Past experience with roleplay: Several other Minecraft RP servers.
What is “Meta-gaming”?: When your character somehow gains information of something that could or could not pertain to him, and he uses it even if in a real world knowing this information would be impossible.
What is “Power-gaming”?: When you force an action on someone without their chance of response
-IC (In character)-
Name: Chorradon Kilnim
Age: 25
Race: Imperial
Appearance: Standing at six foot three Chorradon is graced with short black hair and dark green eyes and weighs right around two hundred pounds.
Appearing like most Imperials, Chorradon is of Colovian descent and has paler skin then his Nibenean counterparts.
Personality: Chorradon seeks to better himself in most ways conceivable. Martial prowess is at the forefront of his efforts to gain power and no matter
what it is he has set his mind to, the applications of any such thing tend to lean towards violence. Remaining calm in most occurrences has always been something he has prided himself on, though he normally drops that facade in the face of success. Especially if he is alone.
Abilities (Magic and Skills): Slightly schooled in Mysticism. Seven Magicka. Lesser Blink and Lesser Reflect.
Backstory (Please write a minimum of 1 paragraph. Quality over quantity.:
Chorradon was born to a simple woman. His father having left shortly after he was born left his care to the woman and her family. It wouldn't be long until his mother would marry again, to a slightly successful merchant she had known when she was younger. His step-father was a demanding man, always requiring the best from his children and who, on occasion, would drive them to fits of rage over their faults and lack of success. Eventually they came to carry his perception and beliefs within themselves, striving for perfection in all that they did. Like most of his siblings Chorradon would leave Chorrol, seeking improvement and to raise himself far above the petty achievements of his step-father. Heading along the southern borders of the Imperium he would eventually find himself in Leyawin. Working odd jobs and sometimes selling his skills with the sword he soon had enough to make his way into the mages guild. Receiving light education there in the ways of Mysticism he would soon depart again, continuing to work wherever he could until he found himself within Anvil.
Why don't White-Listers have Whitelisting perms? Usually on servers there's a separate rank called Whitelister that only has the permissions to /whitelist add [Name] or /whitelist list
(Was whitelister on several servers)
Thank you Poet for your contribution to the whitelister civil rights movement. Because of you, us whitelisters (just myself currently) can now add people to the whitelist. This is a glorious day in Hareveth,
Hello and thank you for applying to our server.
I'm sorry to say I cannot accept you.
1. Your Appearance and Personality are much too short.
2. Fix your God-modding and Power gaming.
Sorry Bard252, I am a whitelister but I cannot add you to the server's whitelist. I review apps and then message the Admin. It seems he is not around currently but I will try to get a hold of him as soon as possible. Sorry for the inconvenience.
Hello and thank you for applying to our server! Incredible application, this server needs another real Skaven, and you have just provided the perfect model.
Hello and thank you for applying to our server. I'm afraid I can't accept your application just yet. It could use a lot more in it, just seems a bit lacking in content. Just add more to all the sections and capitalize that which needs to be capitalized.
Thank you for applying to our server. I'm afraid you need a bit more of a description for your character, you haven't explained how he looks at all. So sorry, but that's all that needs correcting. Give your character a real appearance and you can be accepted.
IGN:
Dexevara Age:
18 How did you find this server?:
RevolvingOcelot, Kralion and Game_Geek referred it to me. Tuk-Tuk
IC: Name:
Melenas Race:
Human Age:
28
Personality:
He’s reserved and serious. He follows his own code which seems to be led by honor and loyalty. He seems cold and unlikable because of his mistrust of strangers but once you get on his good side he can be extremely warm and friendly. He seem to have been wandering for a long time and always as a lot of stories to tell, which may not always be entirely true once he gets a couple pints. He always stay true to what he believes to be right, he considers order and justice to be some of the most important things in a society. He also seem to have a strange affinity to nature like if he had somekind of connection to it.
Appearance:
He has a strong and imposing stature, standing at 6’3 with broad shoulders he wears a plate armor completed by multiple chainmail accessories amplifying his size.Over his plate armor he wears a dark green tabard with the emblem of some old forgotten house. His face combines a strange mix of severity and delicacy, partially covered by a well-trimmed dark brown beard. He usually wear a chainmail hood that covers his mid-length chestnut hair that make his dark brown eyes look like 2 sphere of obsidian. His strong nose peeks over is bearded lip and his smoothly drawn mouth.
Ambitions:
Melenas doesn’t consider himself a man of ambition, he does what he need to survive and what he needs to help those he swore to protect, further than that he doesn’t think dream of anything in particular. He assumes that if things are to get better, they will.
Likes:
Even if he is mainly a soldier he always had something for nature. As far as he can remember he always enjoyed the company of animals and vegetation. He usually carries plants with him for balms and such, he consider his relation with nature as a blessing. He takes only what he needs and make use of everything he takes. Obviously he is a skilled sword man who enjoys a good fight and the glory of the battle. He likes those who can live for their conviction or at least respect them. He is also someone who isn’t afraid to drink and feast when he can.
Dislikes:
He dislikes those who can’t respect order, those without discipline or moral values. He despises cheats and frauds or any dishonorable beings.
RoleplayExample:
Younger Melenas, clothed of light leather armor, is riding a horse as fast he can through the forest. A horn blow can be heard behind him as he tries to go faster. He turns around to look at his pursuers who seem to be getting closer. Holding his messenger satchel closer to him ducks in an vain attempt to go faster. The rain makes it difficult for him to keep balance on the leather saddle. Suddenly as another horn blow can be heard, his horse slips on the slippery rocky trail. He is then thrown off the back off his horse and falls on the hard ground. All his body is aching but he knows he has no other choice but try to keep going. As he tries to get back up, his pursuers are catching up. On the ground, Melenas only hear the rain beating his ears. A tall man in dark plate armor gets off the back of his horse and starts to walk to the crawling boy. Melena seeing him from the corner of his eyes tries to get up but suddenly get forced back down by a painful kick from the man. The boot that kicked him his now crushing is chest against the ground. As he ripped cut the bag loose from Melenas’s grip the man shouted over the loud weather “Where are you going with these, Courier?” Melenas kept quiet, looking at the man angrily. The boot dug deeper in Melenas’s spine, “You don’t need to die today boy, just tell me where the recipients of these letters are, sooner or later we will find out anyway so be glad I give you the chance to save your life.” Melenas lowered his angry eyes full of tears to the ground as the pain grew stronger and sharper in his back. The young boy with shame on his face started muttering something; the man took him by the shoulders and took the boy’s mouth closer to his ear “What did you say?” Melenas sobbing repeated in the man’s ear “They…they are at the…castle” he took a deep breath and went on “Castle Sparrow’s End”. The man satisfied called one of his men to come and take the kid with them. Melenas, defeated looked at the tall man who had just crushed him as he was taken away. The man pulled out his sword and quickly killed Melenas’s wounded horse. The man gave the horse one last sad look and went back on his horse. Melenas, now riding with one of the enemy riders, was out of strength and finally fell unconscious on the horse.
Hello and thank you for applying to our server. Your application is great, I look forward to having you with us.
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-OOC (Out of character)-
Minecraft Username: Coastav8or
Age: 22
Past experience with roleplay: Several other Minecraft RP servers.
What is “Meta-gaming”?: When your character somehow gains information of something that could or could not pertain to him, and he uses it even if in a real world knowing this information would be impossible.
What is “Power-gaming”?: When you force an action on someone without their chance of response
-IC (In character)-
Name: Chorradon Kilnim
Age: 25
Race: Imperial
Appearance: Standing at six foot three Chorradon is graced with short black hair and dark green eyes and weighs right around two hundred pounds.
Appearing like most Imperials, Chorradon is of Colovian descent and has paler skin then his Nibenean counterparts.
Personality: Chorradon seeks to better himself in most ways conceivable. Martial prowess is at the forefront of his efforts to gain power and no matter
what it is he has set his mind to, the applications of any such thing tend to lean towards violence. Remaining calm in most occurrences has always been something he has prided himself on, though he normally drops that facade in the face of success. Especially if he is alone.
Abilities (Magic and Skills): Slightly schooled in Mysticism. Seven Magicka. Lesser Blink and Lesser Reflect.
Backstory (Please write a minimum of 1 paragraph. Quality over quantity.:
Chorradon was born to a simple woman. His father having left shortly after he was born left his care to the woman and her family. It wouldn't be long until his mother would marry again, to a slightly successful merchant she had known when she was younger. His step-father was a demanding man, always requiring the best from his children and who, on occasion, would drive them to fits of rage over their faults and lack of success. Eventually they came to carry his perception and beliefs within themselves, striving for perfection in all that they did. Like most of his siblings Chorradon would leave Chorrol, seeking improvement and to raise himself far above the petty achievements of his step-father. Heading along the southern borders of the Imperium he would eventually find himself in Leyawin. Working odd jobs and sometimes selling his skills with the sword he soon had enough to make his way into the mages guild. Receiving light education there in the ways of Mysticism he would soon depart again, continuing to work wherever he could until he found himself within Anvil.
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So cool that the server is open now, I hope to join soon and see what has changed!
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Hello and thank you for applying to our server.
Accepted
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Thank you Poet for your contribution to the whitelister civil rights movement. Because of you, us whitelisters (just myself currently) can now add people to the whitelist. This is a glorious day in Hareveth,
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Hello and thank you for applying to our server.
I'm sorry to say I cannot accept you.
1. Your Appearance and Personality are much too short.
2. Fix your God-modding and Power gaming.
Hope you try again, until then,
Denied
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Hello and thank you for applying to our server.
Your app is well written.
Accepted
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Hello and thank you for applying to our server!
Incredible application, this server needs another real Skaven, and you have just provided the perfect model.
Accepted
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Hello and thank you for applying to our server!Great application, nice to get something outside the norm. Hope to see you on soon.
Accepted
Hello and thank you for applying to our server.
I'm afraid I can't accept your application just yet. It could use a lot more in it, just seems a bit lacking in content. Just add more to all the sections and capitalize that which needs to be capitalized.
Denied
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Hello and thank you for applying to our server!
Very nice app, it was a good read and I found nothing wrong with it.
Accepted
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Hello and thank you for applying to our server!
Very nice app, simple and yet it displays your more then competent abilities.
Accepted
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Once the server is up you will get on.
Accepted
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Thank you for applying to our server.
I'm afraid you need a bit more of a description for your character, you haven't explained how he looks at all.
So sorry, but that's all that needs correcting. Give your character a real appearance and you can be accepted.
Denied
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Hello and thank you for applying to our server.
Your application is great, I look forward to having you with us.
Accepted