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Hello everyone, about two weeks ago i asked people to advice on how i can improve my lets play series and i was wondering if im improving..

the suggestions were to not say "aaaand" so much and to not show everything and leave the ending in which i then go back and explain what i did and such.

anyway if you could take some time to view it and give me any feedback it would be much appreciated.

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Quote from Teranz

I would try to be social in your videos, I say this to everyone but try to make a joke or take the micky out of something:)

thank you for the advice, but what do you mean by "take the micky out of something"?

Quote from interbrink

I'd agree on this, good commentary and good videos.
Just maybe be social and make a joke of things around.

Quote from Teranz

Make jokes out of items, mobs, blocks and etc

thank you both for the advice, i really appreciate it.

Quote from El_Alamein

get a better MIC and stop talking to animals (don't be stupid like that guy paouslsrjsrj)

the mic issue is a problem, im currently saving to get a new one. and i have no idea who paouslsrjsrj is.

It's spelled 'paulsoaresjr' and he's not stupid. If talking to animals is the natural thing you do, work on it; make it more funny!

Make an intro for start.
Put background music near your ending part.

Quote from SuperOnsk

Make an intro for start.
Put background music near your ending part.

ive thought about that, i just done know what i would do for it. or what music i would use.

Quote from sweptcoma

ur definately improving if i sat through the whole vid, i bet most people who watch it would :3

thank you very much, im really trying. its hard to find your grove when trying to start something successfull.