Hey everyone, I just posted my first ever minecraft game commentary on youtube and I really don't get that much feedback, so I'd like to know what everyone thinks. THe link to the video will be at the bottom of this post. Once you watch the video please tell me what I can improve on and what parts you like. I can then began to throw out the things that annoy people and add in better parts. Thank you very much for your feedback.
The link to the video-