Unfortunately, I have a few things which will not allow me to accept this application in its current form.
Foremost is the 'Alexandria's Genesis' syndrome. Since it is an fake condition, I'm afraid you won't be able to use it here. Implementing some sort of genetic alteration - even a beneficial one - by a different name and with slightly different symptoms - and even if the syndrome is fictional - would be acceptable, though, and I'd love to discuss this point more over PM.
Second - and I should have made this clear in the OP - is that you don't need to spend time detailing clothes, as the mission would have prescribed 'uniforms'/'suits'.
That's all that I see for now. Edit your application to reflect these alterations, and I'll re-assess. Thanks in advance.