This lore plays out on the minecraft-server of MirageMC.
It is a roleplay-server with clans and towns which at the beginning is difficult but once
you have settled down, it becomes relatively easy to survive and you can focus on goals
apart from your own survival.
The ip of the server: play.miragemc.com
Aegon was a man of Draconia, he was born and raised in the homeland, and he loved it. But he also dreamed of undiscovered lands, and the treasures of the east.
He was from a noble family and when he came of age, he was promised to a woman who was also of noble birth. But he did not want this, he was against it, and fought for his right to choose who he wished to marry. His father would still not agree with Aegon and his mother was very traditional in the matter. Therefore, Aegon left the lands of Draconia and headed towards the south-east.
He traveled by horse, and sometimes by foot, he had to hide from the monsters and demons of the night.
He did not take much with him on his journey and he had to work where he could to get food and housing. He made friends on his way and he sometimes wished to stay in some of the towns, but he continued to travel. After months of traveling, he came to the city of Ervaistad. It was a beautiful and coastal town with many houses and lively streets. He wanted to stay here and start a new life, but he had also gotten the idea to build a town of his own and search for nearby treasures. He continued to the south, and after just a couple days he found the perfect spot. He created the town of Celestis by the outflow of a river, close to the nearby hills of Ervaistad and the forested lands that were surrounding them.
He used the stone from the nearby hills, the wood from the forests and the resources of the lands to build Celestis with his own hands. He soon met people from other lands who wished to join Celestis and live a peaceful life there. News of Celestis reached the people of The Western World and they traveled to settle down and farm the new lands in the east.
His town grew and new buildings were built like taverns, houses, barracks, farms and mines. The buildings were put to use and people lived peacefully and calmly in Celestis. Celestis started to trade as well, mostly with minerals and food, which made the town more prosperous. They traded with Trier and Kyoto, they let people in to the town, and were never disturbed or threatened by conflicts and wars in the west.
The inhabitants of Celestis is of many cultures and peoples from around the known world. It is a town that is still expanding, and they have started to explore the lands of the east in search of minerals and valuable items that could be of use for the town. The town is mostly calm but they like festivals with good food and drinks when the opportunity arises. There are few but good builders in Celestis, most people are focusing on mining and farming, they do not always interest themselves in the affairs of other towns, the merchants are few but productive in keeping the town alive, but all skills can be used to make the town prosper.
This lore plays out on the minecraft-server of MirageMC.
It is a roleplay-server with clans and towns which at the beginning is difficult but once
you have settled down, it becomes relatively easy to survive and you can focus on goals
apart from your own survival.
The ip of the server: play.miragemc.com
Aegon was a man of Draconia, he was born and raised in the homeland, and he loved it.
But he also dreamed of undiscovered lands, and the treasures of the east.
He was from a noble family and when he came of age, he was promised to a woman who was also of noble birth.
But he did not want this, he was against it, and fought for his right to choose who he wished to marry.
His father would still not agree with Aegon and his mother was very traditional in the matter.
Therefore, Aegon left the lands of Draconia and headed towards the south-east.
He traveled by horse, and sometimes by foot, he had to hide from the monsters and demons of the night.
He did not take much with him on his journey and he had to work where he could to get food and housing.
He made friends on his way and he sometimes wished to stay in some of the towns, but he continued to travel.
After months of traveling, he came to the city of Ervaistad. It was a beautiful and coastal town with many
houses and lively streets. He wanted to stay here and start a new life, but he had also gotten the idea
to build a town of his own and search for nearby treasures. He continued to the south, and after just a
couple days he found the perfect spot. He created the town of Celestis by the outflow of a river, close to
the nearby hills of Ervaistad and the forested lands that were surrounding them.
He used the stone from the nearby hills, the wood from the forests and the resources of the lands to build
Celestis with his own hands. He soon met people from other lands who wished to join Celestis and live a
peaceful life there. News of Celestis reached the people of The Western World and they traveled to settle
down and farm the new lands in the east.
His town grew and new buildings were built like taverns, houses, barracks, farms and mines.
The buildings were put to use and people lived peacefully and calmly in Celestis.
Celestis started to trade as well, mostly with minerals and food, which made the town more prosperous.
They traded with Trier and Kyoto, they let people in to the town, and were never disturbed or threatened by
conflicts and wars in the west.
The inhabitants of Celestis is of many cultures and peoples from around the known world.
It is a town that is still expanding, and they have started to explore the lands of the east in
search of minerals and valuable items that could be of use for the town.
The town is mostly calm but they like festivals with good food and drinks when the opportunity arises.
There are few but good builders in Celestis, most people are focusing on mining and farming, they do not
always interest themselves in the affairs of other towns, the merchants are few but productive in keeping
the town alive, but all skills can be used to make the town prosper.
/Written by Lord Aegon Troyard
Sounds good, even better if you understand the world it comes from
hi
Nice writing, it could use a little more figurative language, especially imagery, but overall it's pretty good.
PS: the poem-y style also kind of irks me, but that's just me
If you are interested in something I posted, upvote or PM me about something! I always respond to private messages.