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This is my first minecraft storyso please don't hate in the comment's . If you see some miss-spelled words, I'm not from england/americaso i don't know english that well.
This story is about how the world of minecraft was made,and it clearly isn't true, its just my imagination.
Hope you like it!



Chapter 1: The creation

Once upon a time, there was a peaceful, but dead world. It was a wasteland, no life, just sand... But one day, TheOne created a portal, a gateway between the two worlds. He came to this deserted, lifeless world. He started it all, by making the first creeper. It was a green, sand-made creature.He added trees, lakes, minerals,lava...

Some of the creepers evolved to cows, pigs and chicken.For ages they have lived in harmony, helped each other.This was called "The golden age of minecraft". Chicken evolved into sheep.With even one more species, the world was even more happier! Eventually, pigs evolved into villagers,who where born with the special tools:Hands.They had the power to edit the world. They made villages and farms, and always shared with others. Some even made temples to represent they happiness!


Chapter 2: The abuse

But, something else hapend in the other world.Some misterius, dark force came to the world. The harmony in this world made it mad, and it created a Human, the mutated villager form, born to fight and destroy the world! TheOne saw this coming, and came to defend this world from the harm, by changing the Human. He made him friends with the nature and the other creatures. But, the dark force, now known as Herobrine, came and opssesed him with editing and ruining the world for his own good. TheOne, now known as Notch tried to reason them, but they refused to listen.

Chapter 3: The destruction

They mined, built and lived an lazy life, only caring about himself and others of his species.He began to in-prison other species, and killed them for his own needs.Mobs started developing new ways to defend themselves.Coal was transformed into spiders.Some creepers evolved into zombies, that after they lost flesh turned into skeletons.

They all started war with humans, only to protect themselves (Note:Villagers aren't humans).Creepers got fused with gunpowder, making them explosive.Spider's strong teeth and legs allowed him to easly attack newborn Humans's,althou they were harmless to other, allredy going humans's.Skeletons learned how to use bows, and used them against humans.

But,humans didn't seem to care, so they continued destroying the world.
They mined by making giant mineshafts that after being abandoned became spider-infested.By doing this, hthey left almost no minerals to the world.They cut trees, foraging almost all forest's.They made factories, destroying the ozone layer,making it clearly hoter. Some have even made strongholds, with portals used for quick escapes.

Chapter 4: Notch takes action

Notch couldn't stand to watch the destruction of minecraft, so he came to earth to try and stop humans's,but this time using force.He punished all the humans(again,not villagers) and regenerated the world, althou he wasn't able to destroy
some buildings.

A lot of humans's died from despiration, and they missed their lazy lives. Some tried to use the stronghold portals to escape, but notch made sure that on the other side is a lovely(not really) suprise! Some predicted this, and tried to create their own portals, but unfourtunatly they led to the nether, the hot,cursed dimension filled with evil and lava.

Chapter 5: Survival

Survivors learned their lesons, and stoped harming the world. They built, mined, farmed,but they gave everything back to the nature. Herobrine got mad, so he came and started destroying the civilizacion of humans(no villagers). They tried to fight back, but when Notch punished them, they lost the power of will to fight. So,the civillizacion was long lost, leaving only 1 survivor: Steve.He learned that being god makes him weak, but he didn't want to be evil.So he decided to live between, god and evil.

Chapter 6: The end
Steve is now copied,as well as the world.Now, there is over millions,billions of copies, each controled by a different player. Every world is different on its on: some are big and empty, some are small but creative, some are bassed on survival, and some have a cool adventure just waiting for someone to try to finish it!
That is you.
You chose what you do.
You are a man of your own.
You are the player.
You control everything.
All inside
of
MINECRAFT,
the number 1. sandbox game of all.

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I know the end sounds kind of weird, but i waned it to end in an epic way.

I hope someone has read this post.Also, please reply and vote. It really dose support me, and if anyone is interested, i will write a new story, but it wont be as "weird" as this one. So please reply?

Kinda a neat take on things. Very creative, and decent english. Keep it up.

Thanks jrobertdobson. I will continue writing, i just waited for anyone to actually reply.

You need to work on your grammars and spelling a bit, friend. I saw the top of your post - are you from a nation with an English minority?



The story is rather nonsensical, but it works in this context (since Minecraft as a whole is nonsensical, and that's nice.) If that was the tone you were going for, then all is good. If you wanted your story to sound a bit more serious, I would recommend taking out that bit about the Ozone layer (that's just personal preference, so maybe get opinions from multiple people before you decide what you want to keep in and what you want to throw out.)