You've got something good going here, but it still needs work. Firstly, you need to get rid of all the stuff from TAC. It makes the application look like something copied and pasted. Secondly, your physical description of your character is rather meager. You posted a link to his visual description, but we need to know what he looks like as if it were written down without pictures. Stuff to include would be height, weight, his dominant hand, eye color, hair color, skin color, whether or not he's missing any limbs or other extremities, and any other physical description you can think of. Also, your answer for when to speak IC could use more specific details.
Your biography has something started, but it just isn't full of enough detail yet. You mention his family haphazardly throughout the first half. A good tip would be to organize the bits about the family at the very beginning. Also, the info about his home is contradictory. He's "raised in the wilds," but a household is mentioned. You could mention something like a Log Cabin, a Cave, or even that his family is a traveling band of thieves or charlatans. Also, you should elaborate further in what "good life skills" he learned, as well as how he learned them. All you currently have is when, and it's a pretty big timegap. You could mention some of the exploits he had with his family, the lessons he's learned. You could also further elaborate on the father's past as a soldier, as well as how he came to start living in the wilds with his family. It would also help if you explained where these wilds are on the map, and if they're anywhere near civilization.
And then there's the part where a group of heinous vagabounds show up out of nowhere and burn down the house AND the forest, with the fates of his family being left ambiguously in the air. It's never explained WHO those bad guys exactly are show up and be nasty, or what ultimately happens to the family. And did all of them really get away? Did the father die fighting? Did he witness any of it? I recommend having something that leads up to the moment of tragedy. Also, why burn down the forest when they could just burn down the house? Forests are usually filled with fresh Game to hunt for, as well as providing timber for building houses and furniture. That is, IF there's any civilization nearby. You could say that the fire spread out of control and burnt down the forest. The moral-decision-making part was well made. Killing people is not easy, especially for first-timers. (Not that I know that firsthand, I'm no killer.)
You need to elaborate further on what his strengths are. A human personality is not easily defined with just a few words such as "Kind and Funny." Also, I know that he uses a bow, but you need to mention that. "Deadly Aim" is not the only thing you can mention about that. Also, you never bothered to mention his hunting skills in his list of strengths. Even if it was mentioned prior in another section of the app, you NEED to list it as a strength, otherwise it cannot and will not be counted as an actual strength you can use.
Also, your weaknesses don't make sense. People who hunt for a living do not have weak muscles, especially if they've done it their whole life as indicated in his bio. Also, the way you portray it as a weakness rather shallow. Having weak muscles is a weakness because, well, it makes them physically weaker. And people on here are not shallow to the point where they'll shun him just for looking weak. Also, "Having a small bow" is not a weakness because he can easily get a better, new one. Heck, he can even make one himself if he knows how. Finally, "having a lust for literature" is also not a weakness. It's a passion. A personality trait. You also need to explain where this interest in reading comes from. Finally, your character is a child. They will be coming to Thaeron. A city. Child Characters cannot own homes, so think about your character's age a bit more before you re-submit. Also, there's also the fact that you haven't mentioned any aspects of the world, such as the Island of Enris, the Cordolan Confederation and its nations, or the threat of the Undead. You should try to make your character more connected to this server.
Finally, several of your traits don't match your bio. There's nothing in your bio, or even your strengths/weaknesses about being a miner, or knowing how to use simple weapons. There's also nothing about being a lumberjack in there either, or voice impressions. The only ones that make sense are Orator, Sneak, and Ranged Weapons. I recommend upgrading either Sneak or Ranged, given how your character is supposed to be awesome at hunting and archery. Take another look at the traits list and make sure there isn't anything else you'd like.
I've highlighted all the work you need to do on this application before it can be accepted. I'm getting the impression from your application that you're not taking this application as seriously as you should be right now. I'll give you another shot, but I ask that you please take this seriously and be through. Leave no stone unturned. Don't hesitate to put in as much detail as you can. Also when you re-post your application, don't edit the first post of your app. Put it on a new reply to the OP. I wish you good luck in your next attempt, and hope for the best.