ok, nice story, i like your writing style, but WHAAAT? Im like so confused like what? How dose the first part with the void link up to the first chapter?? I mean WHAAA? And i didn't even understand it. Like the mobs went away and then steve was begging for mercy of a black creature? Like WHAAT?
WHY IS LIFE SO HARD!!! I can't belive it! I finish chapter five and guess what happens. MY INTERNET BREAKS. And than, guess what hapend. I LOST MY WORK!!! Don't worry, ill rewrite it tomorow. I just can't belive i lost my internet connection right when i was about to save. :/
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I read it again, after you "fixed" it. I have to say, everything dose make more sense now.
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Alright, alright. I got 2 stories. First one is just random, and other is really in depth and it has 6 chapters.
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ok, nice story, i like your writing style, but WHAAAT? Im like so confused like what? How dose the first part with the void link up to the first chapter?? I mean WHAAA? And i didn't even understand it. Like the mobs went away and then steve was begging for mercy of a black creature? Like WHAAT?
WHATT?
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Nice
I like how this went from adventure creepypasta to more of a romantic story
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cool. I like the new chapters so far
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SPOILER ALERT
well, i did plan for him to kill the dragon and use his egg to summon a wormhole to get him back. Btw, can you find the references?
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nice! Thanks for showing me
I like the story so far, but, it seems as any usual minecraft story. It has some potential, so keep up the work !
by the way, i feal like the cover art took way more effort to make than it should have
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SWEET! This could be classified as creepy pasta doe
Anyway, welcome to literature!
P.S. I'm a boy writer too >:(
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So, ladies and gents, the moment you've all been waiting for, chapter 5 is out, after 5 moths!(Talk about irony :/ )
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WHY IS LIFE SO HARD!!! I can't belive it! I finish chapter five and guess what happens. MY INTERNET BREAKS. And than, guess what hapend. I LOST MY WORK!!! Don't worry, ill rewrite it tomorow. I just can't belive i lost my internet connection right when i was about to save. :/
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ok ill do my best
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Chapter 4 OUT!!!! YES!!!!!!! FINNALY!! AFTER MONTHS OF WAIT IT IS HERE, THE NEW CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sorry for the delay, i havent been on for ages.
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it worked! Sorry for the late reply, i left the forum a long time ago! PS: The problem was fixed a long time ago
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btw i finally made my acc so yeah i subbed and can you sub back?
Heres a link:
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCxfchPq9TRcalv5HXyd0PVw/feed