So here's a video where I tour you around what's done of the city of wilddour, I was just wondering what you guys think of my commentary, does it need any improvements? Basically, what you guys think of it.. constructive criticism is highly appreciated
I'm a trainee still(too), but i think maybe i can give some opinions(i think?)
1. Some parts speak kinda too fast?(probably my slow understanding)
2. this is video part, but there quite too many cuts, try reducing the cuts even if it's a tour.
I think it's better than mine though, haha go check my thread and give me opinions too>.<
My opinions are not accurate though, so just look at it as some reference, i bet there will be people with better skills and will do a better criticism(i think that's the word?) on your commentary.
Your overall commentary was good and funny at times, but all of the constant cut editing really threw me off. You should just try and make it flow. Also, WERE IS THAT ACCENT FROM! Its driving me insane trying to think.
Overall very nice build (better than I could do), at 4:13 instead of signs use trapdoors if you want (looks better to me).
-Lucas of TheRenegadeFilms
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1. Some parts speak kinda too fast?(probably my slow understanding)
2. this is video part, but there quite too many cuts, try reducing the cuts even if it's a tour.
I think it's better than mine though, haha go check my thread and give me opinions too>.<
My opinions are not accurate though, so just look at it as some reference, i bet there will be people with better skills and will do a better criticism(i think that's the word?) on your commentary.
Overall very nice build (better than I could do), at 4:13 instead of signs use trapdoors if you want (looks better to me).
-Lucas of TheRenegadeFilms