Your intro is 24 seconds long, and any viewers are almost guaranteed to skip it after watching it the first time. I would recommend making something around 5 seconds, and certainly no more than 10.
The intro its self is just a panning shot of some scenery with casual techno playing. After the pan ends, your logo appears.
Everyone watching knows what MineCraft is, and what it looks like, so there's no need to show us 20 seconds of default landscape. If you want to have a panning camera, show us something that defines your series. What is the theme of the series? Consider making it apparent in the intro.