Okay, so I've recently started getting a bit more serious about my presence on YouTube, and I'd really like your help in making my videos better. My main focus for now is commentary. I recognize that there are other issues within my videos that need addressing (for example, volume), but I want to try to focus your attention on commentary, at least for now. My personal thoughts on this are that I lack energy in the videos. I'm not sure why; I felt like I was doing a decent job while recording. All I know is that the commentary comes off as flat and dry.
So in short, I'd appreciate it if you could leave a comment, either here or on YouTube, telling me 1) what's wrong with my commentary as it stands, and 2) how you think I should fix it. I really, really appreciate it!
TL;DR: Critique my Commentary
PS: Sorry about the weird code mess, I don't know how to get rid of it.
So in short, I'd appreciate it if you could leave a comment, either here or on YouTube, telling me 1) what's wrong with my commentary as it stands, and 2) how you think I should fix it. I really, really appreciate it!
TL;DR: Critique my Commentary
PS: Sorry about the weird code mess, I don't know how to get rid of it.
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