The Builder simply turned around and walked away. He did not show any emotion for the death of his
brothers. His face was as hard a stone. He left the city and returned home to his dimension. Players were still in
shock: they did not know what to do. They felt free, sad, happy, and confused at the same time. On the street lay
the dead body of notch and herobrine side by side. The players slowly left the street and went to bed. They did
not know that they would never return home again.
Two red eyes flashed open. Herobrine stood up. His body was grey from death and his eyes and palms
crackled with evil. He looked over at the body of notch and gave a small smile. He used a fraction of his power to
disintegrate the body of notch. Herobrine arose into the air and, in the blink of an eye, he was gone. At his
home, The Builder sensed the presence of a powerful being... more powerful than himself.
Morning was upon the city and the players , and they started to leave their homes. They went back to where
the fight had occurred, but notch and herobrine were gone. They decided that they needed to elect a new leader.
They started to have a vote, but they were interrupted. A voice-"You don't need a new leader. Herobrine, master of
the universe is here!" The candidates of the election fell to the ground, dead. Herobrine landed in the center of
the crowd. "I am your leader...no, master. I shall make my first decree. Run!"
Herobrine fired bursts of energy in every direction. The city was filled with chaos. Players were running
in every direction as withers rose out of the ground. Explosions were everywhere, and players started to fall like
flies. The sky became filled with darkness and started to rain. The darkness was not the mere absence of light; it
was alive and suffocating everything that it touched. The rain even seemed impure; it stung to the touch and kill
some. Buildings were being destroyed and some started to collapse. Out of the clouds descended an army of herobrines
minions. They were unlike herobrine's zombies and creepers; they were intelligent and able to form strategies. They
were powerful and able to summon explosions at will.
In his dimension, The Builder knew exactly what was happening to the city, but he did not return to help.
While players were calling out to him, the builder did not come to help them. He was still angry with the entire
world. "Why should I help them? What have they ever done for me?", the builder thought. "Should I go back and
fight herobrine? Would herobrine leave me alone, if I don't stop him?." The Builder tried to escape reality by
doing what he loved...building.
For a while it seemed peaceful. The Builder did not sense violence in the city, and he had not heard from
herobrine. The Builder was building a new tower when a blast threw him into a wall and destroyed his new creation.
The Builder went inside his mansion and went to get his sword, but more explosions kept him from reaching it. Then
suddenly, a massive blast ripped through the mansion. Fire consumed the entire house, and blew it into a million
pieces. The Builder stood up and saw an army of minions lead by herobrine. The Builder ran, but he could not
escape. All of his creations were being destroyed, from his coliseums, to his mansions and cities. The dimension
became rubble in a matter of seconds. The Builder saw his sword in the middle of the carnage and grabbed it.
He was knocked back by another blast, but he quickly got up and ran towards herobrine. He was dodging fire
and explosions from every side. Right before he reached herobrine, lightning struck him. He dropped his sword and
fell right at herobrine's feet. Herobrine spoke:"It seems the tables have turned. Now it is you who shall beg for
my mercy. Remember when I asked for your forgiveness? You killed me. I will let you live if you just beg for my
mercy."
As herobrine spoke, two of his minions grabbed the builder and chained him. The builder looked up and
replied,"I do not beg." With that, he broke free of the minions, and killed five more before he was restrained
again.
"You stubborn builder. Do you know how I escaped?" Herobrine continued without waiting for an answer,"I
knew you were going to kill me, so I infected notch with my evil. Such a small amount that he did not notice. When
he died the evil directed him to transfer his power to me. His power awakened me and I became 10 times more
powerful. Now that you know that, I shall kill you."
The Builder escaped and moved at the speed of light. He swept herobrines feet from under him and ran away.
By the time herobrine got up, the builder was gone. Herobrine shouted,"Find him you fools! Even if I have to
search the entire universe, I will find him."
The Builder had left the dimension and returned to the overworld. He was in a swamp under the protection
of a tree. The day was rainy and cloudy. The Builder started to think about the situation. "Should I go to the
city and help the players? Herobrine will never stop looking for me so I need to kill him or stay in hiding. Even
if I want to kill him, how can I possibly defeat him?" The Builder has made his decision: He had spent to much of
his life hiding; running away from his problems. A life spent running was not worth living.
In the city, herobrine had taken complete control. Some became his slaves, while others were trapped
underground. Underground, it was dark and full of monsters. On the surface, the work was hard and those who did a
bad job were killed. There was a voice. It was only a whisper. The underground prisoners listened intently."I am
The Builder, and I have come to help you." The builder summoned swords in the hands of the players."It is time for
a revolution. I need all of you to attack his minions and free the players above. I will go after herobrine."
Herobrine was caught off guard. Players were attacking his minions from every direction. He killed a few
but was knocked off of his his feet by the builder. He shot a bolt of energy, but the builder was gone. He was
pushed forward and kicked in the head. He turned around but there wad nobody there. The Builder continued to
attack at the speed of light and teleport away. Herobrine could not defend or counter the builder's attacks.
Herobrine Increased the gravity dramatically and sent the builder into the ground. It was working, but herobrine
was sinking into the ground himself, so he stopped.
"Where are you builder! I will rip you apart." The Builder put herobrine in an arm lock then broke his
arm. Herobrine screamed with fury. Herobrine shot bursts of energy, summoned explosions, and used lightning
everywhere at once.The Builder was dodging the attacks and continued to fight herobrine. Then, Herobrine swung his
sword backwards, just as the builder teleported behind him.
The Builder clutched the sword protruding from his chest. He looked around and saw that the players were
losing and dieing everywhere. He looked at herobrine who now had an evil smile."I bet you are waiting for me to
kill you," he said. "With what I have planned for you, you will wish you were dead."
With that, herobrine smacked the builder, and everything went black.
I must admit this story has been somewhat interesting. The part of that YouTube video where Herobrine falls into the Nether was pretty epic.
However, the plot itself is very illogical. For instance, Notch seems strangely underpowered, and the Builder's personality is inconsistent, ranging from a murderous psychopath with no sense of empathy to a reluctant hero who feels compelled to save the humans from Herobrine's army.
Well when notch was alive, he was more powerful then herobrine and almost as powerful as the builder. The builder just has a personality that fluctuates greatly. I would love more critiques or recommendations, because I am going to write the final part. and when is he a murderous psychopath?
Super Amazing Film bro... but for people that don't know builder, me ,and some other people are in the making of builder's backstory (better version) and everyone elses backstories so visit these youtube channels and subscribe to them because soon there will be an amazing storyline.
The is the third part to the story of the builder. I recommend you read part 1 and 2 before you read this.
channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCsUaVhcjtHW-yUSF4mkeUWw
Part 1:http://www.minecraftforum.net/forums/show-your-creation/fan-art/literature/2173101-the-builder-an-untold-story-of-a-third-minecraft
Part 2:http://www.minecraftforum.net/forums/show-your-creation/fan-art/literature/2198562-the-builder-part-2
video:
and the story shall begin:
The Builder simply turned around and walked away. He did not show any emotion for the death of his
brothers. His face was as hard a stone. He left the city and returned home to his dimension. Players were still in
shock: they did not know what to do. They felt free, sad, happy, and confused at the same time. On the street lay
the dead body of notch and herobrine side by side. The players slowly left the street and went to bed. They did
not know that they would never return home again.
Two red eyes flashed open. Herobrine stood up. His body was grey from death and his eyes and palms
crackled with evil. He looked over at the body of notch and gave a small smile. He used a fraction of his power to
disintegrate the body of notch. Herobrine arose into the air and, in the blink of an eye, he was gone. At his
home, The Builder sensed the presence of a powerful being... more powerful than himself.
Morning was upon the city and the players , and they started to leave their homes. They went back to where
the fight had occurred, but notch and herobrine were gone. They decided that they needed to elect a new leader.
They started to have a vote, but they were interrupted. A voice-"You don't need a new leader. Herobrine, master of
the universe is here!" The candidates of the election fell to the ground, dead. Herobrine landed in the center of
the crowd. "I am your leader...no, master. I shall make my first decree. Run!"
Herobrine fired bursts of energy in every direction. The city was filled with chaos. Players were running
in every direction as withers rose out of the ground. Explosions were everywhere, and players started to fall like
flies. The sky became filled with darkness and started to rain. The darkness was not the mere absence of light; it
was alive and suffocating everything that it touched. The rain even seemed impure; it stung to the touch and kill
some. Buildings were being destroyed and some started to collapse. Out of the clouds descended an army of herobrines
minions. They were unlike herobrine's zombies and creepers; they were intelligent and able to form strategies. They
were powerful and able to summon explosions at will.
In his dimension, The Builder knew exactly what was happening to the city, but he did not return to help.
While players were calling out to him, the builder did not come to help them. He was still angry with the entire
world. "Why should I help them? What have they ever done for me?", the builder thought. "Should I go back and
fight herobrine? Would herobrine leave me alone, if I don't stop him?." The Builder tried to escape reality by
doing what he loved...building.
For a while it seemed peaceful. The Builder did not sense violence in the city, and he had not heard from
herobrine. The Builder was building a new tower when a blast threw him into a wall and destroyed his new creation.
The Builder went inside his mansion and went to get his sword, but more explosions kept him from reaching it. Then
suddenly, a massive blast ripped through the mansion. Fire consumed the entire house, and blew it into a million
pieces. The Builder stood up and saw an army of minions lead by herobrine. The Builder ran, but he could not
escape. All of his creations were being destroyed, from his coliseums, to his mansions and cities. The dimension
became rubble in a matter of seconds. The Builder saw his sword in the middle of the carnage and grabbed it.
He was knocked back by another blast, but he quickly got up and ran towards herobrine. He was dodging fire
and explosions from every side. Right before he reached herobrine, lightning struck him. He dropped his sword and
fell right at herobrine's feet. Herobrine spoke:"It seems the tables have turned. Now it is you who shall beg for
my mercy. Remember when I asked for your forgiveness? You killed me. I will let you live if you just beg for my
mercy."
As herobrine spoke, two of his minions grabbed the builder and chained him. The builder looked up and
replied,"I do not beg." With that, he broke free of the minions, and killed five more before he was restrained
again.
"You stubborn builder. Do you know how I escaped?" Herobrine continued without waiting for an answer,"I
knew you were going to kill me, so I infected notch with my evil. Such a small amount that he did not notice. When
he died the evil directed him to transfer his power to me. His power awakened me and I became 10 times more
powerful. Now that you know that, I shall kill you."
The Builder escaped and moved at the speed of light. He swept herobrines feet from under him and ran away.
By the time herobrine got up, the builder was gone. Herobrine shouted,"Find him you fools! Even if I have to
search the entire universe, I will find him."
The Builder had left the dimension and returned to the overworld. He was in a swamp under the protection
of a tree. The day was rainy and cloudy. The Builder started to think about the situation. "Should I go to the
city and help the players? Herobrine will never stop looking for me so I need to kill him or stay in hiding. Even
if I want to kill him, how can I possibly defeat him?" The Builder has made his decision: He had spent to much of
his life hiding; running away from his problems. A life spent running was not worth living.
In the city, herobrine had taken complete control. Some became his slaves, while others were trapped
underground. Underground, it was dark and full of monsters. On the surface, the work was hard and those who did a
bad job were killed. There was a voice. It was only a whisper. The underground prisoners listened intently."I am
The Builder, and I have come to help you." The builder summoned swords in the hands of the players."It is time for
a revolution. I need all of you to attack his minions and free the players above. I will go after herobrine."
Herobrine was caught off guard. Players were attacking his minions from every direction. He killed a few
but was knocked off of his his feet by the builder. He shot a bolt of energy, but the builder was gone. He was
pushed forward and kicked in the head. He turned around but there wad nobody there. The Builder continued to
attack at the speed of light and teleport away. Herobrine could not defend or counter the builder's attacks.
Herobrine Increased the gravity dramatically and sent the builder into the ground. It was working, but herobrine
was sinking into the ground himself, so he stopped.
"Where are you builder! I will rip you apart." The Builder put herobrine in an arm lock then broke his
arm. Herobrine screamed with fury. Herobrine shot bursts of energy, summoned explosions, and used lightning
everywhere at once.The Builder was dodging the attacks and continued to fight herobrine. Then, Herobrine swung his
sword backwards, just as the builder teleported behind him.
The Builder clutched the sword protruding from his chest. He looked around and saw that the players were
losing and dieing everywhere. He looked at herobrine who now had an evil smile."I bet you are waiting for me to
kill you," he said. "With what I have planned for you, you will wish you were dead."
With that, herobrine smacked the builder, and everything went black.
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Curse PremiumHowever, the plot itself is very illogical. For instance, Notch seems strangely underpowered, and the Builder's personality is inconsistent, ranging from a murderous psychopath with no sense of empathy to a reluctant hero who feels compelled to save the humans from Herobrine's army.
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