and that's what they were to be they set up bases in all there cave sand killed anyone who dares attack them



    ***Goblin's Military ranks***

    Gatherer- one who goes out and and picks up the bones of the dead and fights the lowly monsters in the caves

    Raider- one who is good at fighting and will out out of the base to kill anyone in there caves

    Orcbane-a really good warroir - one who has shown his skills in batlle and is ready to take on hard jobs

    Rouge-one who has shown his kills in bows

    cavestalker-one who has great skill in killing in the shadows of the caves

    Warlord- controls the Orcbane and lower - the highest rank a warrior could want one who has shown his skill and won many battles


    ***Orc's Military ranks***

    Grunt- Warrior class of the orcs, Very low rank

    Raider- High warrior class of the orcs, one who has shown his skills in batlle and is ready to take on hard jobs

    Trollbane- High warrior class of the orcs, one who has shown his skills in batlle and is ready to take on hard jobs (need 50 in sword or axes)

    Shoota- one who has shown his kills in bows

    Meatstalker-one who has great skill in killing in the shadows of the caves

    Warlord- controls the Trollbane and lower - the highest rank a warrior could want one who has shown his skill and won many battles


    ***Farming ranks***

    grandfarmer-one who has great skills with growing food and has grew 1,000 wheat

    Captainfarmer-one who has made many farms and has a great skill at farming

    farmer-one who wishes to learn the way of the farmer


    ***Special ranks***

    Thunder callers-only one (cleric)-one who can heal others and then shot lighting down is feared and respected by all

    Shaman-Only one (mage)- A very powerful spell weaver looked highly on by others

    The Great Goblin - the Ruler of the goblin-kin the one who make the laws and rules in the faction (if Goblins are in power)

    The Overlord Orc - the Ruler of the goblin-kin the one who make the laws and rules in the faction (if Orcs are in power)


    Tribal/power system!!!

    Goblins or orcs can overthrough their king/ ruler.
    Who every kills the leader/pays an assassin becomes in-power.
    Clans can be put in-power if one of their clan members become in power, if they are in-power for a long time they become Royal, Royal clans get more land.
    Poeple can also be in-power if they are a "Shaman" or a "Lightning caller", also putting their clan in-power.


    Rules!

    1. You may kill your leader to gain lordship of the races.
    2. You cannot increase the size of your house if your not told.
    3. No letting any one in the cities if their not allies or allowed by the Great Goblin / Overlord Orc.
    4. Your house MUST fit in with the rest if it is not, you will be told to take it down.
    5. Your clan cannot have an orc in it if you are a goblin or a goblin in it if you are a orc,
    6. NO CHANGING CLANS once you chose, your stuck with them, unless IC death
    7. DO NOT SPEAK DOWN to someone if they have a question, though you may be barbaric to others if they are mean / hateful of you or another member of the faction.

    Economics / Roles

    Orcs are military based and are brutal and barbaric, They are mostly warriors and hunters. They can be traders / diplomatic people too.
    Goblins are Diplomatic and Good with trades and handling things, they can be good warriors too.

    Goblins and orcs WILL BE IN THE SAME FACTION!
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    Quote from Shin_Takeshi

    Which is why my Naga lore began with me knowing it wont be implemented for some time :smile.gif:


    Meh, Well I created " Goblins " and doesn't think it'll ever be accepted :/ i deleted it after alot of negative comments to me, if you wish to see it ( which I think you wont ) just PM and i'll re-post it...

    Anyways, that's why people Should think ahead...
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    posted a message on * The Lonely Vale * !!! GRAND OPENING !!! A Player-Oriented Heavy Fantasy RP Server. Create Your Story Today!
    Why does everyone think that there " Faction Lore " is good enough to get accepted Right off the bat? I personally wish that there was a lot more room for more factions, but from the look of it that will most likely NOT happen for a long time. Yes I do confess making a faction lore of my own, but i deleted it for the sheer annoyance of other people like Vic being assholes to me.

    Most of these faction ideas are great an good an' dandy, but just got to learn patience IS a manor and where every you go damanding anything is just gets a negative response.

    Good work on the Lores.. But they won't be accepted unless more player slots are added, or if a LOT of factions are taken down...
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    Crash... again.... really... This is just hopeless..
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    Quote from miner3217

    IGN:(Minecraft username: miner3216)

    Sources: Nope just this thread.
    Why do you want to join: I think it would be fun to play on this server, contribute to the over all feel of the rp-ingness of the server and to play minecraft!


    Name: Urvir
    IC Age: 327 (aren't all dwarve's old? lol XD)
    Race: Dwarf

    Profession: Forge Master

    Background: Found abandoned in an old forge trying to strike a spark on some timber to warm up. Taken into the dwarven colony and forced to work in the mines. toughened from years of work in the mines and battle ready! :Furnace:


    Erm... Work a bit.. erm i mean a lot on the background... Just a suggestion.. Just.. erm... saying >.>
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    posted a message on * The Lonely Vale * !!! GRAND OPENING !!! A Player-Oriented Heavy Fantasy RP Server. Create Your Story Today!
    GAAAAAHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHY AGAIN, WHY!!!
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    Quote from zeroknight101

    they are fixing it and i say let them take there time. i think the more time they have the better the server will be ^^


    Yes i know but i hope it won't be like it was yesterday, not even really being able to play :/
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    Quote from tonyri1234

    Is it within the realm of possibility to make everyone on the server have a mod to log in like premium wood? If we could all be forced to use that mod, then the game would be much more realistic. Plus i'm an elf, so our base would look prettier.


    that won't work..
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    this is how i am when the server crashes :/
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