Oh, thanks. I really need some of this too if I want to improve, and I'm accepting this because you're far more experienced, so tomorrow I'll take some time to fix this.
A small question: Did you thought KP was Weak William? If so, I should correct that part, because I was trying to say KP's uncle was Weak William.
(This is not a hate thread or anything, sometimes, the things that bother me are just small mistakes, and that's how a forum works. I need some advices so this doesn't bothers me so much) I'm writing here because I really need help with a trouble I have. The thing is certain threads or posts annoy me a lot, and sometimes they don't even deserve it!!! The things that bother me the most are these:
1. When someone makes a thread in the obviously wrong forum, especially when it's an WIP map outside the WIP section.
2. When some mom or dad makes an account only to ask for help so they can make something either obviously impossible or extremely easy for their four year old son, and they don't even bother about adding an avatar or a signature.
3. When someone makes an account only to make a bad thread, about anything.
4. When someone doesn't even care about proper grammar.
5. When someone basically wants a challenge map done for them, and they still consider the map theirs.
6. When someone makes stupid questions.
7. When someone sponsors themselves in another persons thread.
Hello! I'm KillerPixie and this is my survival journal. It will consist of a recount of the events happening while I strive to survive in a modded survival world!
I want to spice this up a bit, so I want you guys give me challenges by posting them, and I'll try to do whatever you want. Unless I really don't want to do what you challenged me to do, you can be sure I'll fight for it.
Also, I'm using the Infinity modpack by Feed The Beast, you should really check it out!
To get into the journal, I'll just say I hope you have fun and give me advices about how to make this more interesting. And here it is!!!:
Current Challenges:
Make a ranch and fence it off.
Find a skeleton spawner.
Completed Challenges:
Find a village.
Day 1 download link (Make sure you have the right modpack, FTB Infinity Evolved, before downloading).
I spawned in a beach with some fancy trees and flowers. They all seemed friendly, so I was sure monsters would be like that too.
There was nothing in the modpack called butter (Sorry that was my last bad pun)
I looked around a bit and I found this:
If my biology studies were right, it was a cinderpearl and it summons a prince. (Oh, sorry, I said no more bad puns)
Woo! An oasis, with palms! Biomes o' Plenty rules!!! (See? No puns!)
Also, There was a zombie on the minimap, creepy.
I made a pick with the palm wood and then I dug down and found an underground cave, perfect for collecting stone.
Then I got some tools and realized most caves are underground, I meant lake.
Before:
After:
You got to be kidding me. This didn't happened, OK?
I started looking for a place to build a house..
That thing actually got me, I thought it was some sort of sand you could quickly make.
Darn, perfect for a starter's home. And I saw a pig with Mr T's head!!!
I keep exploring and I only find this.
But then...
Finally some trees! That day, this place stopped being an outback, and became my home. It was perfect: trees, a river...
Wow, those didn't seem like nice guys.
Oh, they actually were. They even ran away from me! (Soooo cute)
So I built the best... shelter... ever!
Shiny!
After this I went looking for coal.
Just what I needed.
O noes! it's getting late!
Something weird was staring at me from up there.
Only my house-box witnessed what happened last night. I hope the hobgoblins are OK.
Suddenly, while writing this journal, I started hearing a creepy sound outside. I think it was an enderman dying, and really close from me. I'm scared.
Day 2:
Remember that thing that was staring at me yesterday? Well:
There is a steppe, east of my Outback. Hm.
I made a furnace, yay!
Then I ate Mr T.
And I went to collect some stone.
lol kewl
Man, this Outback is a life spot between deserts and steppes, like Mesopotamy. I had no idea where I would find sheep.
Hello, human. Do you want to befriend us?
No.
At least he wasn't Mr T.
Was that a pink tree?
A horse stole my bed.
And I went to sleep.
Day 3:
Today, I started building a ranch.
This is the zone where I'll build it!
Yeah, I knew I'll had to destroy my beautiful mansion,
First I needed some more wood.
The trees in the Outpost aren't exactly coast redwoods, but the funny thing is that the second tallest tree in the world is in Australia (Yeah, I'm that smart).
I'll use acacia for the floor.
I got to the pink tree.
Sakura wood, I could use it for the ranch, but its too beautiful to chop down (Its not that I don't like the color of the planks (Yay! Double negation!))
I saw an odd green thing on the minimap.
I headed there and found this, but it wasn't green.
Then, I look up and...
There was a cauldron inside the cabin, thought it may be useful.
My axe broke, meh.
So I crafted another one.
And I hurried back home.
Don't worry, I won't ruin this thread by screaming "SPARTA!!!!!" every time I see a monster.
After bravely fighting the zombies and the skeletons, I found the hobgoblins were using my house.
ok, nice story, i like your writing style, but WHAAAT? Im like so confused like what? How dose the first part with the void link up to the first chapter?? I mean WHAAA? And i didn't even understand it. Like the mobs went away and then steve was begging for mercy of a black creature? Like WHAAT?
WHATT?
Jajaja! Thanks for the support. You'll soon understand how this chapters link. I should check your stories too!
i edit my message above to add some scary sound to minecraft now only if i can add some more music discs or add some scary music to a command block from the internet any ideas
Try combining blindness with night vision, I'm not sure but I think it would work.
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Yeah, this way is better. Thank you, asanetargoss!
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I've edited what I considered the biggest problems of Chapter 1 and I'll definitely take into account your advices. Thanks!
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Oh, thanks. I really need some of this too if I want to improve, and I'm accepting this because you're far more experienced, so tomorrow I'll take some time to fix this.
A small question: Did you thought KP was Weak William? If so, I should correct that part, because I was trying to say KP's uncle was Weak William.
Anyways, thanks for your help, I'm happy you've read this!
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(This is not a hate thread or anything, sometimes, the things that bother me are just small mistakes, and that's how a forum works. I need some advices so this doesn't bothers me so much) I'm writing here because I really need help with a trouble I have. The thing is certain threads or posts annoy me a lot, and sometimes they don't even deserve it!!! The things that bother me the most are these:
1. When someone makes a thread in the obviously wrong forum, especially when it's an WIP map outside the WIP section.
2. When some mom or dad makes an account only to ask for help so they can make something either obviously impossible or extremely easy for their four year old son, and they don't even bother about adding an avatar or a signature.
3. When someone makes an account only to make a bad thread, about anything.
4. When someone doesn't even care about proper grammar.
5. When someone basically wants a challenge map done for them, and they still consider the map theirs.
6. When someone makes stupid questions.
7. When someone sponsors themselves in another persons thread.
Please help!
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Um, a Gillian Anderson skin? I don't see this kind of stuff all days. But how do you want her exactly?
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I've added a picture of Killer Pixie, I hope he looks like you imagined him!
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Hello! I'm KillerPixie and this is my survival journal. It will consist of a recount of the events happening while I strive to survive in a modded survival world!
I want to spice this up a bit, so I want you guys give me challenges by posting them, and I'll try to do whatever you want. Unless I really don't want to do what you challenged me to do, you can be sure I'll fight for it.
Also, I'm using the Infinity modpack by Feed The Beast, you should really check it out!
To get into the journal, I'll just say I hope you have fun and give me advices about how to make this more interesting. And here it is!!!:
Current Challenges:
Make a ranch and fence it off.
Find a skeleton spawner.
Completed Challenges:
Find a village.
Day 1 download link (Make sure you have the right modpack, FTB Infinity Evolved, before downloading).
Day 2 download link.
Day 3 download link.
Day 1:
I spawned in a beach with some fancy trees and flowers. They all seemed friendly, so I was sure monsters would be like that too.
There was nothing in the modpack called butter
(Sorry that was my last bad pun)
I looked around a bit and I found this:
If my biology studies were right, it was a cinderpearl and it summons a prince. (Oh, sorry, I said no more bad puns)
Woo! An oasis, with palms! Biomes o' Plenty rules!!! (See? No puns!)
Also, There was a zombie on the minimap, creepy.
I made a pick with the palm wood and then I dug down and found an underground cave, perfect for collecting stone.
Then I got some tools and realized most caves are underground, I meant lake.
Before:
After:
You got to be kidding me. This didn't happened, OK?
I started looking for a place to build a house..
That thing actually got me, I thought it was some sort of sand you could quickly make.
Darn, perfect for a starter's home. And I saw a pig with Mr T's head!!!
I keep exploring and I only find this.
But then...
Finally some trees! That day, this place stopped being an outback, and became my home. It was perfect: trees, a river...
Wow, those didn't seem like nice guys.
Oh, they actually were. They even ran away from me! (Soooo cute)
So I built the best... shelter... ever!
Shiny!
After this I went looking for coal.
Just what I needed.
O noes! it's getting late!
Something weird was staring at me from up there.
Only my house-box witnessed what happened last night. I hope the hobgoblins are OK.
Suddenly, while writing this journal, I started hearing a creepy sound outside. I think it was an enderman dying, and really close from me. I'm scared.
Day 2:
Remember that thing that was staring at me yesterday? Well:
There is a steppe, east of my Outback. Hm.
I made a furnace, yay!
Then I ate Mr T.
And I went to collect some stone.
lol kewl
Man, this Outback is a life spot between deserts and steppes, like Mesopotamy. I had no idea where I would find sheep.
Hello, human. Do you want to befriend us?
No.
At least he wasn't Mr T.
Was that a pink tree?
A horse stole my bed.
And I went to sleep.
Day 3:
Today, I started building a ranch.
This is the zone where I'll build it!
Yeah, I knew I'll had to destroy my beautiful mansion,
First I needed some more wood.
The trees in the Outpost aren't exactly coast redwoods, but the funny thing is that the second tallest tree in the world is in Australia (Yeah, I'm that smart).
I'll use acacia for the floor.
I got to the pink tree.
Sakura wood, I could use it for the ranch, but its too beautiful to chop down (Its not that I don't like the color of the planks (Yay! Double negation!))
I saw an odd green thing on the minimap.
I headed there and found this, but it wasn't green.
Then, I look up and...
There was a cauldron inside the cabin, thought it may be useful.
My axe broke, meh.
So I crafted another one.
And I hurried back home.
Don't worry, I won't ruin this thread by screaming "SPARTA!!!!!" every time I see a monster.
After bravely fighting the zombies and the skeletons, I found the hobgoblins were using my house.
And don't say I destroyed theirs!
... ... ...
I can't resist, its only today, OK?
Day 4 is in page 1, post 7.
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Yeah, actually I was reading Minecraft. I like it!
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Jajaja! Thanks for the support. You'll soon understand how this chapters link. I should check your stories too!
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Maybe you should start by making the map. This way you'll know what texture you need for each block.
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I'm glad you're liking this, we´re gonna meet some major characters in the next few chapters!
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I would change the natural music of minecraft with the resource pack
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Maybe a friend and I could help you with this, I'll speak to him.
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Chapter 1 is out now! Make sure you read it!
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Try combining blindness with night vision, I'm not sure but I think it would work.