This is my first attempt at creating a custom map with a friend of mine. After working for a while, we decided we needed feedback before continuing, or we'd have to edit the whole custom map if someone says something sucks. That's where YOU, the reader, comes in. I hope you will consider testing this map for me.
What's in the map so far:
14 Levels (More to come)
Checkpoint system ranging up to 13th level
2 "Boss Battles" (6 Boss Battles To be in V1.0)
Dialogue and BGM (Added in V1.0)
This map is considered just over halfway done. I have already planned everything out in my mind, so I will know the approximate percentage rate of the map. It can be seen below.
Completion Percentage: 63%
Full Story SPOILER ALERT(DON'T READ UNLESS YOU'RE PLANNING ON NEVER PLAYING AGAIN)
Bryce Blockhead is a private in the minecraftian army. He is assigned on a mission to infiltrate an important supply HQ owned by the craftminers, minecraftia's enemy. He goes to the supply HQ to find it empty, goes to the back door, then blacks out. Later, he finds out he was trapped in his own mind, and there was no way out. He soon figures out that he has to accomplish obstacles set by the evil man that trapped him in here to get to the orbs of illusion. These orbs hold the key to getting out of his mind. Along the way, he meets another voice who names himself Alex. He tells him the whole story. He was trapped in here because Tromedlov (Voldemort backwards) is part of the craftminers, and recieves supplies to build a machine. Tromedlov says that the machine will bring peace to all of minecraft, by striking fear into everyone and forcing rebellion out of every corner, therefore making a strict, peaceful world. This machine is the very one that trapped Bryce in his mind. Later on, Bryce finds out Alex is a craftminer as well, and tried to get out of his mind and failed after realizing Tromedlov's plan. Bryce eventually gets out of his mind, and knows there is only one thing left to do. He was to get to Tromedlov's base, (the location which Alex revealed) and destroy his machine once and for all. The general of the minecraftian army discouraged him to go after hearing his story, claiming he had gone mad. Bryce goes and fights the final boss of the game. At the end, he takes off Tromedlov's mask to find the general himself lying there. Bryce had just killed the general of minecraftia. He had become a fugitive. Despite how far he'd come, it wasn't over just yet.
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NOTE: I will accept harsh criticism, no matter how harsh. Of course, I'll be hurt, but if the criticism is that bad, I probably deserve it! Also, PLAY ON PEACEFUL to avoid creeper explosions!
I will keep all map quotes, good and bad, here:
not very good. i started in the main room, then got lost in where to go since there is no pressure plate to go through the first iron door, then there should be more "dummies" which actually fire, making it more difficult. overall, i saw the mind behind the map your were trying to create, but is hard to follow.
Love the map, my favourite adventure/custom map in a long time
Keep it up
Download Link
Mediafire - Click Here --- Remember to play on peaceful!
When you are done, please write a review below. It may be harsh, and it may be primitive. I will take any feedback. (Unless you say some parkour part is impossible, and you're pretty sure its possible).
Well... if you are willing to do a WIP map, reply to this, and I'll give it to you. Also, in case you're planning to, don't review the 'visual' part of my map. Thanks!
Map Name: The Orbs of Illusion
Link to Thread: CLICK ME
Notes/Comments: The map is a WIP. I also would like you to be as harsh as you need to be. This is my first map, so you should expect disappointment. Thanks!
Has the potential to be an amazing map. After finishing the map and fixing problems that other people have already reported, this map could be one of the best ones out there. I personally think the category of the map should be changed to Adventure/Parkour though, because when I was playing the map, it felt more like an adventure map with a parkour aspect to it.
Thank you for the feedback! I know this is somewhat off-topic, but do you happen to know how to edit a post's name or delete it? I never really figured that out...
I know you recommend the map not being published, but is it mandatory? Since I barely get any feedback, it practically isn't published yet. I will be waiting for a reply on this, and if it isn't mandatory, expect a PM!
I liked the map ... (To be honest i cheated at the water part :unsure.gif: But its because its the first time i play a parkour map and that water part is hard has hell ... Wich is really cool )
Oh and at the first boss ... only the 4 dispensers closer to the entrance (I think it was only 4) were shooting ... I have no idea why, and if that only happened with me or not but i thought I should tell you :smile.gif:
Thanks for telling me! Im going to check it out. Look for a 0.3d update, and it should have the fix on the changelog!
Going to start on the trailer soon!
the song im going to use is Night hounds by x ray dog. If you want to change this, comment on my profile, or pm me immediately!
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I did? Sh** lag. Can a mod delete my second post please?
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What's in the map so far:
This map is considered just over halfway done. I have already planned everything out in my mind, so I will know the approximate percentage rate of the map. It can be seen below.
Completion Percentage: 63%
Full Story SPOILER ALERT(DON'T READ UNLESS YOU'RE PLANNING ON NEVER PLAYING AGAIN)
Screenshots:
NOTE: I will accept harsh criticism, no matter how harsh. Of course, I'll be hurt, but if the criticism is that bad, I probably deserve it! Also, PLAY ON PEACEFUL to avoid creeper explosions!
I will keep all map quotes, good and bad, here:
Download Link
Mediafire - Click Here --- Remember to play on peaceful!
When you are done, please write a review below. It may be harsh, and it may be primitive. I will take any feedback. (Unless you say some parkour part is impossible, and you're pretty sure its possible).
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Here is the link. Don't be afraid to be as harsh as you need.
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Link to Thread: CLICK ME
Notes/Comments: The map is a WIP. I also would like you to be as harsh as you need to be. This is my first map, so you should expect disappointment. Thanks!
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Thank you for the feedback! I know this is somewhat off-topic, but do you happen to know how to edit a post's name or delete it? I never really figured that out...
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Sent!
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Thanks. When you do, please give a review. It can be harsh!
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Thanks for telling me! Im going to check it out. Look for a 0.3d update, and it should have the fix on the changelog!
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the song im going to use is Night hounds by x ray dog. If you want to change this, comment on my profile, or pm me immediately!