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    posted a message on The Manhattan Project - Closed
    I got it :3
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    posted a message on The Manhattan Project - Closed
    Quote from stev_med

    lol i did do that and we were talking about rp examples not bio. I appreciate the offer what is your skype?

    katieparkmccreeper

    :3
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    posted a message on The Manhattan Project - Closed
    Quote from stev_med

    I must be confused then you said look at what others did for their rp example i did what Echinda_uno did in their app like you said i should. Have you ever read a book that is how doulogue works in novels. Can you tell me how you expect rp example to be? also why do i need a last name that was never a requirement?

    Also i tried fixeing some of the grammer

    Try writing your application in Microsoft Word, then use spell check on it. Copy and paste it into the reply box.
    Also, if you read my application, I put in a letter. Try doing that in your rp or bio. It makes it much more appealing and interesting.
    Try adding my on skype stev. I might be able to help you a bit. But I will NOT write it for you.
    Thanks!
    -Katie Park
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    posted a message on The Manhattan Project - Closed
    Quote from stev_med

    OOC -
    IGN: stev_med

    This isn't an Accept or Deny thing, I am NOT an admin.
    But just a word of friendly advice, use the edit tool and make the RP example a bit longer. The bio is long enough though. If you want a really good chance at getting in, then make sure that you extend you RP example.

    AND I REPEAT: I AM NOT AN ADMIN, THIS IS ONLY ADVICE

    Hope you take my advice!
    If you have any questions about further increasing your chances, then add me on skype (katieparkmccreeper) or send me a private message.

    - Katie Park
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    posted a message on The Manhattan Project - Closed
    Quote from Blfngl

    Great edits. Accepted!

    Thanks Blf! :3 Can't wait to see what the server has to offer!

    Also, erm...
    What's the server IP? I can't seem to find it...
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    posted a message on The Manhattan Project - Closed
    OOC -
    IGN: Echidna_Uno
    Gender: Female
    Age: 16
    Timezone: Central time zone - Texas
    Have you read the rules: Indeed. There’s something about frugalness. I guess I’m not very frugal.
    Have you read the lore: Yes.
    RP Experience: I have roleplayed as a survivalist in a zombie Apocalypse, and roleplayed as a theif in a dark ages roleplay
    Fallout Experience: Played most of Fallout 3, finished Fallout NV.
    Define Meta Gaming: The act of using outside or previously gained knowledge within a gaming universe for personal gain or advantage
    Define Power Gaming: Not playing by the rules, ignoring the NLR and RP set to get to the "top".
    Skype - katieparkmccreeper

    IC -
    Name: Katie Park
    Gender: Female
    Age: Arround 21 (as of the time on her pip-boy)
    Race: Caucasian - Human
    Appearance: Black hair with Greenish-grey eyes (Heres a link to my MC skin if you want to have a visual example: http://tinyurl.com/c8rlgsv)
    Signifying Traits: Wary of others. Does not go hungry easily from months of getting used to little or no food.
    Signifying Skills: Able to move around unnoticed by the unwary eye. (guards can and might spot her) Easy to work as a thief.
    S.P.E.C.I.A.L.'s:
    (40 points to distribute, maxes out on 10)
    Strength- 4
    Perception- 6
    Endurance- 6
    Charisma- 4
    Intelligence- 7
    Agility- 9
    Luck- 3

    RP example:
    The scene is a dry, burnt up trading town in Manhattan, with only a few people in the gun store. Not much is being noted by the civilians who go throughout their daily lives in small little shacks scattered around. Katie walks along the shelves, looking for a good place that the owner can't spot her take a handgun. As she finds a spot, a man walks quietly along the isles. Unnoticed by Katie, as she quickly slips the gun into her pouch and starts to walk towards the door, the man stops her. He holds her by the arm as she stares blankly into space, waiting for her next move...

    "Well, well, well... What do we have here, young lady trying to steal a handgun? Trying to slip away?" The man asks. "Depends on how you look at the situation... Maybe I'm just, let’s say, borrowing it until further notice?" She replies, slowly drawing out her hunting knife. Everyone in the shop starts to look at the pair. "How about... No. Now, let's just put that gun back on the rack and pretend this never happened, okay?" The man says, as he notices the knife at his stomach. Katie pulls away from the man, putting the gun back on the shelf. "Fine then, I'll be on my way if you would be so kind." She says. The man looks at her confused. "So, you think you can just get away like that, without paying a price for your attempt to steal from this old man's shop?" "Well, not exactly, no." She replies quietly. "I think a small price might not be too much to ask for..." "Glad we see eye to eye on that!" The man laughs, stopping abruptly as a knife is now lodged in his throat. Dying from blood loss, the man falls to the ground. "You there, stop! Get that girl!" A man says chasing after her. From behind the man rings a gunshot, the bullet, striking Katie, knocks her to the ground. Then everything fades to black as she bleeds out on the old, rusty concrete.

    Biography:

    Katie Park was born in the year 2269. She has had not much of a life except stealing and killing to provide for her family. Trusting no one, barely even herself sometimes, she walks through the tough wasteland life after her parents and brother were murdered by a group of looters when she was 12 for a single sack of caps. She now walks alone, sometimes stealing from shops to get food and ammunition for her 9mm handgun. She is armed only with her gun and a hunting knife. Many times she has almost been killed while shoplifting, but with her ability to sneak around unnoticed by the unwary eye, she is able to sneak around grabbing things with ease. Katie is about 5' 6" with long black hair and greenish-grey eyes. (Heres a link to my MC skin if you want to have a visual example: http://tinyurl.com/c8rlgsv) Katie has been clinging on to survival since she was 12, stealing from stores, mugging people, all sorts of things. She doesn't have much money but will do anything to keep herself safe. Stopping only occasionally to rest or actually buy or sell something, she carries on with her wasteland story. Maybe, just maybe, she might change her ways and abide to the laws.
    As she continues to try to make her way in this desolate wasteland, she finds a note in her pip-boy, it read:

    Dear Katie,
    This is your father's old friend Mr. Jones, If you remember getting your pip-boy for your 10th birthday, you will remember that I was the one who fixed it up for you. I never told you this, but I programmed it to show you this message between 10 - 20 years later. Please, do not get in any trouble in the future, I trust that you are not dead and that someone else is not reading this. If you are reading this, Katie, note that the wasteland will be a dangerous place for you, you may be a sneaky little girl, but you are also very vulnerable. Make sure you have something to protect yourself with always, and remember, stay away from ghouls and other irradiated things. If you do find yourself to get radiation poisoning, make sure you ALWAYS have some Rad-Away. I hope this note comes in handy in your exploration of this damned wasteland. And remember to always stay away from looters. Come find me in the North-side of Manhattan, I am including my pip-boy tracking signal in this message, try to contact me. 10297W95

    100 0101 100 1110 100 0100 101 1111 100 1111 100 0110 101 1111 100 1101 100 0101 101 0011 101 0011 100 0101 100 0111 100 0101


    Katie's way of living is quite solitaire. She doesn’t trust anyone or even talk much, most of the time she wanders the wasteland in search of a suitable place to live. Other times she is in a village or town getting supplies. Other than that she only stays to herself, sometimes forgetting what a human voice sounds like. But as she gets used to the silence she continues on throughout her life, deserting her pas self in her thoughts. She often struggles to keep sane, making her way into towns more often every day. Her life in the wasteland is often quite lonesome. But during her never ending task to find her father's friend, she finds herself not believing herself sometimes. But as she tells herself over and over again, that she will find Mr. Jones, and she will survive.

    With her life slowly changing, Katie makes her way to Northern Manhattan to meet her father's old friend... As she makes her way she encounters many problems along the way, looters, bandits, and wild animals trying to attack her. And this my friends, is where your reading stops, and the story begins.........

    Tell me if you need me to make any edits, or add anything else! Thanks!
    -Echidna_Uno
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    posted a message on The Manhattan Project - Closed
    Ok, also, I accidently sent you a skype request. Just ignore that. :P

    I just decided to type your name into skype and see what popped up xD
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    posted a message on The Manhattan Project - Closed
    OOC -
    IGN: Echidna_Uno
    Gender: Female
    Age: 16
    Timezone: Central time zone - Texas
    Have you read the rules: Indeed.
    Have you read the lore: Yes.
    RP Experience: I have roleplayed as a survivalist in a zombie Apocalypse, and roleplayed as a theif in a dark ages roleplay
    Fallout Experience: Played most of Fallout 3, finished Fallout NV.
    Define Meta Gaming: The act of using outside or previously gained knowledge within a gaming universe for personal gain or advantage
    Define Power Gaming: Not playing by the rules, ignoring the NLR and RP set to get to the "top".
    Skype - katieparkmccreeper

    IC -
    Name: Katie Park
    Gender: Female
    Age: Arround 21 (as of the time on her pip-boy)
    Race: Caucasian
    Appearance: Black hair with Greenish-grey eyes (Heres a link to my MC skin if you want to have a visual example: http://tinyurl.com/c8rlgsv)
    Signifying Traits: Wary of others. Does not go hungry easily from months of getting used to little or no food.
    Signifying Skills: Able to move around unnoticed by the unwary eye. (guards can and might spot her) Easy to work as a thief.
    S.P.E.C.I.A.L.'s:
    (40 points to distribute, maxes out on 10)
    Strength- 4
    Perception- 6
    Endurance- 6
    Charisma- 4
    Intelligence- 7
    Agility- 9
    Luck- 3

    RP example:
    The scene is a dry, burnt up trading town in Manhatten. With only a few people in the gun store. Not much is being noted by the civilians who throughout their daily lives in small little shacks scattered around. Katie walks along the shelves, looking for a good place that the owner can't spot her take a handgun. As she finds a spot, a man walks quietly along the isles. Unnoticed by Katie. As she quickly slips the gun into her pouch and starts to walk towards the door, the man stops her. He holds her by the arm as she stares blankly into space, waiting for her next move...

    "Well well well... What do we have here? A pretty young lady trying to steal a handgun? Trying to slip away unnoticed by anyone?" The man asks. "Depends on how you look at the situation... Maybe I'm just, lets say, borrowing it until further notice?" She replies, slowly drawing out a small blade. Everyone in the shop starts to look at the pair. "How about... No. Now, let's just put that gun back on the rack and pretend this never happened, okay?" The man says, as he notices the knife at his stomach. Katie pulls away from the man, putting the gun back on the shelf. "Fine then, I'll be on my way if you would be so kind." She says. The man looks at her confused. "So, you think you can just get away like that? Without paying a price for our attempt to steal from this old man's shop?" "Well, not exactly, no." She replies quietly. "I think a small price might not be too much to ask for..." "Glad we see eye to eye on that!" The man laughs, stopping abruptly as a knife is now lodged in his throat. Dying from blood loss, the man falls to the ground. "You there, stop! Get that girl!" A man says chasing after her. From behind the man rings a gunshot, the bullet, striking Katie, knocks her to the ground. Then everything fades to black as she bleeds out on the old, rusty concrete.

    Biography:

    Katie Park was born in the year 2269. She has had not much of a life except stealing and killing to provide for her family. Trusting no one, barely even herself sometimes, she walks through the tough wasteland life after her parents and brother were murdered by a group of looters when she was 12 for a single sack of caps. She now walks alone, sometimes stealing from shops to get food and ammunition for her 9mm handgun. She is armed only with her gun and a hunting knife. Many times she has almost been killed while shoplifting, but with her ability to sneak around unnoticed by the unwary eye, she is able to sneak around grabbing things with ease. Katie is about 5' 6" with long black hair and greenish-grey eyes. (Heres a link to my MC skin if you want to have a visual example: http://tinyurl.com/c8rlgsv) Katie has been clinging on to survival since she was 12, stealing from stores, mugging people, all sorts of things. She doesn't have much money but will do anything to keep herself safe. Stopping only occasionally to rest or actually buy or sell something, she carries on with her wasteland story. Maybe, just maybe, she might change her ways and abide to the laws.
    As she continues to try to make her way in this desolate wasteland, she finds a note in her pip-boy, it read:

    Dear Katie,
    This is your fathers old friend Mr. Jones, If you remember getting your pip-boy for your 10th birthday, you will remember that I was the one who fixed it up for you. I never told you this, but I programmed it to show you this message between 10 - 20 years later. Please, do not get in any trouble in the future, I trust that you are not dead and that someone else is not reading this. If you are reading this, Katie, note that the wasteland will be a dangerous place for you, you may be a sneaky little girl, but you are also very vulnerable. Make sure you have something to protect yourself with always, and remember, stay away from ghouls and other irradiated things. If you do find yourself to get radiation poisoning, make sure you ALWAYS have some Rad-Away. I hope this note comes in handy in your exploration of this damned wasteland. And remember to always stay away from looters. Come find me in the North-side of Manhattan, I am including my pip-boy tracking signal in this message, try to contact me. 10297W95

    100 0101 100 1110 100 0100 101 1111 100 1111 100 0110 101 1111 100 1101 100 0101 101 0011 101 0011 100 0101 100 0111 100 0101

    With her life slowly changing, Katie makes her way to Northern Manhattan to meet her father's old friend... As she makes her way she encounters many problems along the way, looters, bandits, and wild animals trying to attack her. And this my friends, is where the story begins.........

    Tell me if you need me to make any edits, or add anything else! Thanks!
    -Echidna_Uno
    Posted in: PC Servers
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    posted a message on The Manhattan Project - Closed
    OOC -
    IGN: Echidna_Uno
    Gender: Female
    Age: 16
    Have you read the rules: Indeed.
    Have you read the lore: Yes.
    RP Expierence: I have roleplayed as a survivalist in a zombie Apocalypse, and roleplayed as a theif in a dark ages roleplay
    Fallout Expierence: Played most of Fallout 3, finished Fallout NV.
    Define Meta Gaming: A term used to describe method and strategy in a game with a ruleset.
    Define Power Gaming: Not playing by the rules, ignoring the NLR and RP set to get to the "top".
    Skype - katieparkmccreeper

    IC -
    Name: Katie Park
    Gender: Female
    Age: Arround 21 (as of the time on her pip-boy)
    Race: Caucasian
    Appearence: Black hair with Greenish-grey eyes
    Signifying Traits: Wary of others. Does not go hungry easily from months of getting used to little or no food.
    Signifying Skills: Able to move around unnoticed by the unwary eye. (guards can and might spot her) Easy to work as a thief.
    S.P.E.C.I.A.L.'s:
    (40 points to distribute, maxes out on 10)
    Strength- 4
    Perception- 6
    Endurance- 9
    Charisma- 4
    Intelligence- 7
    Agility- 6
    Luck- 3

    RP example:
    The scene is a dry, burnt up trading town in Manhatten. With only a few people in the gun store. Not much is being noted by the civilians who throughout their daily lives in small little shacks scattered around. Katie walks along the shelves, looking for a good place that the owner can't spot her take a handgun. As she finds a spot, a man walks quietly along the isles. Unnoticed by Katie. As she quickly slips the gun into her pouch and starts to walk towards the door, the man stops her. He holds her by the arm as she stares blankly into space, waiting for her next move...

    "Well well well... What do we have here? A pretty young lady trying to steal a handgun? Trying to slip away unnoticed by anyone?" The man asks. "Depends on how you look at the situation... Maybe I'm just, lets say, borrowing it until further notice?" She replies, slowly drawing out a small blade. Everyone in the shop starts to look at the pair. "How about... No. Now, let's just put that gun back on the rack and pretend this never happened, okay?" The man says, as he notices the knife at his stomach. Katie pulls away from the man, putting the gun back on the shelf. "Fine then, I'll be on my way if you would be so kind." She says. The man looks at her confused. "So, you think you can just get away like that? Without paying a price for our attempt to steal from this old man's shop?" "Well, not exactly, no." She replies quietly. "I think a small price might not be too much to ask for..." "Glad we see eye to eye on that!" The man laughs, stopping abruptly as a knife is now lodged in his throat. Dying from blood loss, the man falls to the ground. "You there, stop! Get that girl!" A man says chasing after her. From behind the man rings a gunshot, the bullet, striking Katie, knocks her to the ground. Then everything fades to black as she bleeds out on the old, rusty concrete.
    Biography:
    Katie Park was born in the year 2269. She has had not much of a life except stealing and killing to provide for her family. Trusting no one, barely even herself sometimes, she walks through the tough wasteland life after her parents and brother were murdered by a group of looters when she was 12 for a single sack of caps. She now walks alone, sometimes stealing from shops to get food and ammunition for her 9mm handgun. She is armed only with her gun and a hunting knife. Many times she has almost been killed while shoplifting, but with her ability to sneak around unnoticed by the unwary eye, she is able to sneak around grabbing things with ease. Katie is about 5' 6" with long black hair and greenish-grey eyes. (Heres a link to my MC skin if you want to have a visual example: http://tinyurl.com/c8rlgsv) Katie has been clinging on to survival since she was 12, stealing from stores, mugging people, all sorts of things. She doesn't have much money but will do anything to keep herself safe. Stopping only occasionally to rest or actually buy or sell something, she carries on with her wasteland story. Maybe, just maybe, she might change her ways and abide to the laws, but until then, she continue to walk alone...

    Tell me if you need me to make any edits, or add anything else! Thanks!
    -Katie Park
    Posted in: PC Servers
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