Hey Everyone! Firstly, I would like to ask if anyone has any tips for my youtube videos (address below). They would be greatly appreciated! I use pro recording and editing, but leave some tips on making my content better for more views and subscribers!
Secondly, I want to ask if anyone, single or group, would want to join in and make youtube videos together. Normally I like to do mini games with friends, but host a server and ill hop on. I'm looking for people who aren't childish and try to get a lot of attention. You also need to be funny and loose, not all up tight and dull. Lastly, you must have a passion for the games you play. I upload all kinds of games every day, so make sure you are dedicated to gaming as I am. I do also play Gmod and other steam games too!
- Lucky I'm not lazy and willing to click through webpages to help you. In the future, provide a CLICKABLE link, and also make it to a specific video that someone can critique. That would help out a lot. Unless you want comments about your channel in general, in that case, just make it clickable.
1. If you can, new intro. There's.. So many people who have that intro.. I mean it's not your fault (It kind-of is). It's definitely not a necessity, but it might help make your channel that much more unique and stand out. It's something to think about.
2. Luckily, your sound quality gets better so as time goes on. Yay. (Fix / create a new Trailer on your Youtube Main page.)
3.Yes, I am totally judging you for your subscriber to view count. Your most popular video is your main youtube video, which people have to watch if they go on your channel and it's only @ 148, yet you have 852 subscribers? I smell e. You'll get no where getting either sub for sub or pity subs.
These Critique Advice is based on video Season 1 E6 Survival. About -
1. Face Time / Lil Redundant and Long intro. Unnecessary and a little annoying.
2. Background music - maybe? + It'll cover up the Mic squeaks or w/e you have.
3. Don't collect materials unless you have something to talk about the entire time... AKA your wood gathering.. you kinda mumbled to yourself thinking of things to say, maybe you'll cut down some trees while talking and then transition and be like "well. I'll be back once I get enough wood guys". however, maybe jump to / include the stuff like finding the wolf, exciting stuff, but re-introduce what has happened and what you're doing (or going to do). Background Music also helps fill in the space, especially if it's good music. Same thing goes for when you crafted all those blocks. I started playing my own music cause I forgot I had a video playing. Too quiet.
What bothers me the most about this video in particular is that you spent about 3/4 of the video gathering wood and organzing your chests/inventory. That was possibly the most boring ever. No offense. I literally skipped the last 5 minutes..
These tips may or may not apply to ALL your videos. Specifically this video in particular is what I critiqued. I'm assuming it's your most recent so you can improve for the future.
Overall as long as you focus on the tip #3 your videos will improve immensely. Whether that means talking to yourself about nonsense, posing questions to the audience, or just cutting it out entirely.
-Friendly Neighborhood Pirate
Jax-
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Secondly, I want to ask if anyone, single or group, would want to join in and make youtube videos together. Normally I like to do mini games with friends, but host a server and ill hop on. I'm looking for people who aren't childish and try to get a lot of attention. You also need to be funny and loose, not all up tight and dull. Lastly, you must have a passion for the games you play. I upload all kinds of games every day, so make sure you are dedicated to gaming as I am. I do also play Gmod and other steam games too!
Thanks!
YouTube- DaLemonKingMC (www.youtube.com/user/DaLemonKing)
SKYPE- david leymeister
Steam- davidl98
DaLemonKingMC
(David Leymeister)
YouTube Channel: http://www.youtube.com/channel/UClcIgdizGXdT3R9dnNltFkg
Website: http://davidl9813.wixsite.com/dalemonkingmc
Subscriber Goal 737/800
Views Goal 22,389/25,000
1. If you can, new intro. There's.. So many people who have that intro.. I mean it's not your fault (It kind-of is). It's definitely not a necessity, but it might help make your channel that much more unique and stand out. It's something to think about.
2. Luckily, your sound quality gets better so as time goes on. Yay. (Fix / create a new Trailer on your Youtube Main page.)
3.Yes, I am totally judging you for your subscriber to view count. Your most popular video is your main youtube video, which people have to watch if they go on your channel and it's only @ 148, yet you have 852 subscribers? I smell e. You'll get no where getting either sub for sub or pity subs.
These Critique Advice is based on video Season 1 E6 Survival. About -
1. Face Time / Lil Redundant and Long intro. Unnecessary and a little annoying.
2. Background music - maybe? + It'll cover up the Mic squeaks or w/e you have.
3. Don't collect materials unless you have something to talk about the entire time... AKA your wood gathering.. you kinda mumbled to yourself thinking of things to say, maybe you'll cut down some trees while talking and then transition and be like "well. I'll be back once I get enough wood guys". however, maybe jump to / include the stuff like finding the wolf, exciting stuff, but re-introduce what has happened and what you're doing (or going to do). Background Music also helps fill in the space, especially if it's good music. Same thing goes for when you crafted all those blocks. I started playing my own music cause I forgot I had a video playing. Too quiet.
What bothers me the most about this video in particular is that you spent about 3/4 of the video gathering wood and organzing your chests/inventory. That was possibly the most boring ever. No offense. I literally skipped the last 5 minutes..
These tips may or may not apply to ALL your videos. Specifically this video in particular is what I critiqued. I'm assuming it's your most recent so you can improve for the future.
Overall as long as you focus on the tip #3 your videos will improve immensely. Whether that means talking to yourself about nonsense, posing questions to the audience, or just cutting it out entirely.
-Friendly Neighborhood Pirate
Jax-