That's the thing as he said on a different website not too long ago,"Decided to post my false report tutorial on the official minecraft forums under the disguise of warning server owners about people who do this. So far one guy is calling me out on my bull crap but everyone else is falling for it."
This is a nice read, in my opinion. There's one big mistake, though: every single time you mention "the man", you do it by saying "the man". The word "he" appears only once, so a better use of pronouns would improve the story. Also:
It penetrated through his skin, and sent him flying towards the ground.
What penetrated the man? The way you're writing this, it looks like the zombie itself did. Last, and definitely least, you could have made up a more original name for Aerys.
I still liked the story, you just need to practice more. Congratulations!
As part of a medieval city project, I faced the challenge of building liftgates for my castles. The mechanism is pretty simple, nothing compared to those working computers and other stuff you find here, but it's also pretty neat, in my humble opinion.
Screenshots:
How to use:
Just lower the lever and the door will close. Raise it and the door will open.
Creeperton looked pretty much like a normal village, but something caught his attention inmediately: A church, directly in front of the town hall. A solemn song, came out of it, and John could see a strange light coming out from the second-floor window.
If John looked right, he could see a large group of villagers congregated around a regular well:
At his left, a couple of houses remained isolated from the town, near the woods.
"You are accused of attempted murder. Now, let's get this thing started" All the guards were called in and, from that moment on,the trial was a stupid mockery to law and player rights, every guard supported without any evidence having seen the group plotting a murder. The mayor paid no attention to anything the accused said, so when he told them he would give a verdict, everyone knew what was about to happen.
John was given his sword back, and told they would judge the other prisioners, with justice. When he left the town hall, he was faced with the choice of where to go next. A forest stood left of him, to the west, and the village lied to his right:
The prisioners were left in the prision for days, but then, the same guards that have had them captured, came to the dungeons and asked them to come with them. They were taken up the stairs and the mayor spoke again from upside the scaffold. "Is there anything you would like to say before your trial?"
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You're right. Why are you not realizing!!!
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Oh yeah, finally some real good constructive criticism. Nice post!
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What? But you made the video!!!
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Once I spawned directly above a lake of lava. But it wasn't that bad once I survived the burns, I had a portal in day 3!
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This is a nice read, in my opinion. There's one big mistake, though: every single time you mention "the man", you do it by saying "the man". The word "he" appears only once, so a better use of pronouns would improve the story. Also:
What penetrated the man? The way you're writing this, it looks like the zombie itself did. Last, and definitely least, you could have made up a more original name for Aerys.
I still liked the story, you just need to practice more. Congratulations!
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Where's your chapter??? It's weekend!
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Im really excited because the only reason one of my friends beats me in PvP is because he spam clicks and that's over!
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New chapter released! It was kind of hard to write, lots of descriptions and new characters, but I think it payed.
Enjoy!
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I need this mod. Now.
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As part of a medieval city project, I faced the challenge of building liftgates for my castles. The mechanism is pretty simple, nothing compared to those working computers and other stuff you find here, but it's also pretty neat, in my humble opinion.
Screenshots:
How to use:
Just lower the lever and the door will close. Raise it and the door will open.
Download:
Here.
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Awesome map! By the end of it I was always checking on my head, and I like desert temples!
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((I'm skyping with you))
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((I just left your home 15 minutes ago, and yes it will))
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John:
Creeperton looked pretty much like a normal village, but something caught his attention inmediately: A church, directly in front of the town hall. A solemn song, came out of it, and John could see a strange light coming out from the second-floor window.
If John looked right, he could see a large group of villagers congregated around a regular well:
At his left, a couple of houses remained isolated from the town, near the woods.
"You are accused of attempted murder. Now, let's get this thing started" All the guards were called in and, from that moment on,the trial was a stupid mockery to law and player rights, every guard supported without any evidence having seen the group plotting a murder. The mayor paid no attention to anything the accused said, so when he told them he would give a verdict, everyone knew what was about to happen.
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John:
John was given his sword back, and told they would judge the other prisioners, with justice. When he left the town hall, he was faced with the choice of where to go next. A forest stood left of him, to the west, and the village lied to his right:
The prisioners were left in the prision for days, but then, the same guards that have had them captured, came to the dungeons and asked them to come with them. They were taken up the stairs and the mayor spoke again from upside the scaffold. "Is there anything you would like to say before your trial?"