In August, I began making a Minecraft webcomic, due to the fact that there were no Minecraft webcomics that I could find that were still running. Since then I have posted 20 issues of the comic and have a few more made. This comic takes a large amount of influence from the old Nerd³ comics. The story of this webcomic is about a nerd who was sent into the universe of Minecraft and has no memory of what happened before this. The current plan is to make it a sci-fi adventure. In addition to the story, I hope to include one joke of good quality in each comic. A new issue will be released every Monday at 0:01 GMT. In addition to those weekly comics, there may be additional comics if I have the time to make more that week.
The previously released comics can be found on the website under the heading of blog, along with my random ramblings on various subjects.
If you would like to leave feedback, please do. It is appreciated a large amount, as I am still learning how to actually make a webcomic and properly run it.
First of all, sorry nobody responded, that must be annoying. But about the comic....
It didn't capture my interest very much, which is the most important thing I have to say. Honestly, I'm not sure why people would wait around a week to see those four boxes that half the time don't have any jokes. BTW I'm don't want to make you feel bad or anything, but you said you wanted people's honest opinion, and I figure that it's better to be too sharp than too soft.
Another thing that annoyed me, it wasn't comment, but you had language like the d-word, h-word, and s-word, which is not something that should be found in a minecraft comic suitable for all ages.
You should make your comics longer, like, at least 10 or 12 blocks, and make it funny before you continue with the story. The people who read it are probably just thinking: He did this, he did that, I ZZZZZZZzzzzzz..... Comics are supposed to be funny, unless it's a superhero comic, but that's a different matter.
So, yeah, to sum up what I just said, you should try to make it funnier, more engaging, and longer, in that order.
Seriously dude, I don't want to hurt your feelings; this is just the way I give feedback, so sorry if I made you feel bad.
-Jedi350
P.S. Would you mind checking out my post? It's the latest one in literature (at the time of my writing this) and I haven't gotten any replies yet either.
Thank you for the genuine feedback and taking the time to write it. I will take into consideration what you have stated in future. I will, when I have time, check out your post. Thanks again!
Hello people of the Minecraft Forum!
In August, I began making a Minecraft webcomic, due to the fact that there were no Minecraft webcomics that I could find that were still running. Since then I have posted 20 issues of the comic and have a few more made. This comic takes a large amount of influence from the old Nerd³ comics. The story of this webcomic is about a nerd who was sent into the universe of Minecraft and has no memory of what happened before this. The current plan is to make it a sci-fi adventure. In addition to the story, I hope to include one joke of good quality in each comic. A new issue will be released every Monday at 0:01 GMT. In addition to those weekly comics, there may be additional comics if I have the time to make more that week.
The website link is: https://xtremegming.github.io/
The previously released comics can be found on the website under the heading of blog, along with my random ramblings on various subjects.
If you would like to leave feedback, please do. It is appreciated a large amount, as I am still learning how to actually make a webcomic and properly run it.
Thanks!
My webcomic: https://xtremegming.github.io/
Update: Comic 21 has been released! Check the website!
My webcomic: https://xtremegming.github.io/
Update: Comic 22 has been released! Check the website for the accompanying blog post!
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Comic 23 has been released! Check the website!
My webcomic: https://xtremegming.github.io/
Comic 24 has been released! Check the site!
My webcomic: https://xtremegming.github.io/
Comic 25 has been released after far too much time! Check the site!
My webcomic: https://xtremegming.github.io/
Comic 26 has been released! Check the site!
My webcomic: https://xtremegming.github.io/
Comic 27 has been released on the site!
My webcomic: https://xtremegming.github.io/
Comic 28 has been released on the site!
My webcomic: https://xtremegming.github.io/
Comic 28 has been released on the website!
My webcomic: https://xtremegming.github.io/
Comic 30 has been released on the site!
My webcomic: https://xtremegming.github.io/
Okay dude,
First of all, sorry nobody responded, that must be annoying. But about the comic....
It didn't capture my interest very much, which is the most important thing I have to say. Honestly, I'm not sure why people would wait around a week to see those four boxes that half the time don't have any jokes. BTW I'm don't want to make you feel bad or anything, but you said you wanted people's honest opinion, and I figure that it's better to be too sharp than too soft.
Another thing that annoyed me, it wasn't comment, but you had language like the d-word, h-word, and s-word, which is not something that should be found in a minecraft comic suitable for all ages.
You should make your comics longer, like, at least 10 or 12 blocks, and make it funny before you continue with the story. The people who read it are probably just thinking: He did this, he did that, I ZZZZZZZzzzzzz..... Comics are supposed to be funny, unless it's a superhero comic, but that's a different matter.
So, yeah, to sum up what I just said, you should try to make it funnier, more engaging, and longer, in that order.
Seriously dude, I don't want to hurt your feelings; this is just the way I give feedback, so sorry if I made you feel bad.
-Jedi350
P.S. Would you mind checking out my post? It's the latest one in literature (at the time of my writing this) and I haven't gotten any replies yet either.
Thank you for the genuine feedback and taking the time to write it. I will take into consideration what you have stated in future. I will, when I have time, check out your post. Thanks again!
My webcomic: https://xtremegming.github.io/
No problem, dude. I'm just doing for others what I hope others will do for me. Hope that you get some more feedback!
Comic 31 has been released on the website!
My webcomic: https://xtremegming.github.io/
Comic 32 has been released on the site!
My webcomic: https://xtremegming.github.io/
Comic 33 has been released on the site!
My webcomic: https://xtremegming.github.io/
Comic 34 has been released on the site!
My webcomic: https://xtremegming.github.io/
Comic 35 has been released on the site!
My webcomic: https://xtremegming.github.io/
Comic 36 has been released on the site!
My webcomic: https://xtremegming.github.io/