While I do feel this post is a little too spammy, I will say that the composition is nice. Do re-record this if you can. There is a lot of audible distortion from the piano being too loud for the microphone to handle. If you are trying to promote this as a professional server, some people are going to notice the distortion (they might say that it sounds "fuzzy" or "lo-fi"). It also hurts the ears somewhat for headphone users like myself. Audacity has a "Clip Fix" tool and a lowpass filter that you might want to look into; they might be able to address these issues.
Dont mean to spam just very hard to grow a media platform or my own music
I just wanted minecrafters to hear my music and hopefully appreciate it.
Honestly, if you really didn't mean to spam, then you shouldn't have spammed in the first place.
From my end, the music is secondary in your message; server advertisement appears to be the primary message here. I don't think it's necessarily wrong to be promoting your server, but you could approach the process differently. For example, if I were in your position, I would entirely remove these two sentences:
Creation and audio rights are property of engravemmo
you may have seen us on apps
The reason for this is because these sentences are unnecessarily corporate and businesslike. Maybe you could revise your title to "Call of the Lonely Sphinx - An Original Song for the Upcoming EngraveMMO Minecraft Server" so you're still plugging your server name in the title. Including the name of the song also makes your title more interesting and more focused on the music itself.
I also think promoting your alpha pass in the music video and your post is just plain spammy. A discrete link to your server forum thread would be more polite and more informative.
Then, you could talk a little bit about your inspiration for creating the music. Maybe you could talk about the musicians from which you drew inspiration. Maybe you could talk a little bit about why you wanted to create the server in the first place, then explain what sort of theme you wanted your music to contribute to the server. You should definitely explicitly mention the fact that the music comes from you playing the piano, since video game-related music is very diverse.
In summary, make your post less about the server, less about the company, less about the "we", and more about your music. And remember that this is not the Minecraft server subforum. People don't come to the Literature Subsection to look for Minecraft servers.
I appreciate your lenghty post and information and take all tips to create a more attractive method on advertising as well as not to push advertising on this sub forum. Thanks
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Hello
are making a custom soundtrack for our soon to release server at engravemmo.net
This soundtrack is recorded by myself only and features music that will be put into the server!
Please support me with a like comment and subscription if you enjoy my music.
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC6ctbaTfaNMReSIZ7eB_l-A New mastered content on channel soon more too come!
Looking for any help with audio mastering and editing if you have experience!
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Curse PremiumWhile I do feel this post is a little too spammy, I will say that the composition is nice. Do re-record this if you can. There is a lot of audible distortion from the piano being too loud for the microphone to handle. If you are trying to promote this as a professional server, some people are going to notice the distortion (they might say that it sounds "fuzzy" or "lo-fi"). It also hurts the ears somewhat for headphone users like myself. Audacity has a "Clip Fix" tool and a lowpass filter that you might want to look into; they might be able to address these issues.
The sound was fixed.
Dont mean to spam just very hard to grow a media platform or my own music
I just wanted minecrafters to hear my music and hopefully appreciate it.
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Curse PremiumHonestly, if you really didn't mean to spam, then you shouldn't have spammed in the first place.
From my end, the music is secondary in your message; server advertisement appears to be the primary message here. I don't think it's necessarily wrong to be promoting your server, but you could approach the process differently. For example, if I were in your position, I would entirely remove these two sentences:
The reason for this is because these sentences are unnecessarily corporate and businesslike. Maybe you could revise your title to "Call of the Lonely Sphinx - An Original Song for the Upcoming EngraveMMO Minecraft Server" so you're still plugging your server name in the title. Including the name of the song also makes your title more interesting and more focused on the music itself.
I also think promoting your alpha pass in the music video and your post is just plain spammy. A discrete link to your server forum thread would be more polite and more informative.
Then, you could talk a little bit about your inspiration for creating the music. Maybe you could talk about the musicians from which you drew inspiration. Maybe you could talk a little bit about why you wanted to create the server in the first place, then explain what sort of theme you wanted your music to contribute to the server. You should definitely explicitly mention the fact that the music comes from you playing the piano, since video game-related music is very diverse.
In summary, make your post less about the server, less about the company, less about the "we", and more about your music. And remember that this is not the Minecraft server subforum. People don't come to the Literature Subsection to look for Minecraft servers.
I appreciate your lenghty post and information and take all tips to create a more attractive method on advertising as well as not to push advertising on this sub forum. Thanks