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I made an intro/outro for my friend's Ultra hardcore game, but I need a bit more feedback. (I got two vague answers on that I needed to change the music, but I really like the music, and so does my friend, who made the video. )

Here it is:

Thanks for all the feedback.

Quote from ItalicGreen

Liking a song does not mean it makes good outro music. Consider changing it to something much more upbeat, electro is a great place to start.

Next up, it looks very basic and unprofessional. Try adding some effects, something like that.

Finally, credits can be given in the description. The video's outro should have the YouTuber's name and links to relevant content (more episodes, subscribe, stuff like that.)

Here's a great outro a guy made for my channel:

I don't know what it is, but I just can't stand hearing the music that you put into yours, and neither will my friend. (We both like classical music) Also, we are just getting started with Youtube, so there's basically no other videos. But adding a subscribe button is a good idea.

As for the effects, this is more of a credits thing that we will not use for every video, only for this one. I might make an outro like yours (with fancy effects and all) to put AFTER the credits, which would be meant for ALL of his videos.

These credits appear after 2 hours of playing UHC. The opening is also made in the same manner (slow and steady) with a different part of the same music, but I'm not finished with it yet, and I don't want it prematurely judged.

Quote from ZeroStrike1101

Or you could get an idea off mine.
NOT A COMPLETE OUTRO VID, SKIP TO END.

I don't know what it is, I just can't stand those drums. (for both these outros) They're a bit obtrusive. It just makes my ears hurt.

Your outro is a bit more simplistic. Although you might have spent time on making those still images, I can't read the text that easily. Those images would look amazing, if it weren't for the text being rainbow, and if they had a little motion, like ItalicGreen's. xP
I like your intro. (although I can't stand the music for that either)

For the intro and outro, we were trying to replicate those of an older movie, back when life was much more slow-paced and people actually listened to classical music.

Quote from ZeroStrike1101

ah k, just that in this generation, most people get attracted by electronic music more.
And I don't think my outro has drums :/

Sorry, I was referring to your intro, not your outro. xP
And yes, that's absolutely correct, people are attracted to electronic music more. (Why? Maybe it's because it's more popular that it becomes more and more popular?)

I'm not sure. But I want to still make my credits better. I'm not sure what it's missing exactly. Maybe it's the music. Maybe it's the font. Something needs work.

Quote from ZeroStrike1101

Maybe you need a big picture to draw attention?
More colour maybe?

Maybe. Since it's just black and white, it seems kinda boring. Maybe I should add a youtube-style intro and outro in addition to these, which might be a bit more interesting.