Hey everyone! So, this is my completely new Minecraft Fan-Fiction that's currently in progress. This story is aimed to cover the entire lore and history of Minecraft, and is a 'rewrite' (more like a complete overhaul) of my original story, The STEVE Chronicles. I'm currently planning a trilogy of 3 books, with at the very LEAST a short story containing the new Ocean Mounuments after the main series. The currently planned names are:
Book 1 - Hero's Shadow
Book 2 - Hero's Fall
Book 3 - Hero's Destiny
This is book 1, Hero's Shadow. I hope you all enjoy!
PROLOGUE:
Deep underground, in a cold, obsidian chamber, four mobs sat atop enormous thrones. arguing.
"The forces of the End are still scattered, we don't have much to assist you, Wither" roared an enormous black dragon.
"I understand that Ender, but even two Ender Titan's could help us drive the King's forces out of the Nether!' Wither shouted back
"What about my people? King Sssparklez isss hunting usss like pigsss we can't hold the jungle much longer!" hissed an enormous creeper, pulsing with lightning energy.
"The undead are being slain every day, before long there won't be a single cavern they can't find us!" shouted a skeleton adorned in enchanted diamond armor, his arachnid mount hissing in agreement.
Suddenly the doors blasted open, and all the mobs swung towards the doors, staring on in shock.
"Lord Herobrine" hissed the creeper, bowing, the rest of the mobs following his example.
"You may stand up, Creepthulhu" said the figure, white eyes pulsing with energy, as he walked down the hallway and sat atop an ancient bedrock and obsidian throne, lit aflame with netherrack.
"So, you've finally returned" said Ender.
"Yes. But seeing as I'm back, you know who else is here as well."
"The First Hero" growled Wither.
"Precisely. He's still unconscious, but he'll awaken in a few hours."
"Doesss he remember anything?"
"Nothing."
"And what of his Companion?" growled Ender.
Herobrine chuckled, a dark, booming, echoing laugh. "The little swine might actually remember something. But if you succeed, Cavalrae, he won't be a problem" turning towards the skeleton.
"Of course, my lord." he said, leaping off his skeletal throne and onto his Spider, riding out of the throne room.
"You are all dismissed."
Creepthulhu followed Cavalrae out the door. Ender and Wither teleported in a blast of purple and black particles respectively.
Herobrine waved his hand, and an image appeared. A man, still unconsious, lying on a beach as the sun rose overhead.
"Enjoy your new beginning while you can, Steve."
Chapter 1: A New Beginning
The cool forest breeze rustled the trees as the sun rose overhead. All was peaceful. A herd of pigs were snacking on some grass. A duck was teaching her ducklings how to swim. A wolf chased some bunnies through the tall grass.
But it wasn't peaceful.
He struggled to hold onto his pickaxe. He could feel it slipping, he could hear the long earshattering screech of the pickaxe slowly slicing through the bedrock. He stood over him, white eyes smiling, laughing at the miner's puny attempts to survive.
"Give up mortal. You've already lost. This world is MINE."
"I... won't... I can't....." the miner struggled.
"You're wasting your breath mortal. You were never going to win."
"No... I wasn't...."
"The plan was to bring you down with me"
Herobrine screamed as the miner pulled out another pickaxe and plunged it into his heart. The two tumbled into the blackness, as the bedrock sealed up over them, falling down, down, down....
Steve bolted awake and through his fist into the nearest object, a tree, which tumbled to the ground in a pile of wood blocks and decaying leaves.
"What.... the.... hell..." he muttered
He had died. But then how was he here? Nothing made sense at the moment. However, he did know he had to make shelter. Fast. That much he remembered.
He slammed his fists into the wood of many other trees, toppling them down and collecting the logs. Before long he had a small shack, and he even managed to throw together a set of crude wooden tools, tied together with tree bark and grass. The sun was still high in the sky, so he went out to take a look around his surroundings. He didn't know how he was here, or why, or what his purpose was, but he did know one thing.
He had to mine. To craft.
He had to survive.
The forest was nice, a mix of oak and birch. He clambered up onto a tree, spotted a range of mountains to the north, and what looked like open plains further south. To the east, where he awoke, there was a vast ocean. It was nice on this tree, the blocky leaves were warm and soft, and miraculously supported his weight. He could just take a nap...
Steve bolted awake. How long had he been asleep?! It was well past nightfall, and his tools were back in the house.
"Don't move, Minecraftian, if you know what's good for you. I've been waiting a long time for this moment, Steve" said Lord Cavalrae, chuckling as two zombies grabbed Steve and thrust him to the ground.
Chapter 2: Imprisoned
"So, here we are, imprisoned in a mountain fortress with no hope of escape, guarded by more mobs then I can count. This is a great situation we've gotten ourselves into, huh Cubie?"
He oinked in agreement.
After being grabbed by the hostile green corpses, I was thrust into a prison cart, along with a saddled pig. He seemed to recognize me, and I nicknamed him Cubie. I wasn't sure why, it just felt like the right name.
I wasn't sure where we were, the cart didn't have windows, and I had been knocked out when we stopped, and woke up in this cage. We were suspended in a prison that looked like it was made of stone and iron, hanging suspended over a pit of lava. A bone and golden throne sat before us, where the skeleton, referred to by the other mobs as Lord Cavalrae sat. I wasn't sure what he was waiting for, but he clearly seemed to know me, and definitely hated me, but for reasons I wasn't quite sure of. He also had a giant, horrific, hissing arachnid, which seemed to go by the name of Sting, which, as I heard whispered by a skeleton to another, was quite ironic, something about a ring, a little man and a sword.
The throne room doors burst open, and four heavily armed skeletons marched in, along with two green, hissing plant-like creatures, that the others referred too as 'Creepers'. It was clear the undead creatures didn't particularly like them, but they didn't want to make that known, it appeared these animals had a notoriously bad temper. They were escorted three men in robes, the one in front, who appeared to be the leader, wore green, while the other two wore a shade of light blue.
"My lord, we found these three asleep in their camp. By the looks of it they were traveling out to the forest where we picked up the Minecraftian"
"Very well, Arkadius, you are dismissed." said the skeletal overlord.
The undead bowed, and one of the creepers hissed under his breath as the mobs marched out of the throne room.
"So, I believe you are the one they call Lord Aegis. Ruler of the Testificate's, if I am correct?"
"You would be correct, if it wasn't for the fact that I reside in one of the last villages still standing. Your forces certainly haven't helped."
"Ahh, but you must understand that the zombies do enjoy the taste of your flesh" he chuckled
"Demon!" one of the blue robed villagers screamed.
Cavalrae casually raised his bow and fired a flaming arrow into the villagers heart. He stumbled backwards into the lava and was gone.
"THOMAS!" the other one screamed.
Sting hissed at his master.
"Yes I suppose, you may take the other one."
The spider leaped on the second village injected him with venom and devouring him within minutes, kicking the skeleton into the fiery inferno.
"You are a monster" Aegis hissed
"I suppose so" he chuckled.
Then the walls exploded.
Chapter 3: Voices
DISCLAIMER: I changed the name of the green robed villager by the name of Lord Aegis to Chief Tarsus, in case there's any confusion.
Stone and dust flew everywhere as four great iron behemoths smashed through the walls, storming into the throne room and cutting down mobs like dirt. Eight villagers, adorned in light blue robes like the earlier two stormed in behind, unsheathing iron swords and diving in to the swarm of mobs. One of them tossed the green robed villager, Chief Tarsus, a pair of swords, shining green, perhaps made of emerald. Cavalrae leaped into the battle atop his arachnid mount, taking down one of the golems, and shooting two of the villagers through the chest. Tarsus ran at me and Cubie's cage, leaping up and slicing the chains, and throwing me an iron sword and helmet. Cubie oinked and I gave him the helmet, then I leaped into the battle.
It was going well for my saviors. Most of the undead were cut down, and Lord Cavalrae was beginning to retreat backwards. I cut down two skeletons and a zombie, and Cubie knocked a creeper into the lava. Cavalrae and two other skeletons, including the one named Arkadius, leaped onto their mounts and leaped out through the hole, retreating at top speed.
Chief Tarsus turned towards me. "Well, I suppose it was good we were captured, we found you anyways."
"What?" I exclaimed. "I have no idea what's going on, I woke up here this morning with no memory, then these mobs captured me."
"I'll explain more on our way back to the village, come, we have a steed for you if your pig is tired." he replied, motioning towards the exit.
Steve didn't hear him. He stumbled backwards and began to collapse. The world began to darken. He could hear a voice shouting "STEVE!" but it was distant and unimportant. He needed to rest, yes, rest...
Everything was dark. He was surrounded by never ending darkness, floating in a void of existence.
A figure appeared. A man who looked like him. But his eyes were glowing white.
"I know what you did, Steve Craftwood. I know who you are, what you are, and why you exist. You are mine. You will suffer, and you will die. Your purpose is to know pain. I will find you. I will hunt you. And you will burn.
Nice, work, i didn't yet read it, but i look forward to, anyway it looks like you work hard on this, anyway i would sugest you, to have a better way to show your book (like a personal site or something like that) and i think you should write a bunch of chapters and then publish them, so people could read it like an actual book.
When the first book is complete I plan to make it available for purchase both as a book and on the Kindle via Amazon
Man Craftwood what happened to you? You just vanished. Where are you? We miss you very much, and want you to come home. We've gotten some great new writers on board since you last posted. And they need the critiquing of a pro like yourself. I can only offer angry rants to Wizmark and scapegoat PointlessDavid.
Minefic misses you,
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This is a really good fan fiction. I like how you referred to The Hobbit in chapter 2. Personally, I prefer to write about my characters playing Dungeons and Enderdragons. Anyway, it's a very good story that hooked me in the first dozen or so words and kept me reading. It has a nice action scene basically right off the bat, which I now regret not doing, interesting characters and some decent details. I'm looking forward to the next chapters. Would you mind if I referred the readers of The Herobrine Chronicles to Hero's Shadow? I think fans of my fanfic would love this.
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Book 1 - Hero's Shadow
Book 2 - Hero's Fall
Book 3 - Hero's Destiny
This is book 1, Hero's Shadow. I hope you all enjoy!
PROLOGUE:
"The forces of the End are still scattered, we don't have much to assist you, Wither" roared an enormous black dragon.
"I understand that Ender, but even two Ender Titan's could help us drive the King's forces out of the Nether!' Wither shouted back
"What about my people? King Sssparklez isss hunting usss like pigsss we can't hold the jungle much longer!" hissed an enormous creeper, pulsing with lightning energy.
"The undead are being slain every day, before long there won't be a single cavern they can't find us!" shouted a skeleton adorned in enchanted diamond armor, his arachnid mount hissing in agreement.
Suddenly the doors blasted open, and all the mobs swung towards the doors, staring on in shock.
"Lord Herobrine" hissed the creeper, bowing, the rest of the mobs following his example.
"You may stand up, Creepthulhu" said the figure, white eyes pulsing with energy, as he walked down the hallway and sat atop an ancient bedrock and obsidian throne, lit aflame with netherrack.
"So, you've finally returned" said Ender.
"Yes. But seeing as I'm back, you know who else is here as well."
"The First Hero" growled Wither.
"Precisely. He's still unconscious, but he'll awaken in a few hours."
"Doesss he remember anything?"
"Nothing."
"And what of his Companion?" growled Ender.
Herobrine chuckled, a dark, booming, echoing laugh. "The little swine might actually remember something. But if you succeed, Cavalrae, he won't be a problem" turning towards the skeleton.
"Of course, my lord." he said, leaping off his skeletal throne and onto his Spider, riding out of the throne room.
"You are all dismissed."
Creepthulhu followed Cavalrae out the door. Ender and Wither teleported in a blast of purple and black particles respectively.
Herobrine waved his hand, and an image appeared. A man, still unconsious, lying on a beach as the sun rose overhead.
"Enjoy your new beginning while you can, Steve."
Chapter 1: A New Beginning
But it wasn't peaceful.
He struggled to hold onto his pickaxe. He could feel it slipping, he could hear the long earshattering screech of the pickaxe slowly slicing through the bedrock. He stood over him, white eyes smiling, laughing at the miner's puny attempts to survive.
"Give up mortal. You've already lost. This world is MINE."
"I... won't... I can't....." the miner struggled.
"You're wasting your breath mortal. You were never going to win."
"No... I wasn't...."
"The plan was to bring you down with me"
Herobrine screamed as the miner pulled out another pickaxe and plunged it into his heart. The two tumbled into the blackness, as the bedrock sealed up over them, falling down, down, down....
Steve bolted awake and through his fist into the nearest object, a tree, which tumbled to the ground in a pile of wood blocks and decaying leaves.
"What.... the.... hell..." he muttered
He had died. But then how was he here? Nothing made sense at the moment. However, he did know he had to make shelter. Fast. That much he remembered.
He slammed his fists into the wood of many other trees, toppling them down and collecting the logs. Before long he had a small shack, and he even managed to throw together a set of crude wooden tools, tied together with tree bark and grass. The sun was still high in the sky, so he went out to take a look around his surroundings. He didn't know how he was here, or why, or what his purpose was, but he did know one thing.
He had to mine. To craft.
He had to survive.
The forest was nice, a mix of oak and birch. He clambered up onto a tree, spotted a range of mountains to the north, and what looked like open plains further south. To the east, where he awoke, there was a vast ocean. It was nice on this tree, the blocky leaves were warm and soft, and miraculously supported his weight. He could just take a nap...
Steve bolted awake. How long had he been asleep?! It was well past nightfall, and his tools were back in the house.
"Don't move, Minecraftian, if you know what's good for you. I've been waiting a long time for this moment, Steve" said Lord Cavalrae, chuckling as two zombies grabbed Steve and thrust him to the ground.
Chapter 2: Imprisoned
"So, here we are, imprisoned in a mountain fortress with no hope of escape, guarded by more mobs then I can count. This is a great situation we've gotten ourselves into, huh Cubie?"
He oinked in agreement.
After being grabbed by the hostile green corpses, I was thrust into a prison cart, along with a saddled pig. He seemed to recognize me, and I nicknamed him Cubie. I wasn't sure why, it just felt like the right name.
I wasn't sure where we were, the cart didn't have windows, and I had been knocked out when we stopped, and woke up in this cage. We were suspended in a prison that looked like it was made of stone and iron, hanging suspended over a pit of lava. A bone and golden throne sat before us, where the skeleton, referred to by the other mobs as Lord Cavalrae sat. I wasn't sure what he was waiting for, but he clearly seemed to know me, and definitely hated me, but for reasons I wasn't quite sure of. He also had a giant, horrific, hissing arachnid, which seemed to go by the name of Sting, which, as I heard whispered by a skeleton to another, was quite ironic, something about a ring, a little man and a sword.
The throne room doors burst open, and four heavily armed skeletons marched in, along with two green, hissing plant-like creatures, that the others referred too as 'Creepers'. It was clear the undead creatures didn't particularly like them, but they didn't want to make that known, it appeared these animals had a notoriously bad temper. They were escorted three men in robes, the one in front, who appeared to be the leader, wore green, while the other two wore a shade of light blue.
"My lord, we found these three asleep in their camp. By the looks of it they were traveling out to the forest where we picked up the Minecraftian"
"Very well, Arkadius, you are dismissed." said the skeletal overlord.
The undead bowed, and one of the creepers hissed under his breath as the mobs marched out of the throne room.
"So, I believe you are the one they call Lord Aegis. Ruler of the Testificate's, if I am correct?"
"You would be correct, if it wasn't for the fact that I reside in one of the last villages still standing. Your forces certainly haven't helped."
"Ahh, but you must understand that the zombies do enjoy the taste of your flesh" he chuckled
"Demon!" one of the blue robed villagers screamed.
Cavalrae casually raised his bow and fired a flaming arrow into the villagers heart. He stumbled backwards into the lava and was gone.
"THOMAS!" the other one screamed.
Sting hissed at his master.
"Yes I suppose, you may take the other one."
The spider leaped on the second village injected him with venom and devouring him within minutes, kicking the skeleton into the fiery inferno.
"You are a monster" Aegis hissed
"I suppose so" he chuckled.
Then the walls exploded.
Chapter 3: Voices
Stone and dust flew everywhere as four great iron behemoths smashed through the walls, storming into the throne room and cutting down mobs like dirt. Eight villagers, adorned in light blue robes like the earlier two stormed in behind, unsheathing iron swords and diving in to the swarm of mobs. One of them tossed the green robed villager, Chief Tarsus, a pair of swords, shining green, perhaps made of emerald. Cavalrae leaped into the battle atop his arachnid mount, taking down one of the golems, and shooting two of the villagers through the chest. Tarsus ran at me and Cubie's cage, leaping up and slicing the chains, and throwing me an iron sword and helmet. Cubie oinked and I gave him the helmet, then I leaped into the battle.
It was going well for my saviors. Most of the undead were cut down, and Lord Cavalrae was beginning to retreat backwards. I cut down two skeletons and a zombie, and Cubie knocked a creeper into the lava. Cavalrae and two other skeletons, including the one named Arkadius, leaped onto their mounts and leaped out through the hole, retreating at top speed.
Chief Tarsus turned towards me. "Well, I suppose it was good we were captured, we found you anyways."
"What?" I exclaimed. "I have no idea what's going on, I woke up here this morning with no memory, then these mobs captured me."
"I'll explain more on our way back to the village, come, we have a steed for you if your pig is tired." he replied, motioning towards the exit.
Steve didn't hear him. He stumbled backwards and began to collapse. The world began to darken. He could hear a voice shouting "STEVE!" but it was distant and unimportant. He needed to rest, yes, rest...
Everything was dark. He was surrounded by never ending darkness, floating in a void of existence.
A figure appeared. A man who looked like him. But his eyes were glowing white.
"I know what you did, Steve Craftwood. I know who you are, what you are, and why you exist. You are mine. You will suffer, and you will die. Your purpose is to know pain. I will find you. I will hunt you. And you will burn.
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Thanks
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I love this! When will chapter 2 be ready? And about how daily do you make new chapters?
Yeah probably, I'll get an application format set up
About every week or two if possible
Thanks! I've got plans for this story
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Where can I read the original?
Thanks! Here's the link:
http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/1777334-the-steve-chronicles-book-1-survival-chapter-4-released-taking-character-applications-new-chapter-every-week/
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When the first book is complete I plan to make it available for purchase both as a book and on the Kindle via Amazon
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Minefic misses you,
K
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This is a really good fan fiction. I like how you referred to The Hobbit in chapter 2. Personally, I prefer to write about my characters playing Dungeons and Enderdragons. Anyway, it's a very good story that hooked me in the first dozen or so words and kept me reading. It has a nice action scene basically right off the bat, which I now regret not doing, interesting characters and some decent details. I'm looking forward to the next chapters. Would you mind if I referred the readers of The Herobrine Chronicles to Hero's Shadow? I think fans of my fanfic would love this.
I
writewrote stuff! The Convergence I worked on briefly, but no longer. You should check it out!Hey Craftwood, check your PMs.
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Mate, find your own thread! This belongs to another!
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Obligatory resurrection. I have NOT abandoned this, in fact 2 more chapters have been written and posted elsewhere since Chapter 3, and I will be posting them here soon.
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