Initially when I saw the topic I thought it meant 'video intro' and I was like "Wow, 33 seconds is a long video intro lol." But then at the end of the video I realized that it was of course the channel intro. Overall I thought it was cool, but I would suggest that you cut a couple seconds off the end of the blurred equalizer sentence and use some more unique fonts throughout. The font and background at the end were pretty generic. But you're off to a good start, and Dafont.com has thousands of free fonts I definitely wanted to give you my honest feedback rather than just clicking, watching, and x'ing out, because nothing ever improves that way. Now take these words and run with them!
Initially when I saw the topic I thought it meant 'video intro' and I was like "Wow, 33 seconds is a long video intro lol." But then at the end of the video I realized that it was of course the channel intro. Overall I thought it was cool, but I would suggest that you cut a couple seconds off the end of the blurred equalizer sentence and use some more unique fonts throughout. The font and background at the end were pretty generic. But you're off to a good start, and Dafont.com has thousands of free fonts
I definitely wanted to give you my honest feedback rather than just clicking, watching, and x'ing out, because nothing ever improves that way. Now take these words and run with them! 
- Eric
Lol thanks ill take that advice