Hello, this is a writing practice for school! Enjoy!
I sat in my oak wood chair feeling a light breeze over my shoulders from the open window, i looked down at the sloppy excuse of a breakfast i had attempted to create. It turns out, i'm not the best cook. I sat up looking around the kitchen making sure my sisters little "Enderman" camera dolls were not watching me, the little demons have cameras in their glowing green eyes that record you, it's creepy. If you don't know (You probably don't, unless you read fictional minds), my name is Deversin. I am a 16 year old teenager with short, dark black hair and quite a muscular body (Well maybe not that last one). I was wearing my green "Legend of Zelda" T-shirt while quietly walking to the garbage in my warm, cozy living room, making sure my mom would not catch me throwing out my breakfast.
This was just part of it, i need feedback on detail and ideas for the story! Thank you.
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I sat in my oak wood chair feeling a light breeze over my shoulders from the open window, i looked down at the sloppy excuse of a breakfast i had attempted to create. It turns out, i'm not the best cook. I sat up looking around the kitchen making sure my sisters little "Enderman" camera dolls were not watching me, the little demons have cameras in their glowing green eyes that record you, it's creepy. If you don't know (You probably don't, unless you read fictional minds), my name is Deversin. I am a 16 year old teenager with short, dark black hair and quite a muscular body (Well maybe not that last one). I was wearing my green "Legend of Zelda" T-shirt while quietly walking to the garbage in my warm, cozy living room, making sure my mom would not catch me throwing out my breakfast.
This was just part of it, i need feedback on detail and ideas for the story! Thank you.