Getting trapped in your favorite game would be awesome, right? Wrong! Me(Jordan) and some friends(Paul, Michael & Jackson) get trapped in Minecraft by Herobrine, who is trying to take over the world. Can they stop him? This is more than just a game... It's a battle, and the losers pay with their lives...
Getting trapped in your favorite game would be awesome, right? Wrong! Me(Jordan) and some friends(Paul, Michael & Jackson) get trapped in Minecraft by Herobrine, who is trying to take over the world. Can they stop him? This is more than just a game... It's a battle, and the losers pay with their lives...
Read it HERE!
Where's the story? The link brings me to this thread.
Insulting people for their beliefs is not a good way of convincing them to adopt yours.
Fiction is just a game of make-believe recorded on paper or film. But that's what makes it so great.
Hipster Jesus liked you before you were cool.
Found a link if you still care: https://www.wattpad.com/story/57071119-herobrine's-kingdom-book-1-of-the-herobrine's
The conversations between the characters were interesting.
That's really the only part I liked. The story moved two quickly, and the book assumes I know all about the workings of Minecraft.
اكتب الإساءة على الرمل و انحت المعروف على الصخر
"Write the bad things that are done to you in sand, but write the good things that happen to you on a piece of marble"
I would have read this and made a thorough critique, but I despise Wattpad.
Insulting people for their beliefs is not a good way of convincing them to adopt yours.
Fiction is just a game of make-believe recorded on paper or film. But that's what makes it so great.
Hipster Jesus liked you before you were cool.
Wattpad? Oh dear...
OT: I stopped reading at the second chapter. The entire thing was basically characters chatting to each other.