Oh, thanks. I really need some of this too if I want to improve, and I'm accepting this because you're far more experienced, so tomorrow I'll take some time to fix this.
A small question: Did you thought KP was Weak William? If so, I should correct that part, because I was trying to say KP's uncle was Weak William.
Ohhhhh. There's a problem with my story.
Anyways, thanks for your help, I'm happy you've read this!
First of all, nice job with the corrections. *gives Killer_Pixie a high-five* I agree with BoltStrikes; everything makes a lot more sense now. I can now actually enjoy the plot.
If there is one additional piece of criticism I could give, it is that you should use double quotes for dialog instead of dashes. It is standard convention in English, and will thus make it easier for new readers to get into your story.
I'd say it's good to accept criticism from whoever gives it, and take all criticism with a grain of salt. I got a bit snarky when I wrote the beginning of that post because AdminGamer101's post rubbed me the wrong way.
Wow, this story is phenomenal! It's an interesting new twist to have the main characters be faeries and pixies instead of people. I like it, and am excited to see where it will go. Keep up the splendid work!
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Insulting people for their beliefs is not a good way of convincing them to adopt yours.
Fiction is just a game of make-believe recorded on paper or film. But that's what makes it so great.
Wow, this story is phenomenal! It's an interesting new twist to have the main characters be faeries and pixies instead of people. I like it, and am excited to see where it will go. Keep up the splendid work!
Thanks! I hadn't really noticed that little thing about the diversity of the characters, in fact.
Also, I'm accepting applications for a few minor characters, just post your character here! (Keep in mind they will be minor characters like really minor, but I guess it would be fun.)
Yeah, hi. The thing is I'm going to temporally stop the writing of this story. I am very enthusiastic about what is going to happen next and I haven't lost interest, but I entered a story contest and I want to dedicate myself full-time to it.I should be back writing by April 7th.
First of all, nice job with the corrections. *gives Killer_Pixie a high-five* I agree with BoltStrikes; everything makes a lot more sense now. I can now actually enjoy the plot.
If there is one additional piece of criticism I could give, it is that you should use double quotes for dialog instead of dashes. It is standard convention in English, and will thus make it easier for new readers to get into your story.
I'd say it's good to accept criticism from whoever gives it, and take all criticism with a grain of salt. I got a bit snarky when I wrote the beginning of that post because AdminGamer101's post rubbed me the wrong way.
New chapter released! Yay!
I don't care if a new chapter is released. I only come to read. Nice job, anyways.
So when will you release next chapter?
Hehehe...
Now! I took a long holiday, but I'm back!
OK, I hope you continue with this.
Nice chapter. I thought Alan would be good but I read that the answer is no... still.
Wow, this story is phenomenal! It's an interesting new twist to have the main characters be faeries and pixies instead of people. I like it, and am excited to see where it will go. Keep up the splendid work!
Insulting people for their beliefs is not a good way of convincing them to adopt yours.
Fiction is just a game of make-believe recorded on paper or film. But that's what makes it so great.
Hipster Jesus liked you before you were cool.
Thanks! I hadn't really noticed that little thing about the diversity of the characters, in fact.
A new chapter has been released! I know I'm taking too long, but I'll schedule myself so I can write faster.
Also, I'm accepting applications for a few minor characters, just post your character here! (Keep in mind they will be minor characters like really minor, but I guess it would be fun.)
New chapter released! It was kind of hard to write, lots of descriptions and new characters, but I think it payed.
Enjoy!
This chapter has been my favorite. And you don't need to call always "MetaDestroyer" to my characater. To make it shorter call him "Meta".
What if I don't want to?
Just kidding, thanks for reading!
Ok.
"Hi, everybody!"
"Hi, Dr Nick!"
Yeah, hi. The thing is I'm going to temporally stop the writing of this story. I am very enthusiastic about what is going to happen next and I haven't lost interest, but I entered a story contest and I want to dedicate myself full-time to it.I should be back writing by April 7th.
Hope you understand and survive the waiting!
New chapter released, back from the dead!
In, "Born to Run", you will be reading what may be the most important event in the story so far, though it's a pretty short chapter.
Alright, this story is getting better. It's very cool. Keep it up.