I have made a trial let's play so I can try and improve my videos. Feedback is very important for this. Please watch it and tell me what I can do better.
In my personal opinion. I'm not a huge fan of this LP.
Technically speaking, you did nothing wrong. Sound sounded fine, video was clear,
But it was just very, very, boring.
1. There was literally 0 Comedic factor. And unless you're commentating like sports, you need comedy, look @ the guys who do the TV wipeout. They're saying the silliest of things all the time.
2. Stage personality - I'm sure that if you went up to Tobuscus, or even Yogscast, etc, and had a real conversation with them, they wouldn't talk as they do when making videos. And that's because they've developed a stage persona.
However, at this point in your hopefully new commentating career, I believe you need to be more... flamboyant. Anyways. hope to see more commentaries from you in the future, the first couple commentaries are always the roughest and Im sure you'll be great.
You sound a bit monotone. And your voice is a little quiet. Like the person above said, find something to make people want to watch. Maybe play with some mods.
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Technically speaking, you did nothing wrong. Sound sounded fine, video was clear,
But it was just very, very, boring.
1. There was literally 0 Comedic factor. And unless you're commentating like sports, you need comedy, look @ the guys who do the TV wipeout. They're saying the silliest of things all the time.
2. Stage personality - I'm sure that if you went up to Tobuscus, or even Yogscast, etc, and had a real conversation with them, they wouldn't talk as they do when making videos. And that's because they've developed a stage persona.
More tips can be found in this thread - http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/2460949-am-i-doing-something-wrong/ and they might help you later down the road.
However, at this point in your hopefully new commentating career, I believe you need to be more... flamboyant.
Anyways. hope to see more commentaries from you in the future, the first couple commentaries are always the roughest and Im sure you'll be great.
Goodluck-
-Jax