I just realized how great these other stories are. Can I edit my description to (VTTP : Enderworld) :
When the lives of many and the world at large are being threatened by a growing power, The End might be nearer than you think. Celeste, a completely ordinary Minecraftian is heading for something more than the mind can behold. The world is slowly being devoured by the his minions and slowly making their way to conquer the Overworld and The Aether. As an unexpected destined heroine, Celeste must stop him and his army from claiming the multiple dimensions of Minecraftia and leaking out into the Out-Verse.
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Title (link required): To Kill An Enderdragon Author (link optional): Ikerot Description: The king has put up a reward: Kill the Enderdragon and retrieve the Ender egg. Whoever brings it will be rewarded with whatever they want. Enter Maximus, a boy who lives up in the mountain near the kingdom. He doesn't care about the reward, especially when it is just a myth. The only problem is that Leah, the nomadic alchemist, has her eyes on that egg. Unfortunately, Maximus owes a massive debt to Leah and he is forced to kill the Enderdragon. Progress (In Progress, Complete, or On Hold): In Progress
hello I've read your writing help guide and it's very helpful thanks a lot, I intend to write a short story soon about steve and his quest to beat the enderdragon but I need some help, do you have any tips for beginners? thank you
hello I've read your writing help guide and it's very helpful thanks a lot, I intend to write a short story soon about steve and his quest to beat the enderdragon but I need some help, do you have any tips for beginners? thank you
Well, I'd suggest applying grammar, capitalization, spelling and all that stuff into your normal messages. This way, you'd appear professional and mature while also making writing more comfortable to do. That's my way, I guess, so I hope that'd be useful. The other guys here have far more enthusiasm and energy as well as experience in writing stuff. Please do wait for one of them to answer you. If I am correct, they'd be a lot of them coming your way.
Here comes the first: There are a lot of Stories starring Steve killing the Enderdragon, and while that is not a bad thing to write about, this topic has been milked over and over. I suggest adding something more than just killing the Enderdragon to the story. You can write about it but do it differently than others. I suggest reading other fanfictions first too (complete ones). That way you can see how people write them.
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Thank you both for your replies. I'm lazy when writing on the internet but I will try to improve that.
And yes I know it's not an original idea, but I like it and I will try to make something different with it.
I'm not too confident about this Steve vs. the Enderdragon thing, especially if you plan to include Notch. But, if you want to write about that conflict, go ahead. I'm not stopping you.
Woah, I must be really out of the trend because I don't remember a whole bunch of people writing about killing the enderdragon when I started writing mine xD
Oh, well. At least I don't have Steve :L I don't get why people gotta include him as the MC. It's kind of lame.
thank you for the tips, I know many people use steve as the main character but I want to do something different, like onceinalongtme said maybe a plot twist, but im not very good with these things so I will just give it a try, and again thanks for all the support
Hello I have a question, I'm writing a story as you can see here in the literature section, it's short but I have more chapters to add and I'd like some tips, should I write it in short or long chapters? and should I have more characters or not? thank you
Hello I have a question, I'm writing a story as you can see here in the literature section, it's short but I have more chapters to add and I'd like some tips, should I write it in short or long chapters? and should I have more characters or not? thank you
Here's my silly ideas about helping you with that. I'm not too talented with writing. When another guy gives you tips, focus on that a bit more.
Chapter Length:
A chapter is basically an event or a something in your story. Let's give an entirely fiction Chapter One as an example. If I were to write Chap. One, I'd be focusing on the introductions and the other stuff, as well as the setting etc. etc. That said, a chapter's length is equal to how your story will go.
If you will be making a big story about Steve roaming the desert with his demon camel to find the temple of Long-Nosed Snotjobs and find the Enerdragon who kidnapped your sister which you have an incestuous relationship but turned out she was the Dragon's daughter and not your sister, meaning she's legit and in the end get married or die together...
Well, then go ahead and make a large chapter. if it's just a simple short story, then go ahead and get crazy with the chapters. This is the Literature Subforum, not a frickin' publishing company. Feel free to experiment and make weird test runs on ideas to see if they work or not.
Also try to make each chapter TL;DRable. That means you can sum up your story in a few sentences. That way, the next chapter will make use of the juicy plot you've driven on the previous one, and you will have a nice organized little work on art in your hands.
Characters:
The amount of characters is entirely up to you. If you'd want/need/crave/die for my personal opinion, I'd say I like to have one or three main characters and a dozen supporting characters with as much personality and character as the main ones. This makes your story more realistic and have more characters people can relate to. It also is a nice challenge to think of multiple personalities.
But then again, it's your story and it's your God-given right to mess with how your story's gonna be.
Other:
Now just a little tip. Try to write a lot of content before posting or keep it short and constant. The two ways will ensure you'll be a constant fixture on the front page. The "slow and steady" tactic works for long stories while the "fast and furious" one is for them shorts.
@Sc1020
Feel free to put this thing into the Writing Help section.
If you will be making a big story about Steve roaming the desert with his demon camel to find the temple of Long-Nosed Snotjobs and find the Enerdragon who kidnapped your sister which you have an incestuous relationship but turned out she was the Dragon's daughter and not your sister, meaning she's legit and in the end get married or die together...
I know you meant this to be a really comical example but oddly it seems loosely reminiscent of the actual plot to my story . . . Not sure how I feel about that.
Feel free to leave your comments. Or criticisms, I suppose, if they're constructive. Almost anything really, unless it's an outright threat. In that case I'd prefer you put it in a private message.
I know you meant this to be a really comical example but oddly it seems loosely reminiscent of the actual plot to my story . . . Not sure how I feel about that.
Hmm.. I didn't meant for it to be like that. You should feel amused right now since if it's similar to your story, it only proves that great minds think alike :D.
Hmm.. I didn't meant for it to be like that. You should feel amused right now since if it's similar to your story, it only proves that great minds think alike .
Oh I know. I definitely am amused. I didn't mean to say I felt insulted or anything, because the similarity is funny. It just struck me as odd. I didn't want to imply that I think you based it off my story, as most of the similarities haven't actually been in the story yet. I know you tried to come up with the most ridiculous story line possible, so it was even funnier when I saw plot points vaguely reminiscent of those from my own story (the incest, for example). I suppose I should take this as confirmation of our mutual love of bizarre plots in stories.
Feel free to leave your comments. Or criticisms, I suppose, if they're constructive. Almost anything really, unless it's an outright threat. In that case I'd prefer you put it in a private message.
Oh I know. I definitely am amused. I didn't mean to say I felt insulted or anything, because the similarity is funny. It just struck me as odd. I didn't want to imply that I think you based it off my story, as most of the similarities haven't actually been in the story yet. I know you tried to come up with the most ridiculous story line possible, so it was even funnier when I saw plot points vaguely reminiscent of those from my own story (the incest, for example). I suppose I should take this as confirmation of our mutual love of bizarre plots in stories.
We're destined for great things, then.
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When the lives of many and the world at large are being threatened by a growing power, The End might be nearer than you think. Celeste, a completely ordinary Minecraftian is heading for something more than the mind can behold. The world is slowly being devoured by the his minions and slowly making their way to conquer the Overworld and The Aether. As an unexpected destined heroine, Celeste must stop him and his army from claiming the multiple dimensions of Minecraftia and leaking out into the Out-Verse.
Thanks.
Title (link required): To Kill An Enderdragon
Author (link optional): Ikerot
Description: The king has put up a reward: Kill the Enderdragon and retrieve the Ender egg. Whoever brings it will be rewarded with whatever they want. Enter Maximus, a boy who lives up in the mountain near the kingdom. He doesn't care about the reward, especially when it is just a myth. The only problem is that Leah, the nomadic alchemist, has her eyes on that egg. Unfortunately, Maximus owes a massive debt to Leah and he is forced to kill the Enderdragon.
Progress (In Progress, Complete, or On Hold): In Progress
Well, I'd suggest applying grammar, capitalization, spelling and all that stuff into your normal messages. This way, you'd appear professional and mature while also making writing more comfortable to do. That's my way, I guess, so I hope that'd be useful. The other guys here have far more enthusiasm and energy as well as experience in writing stuff. Please do wait for one of them to answer you. If I am correct, they'd be a lot of them coming your way.
Enjoy.
TT2000, you are genius.
And yes I know it's not an original idea, but I like it and I will try to make something different with it.
Seems like I have some...
Oh, well. At least I don't have Steve :L I don't get why people gotta include him as the MC. It's kind of lame.
Seems like I have some...
Indeed. I don't see the quality of having Steve as your MC, he sounds really boring :\
Seems like I have some...
Seems like I have some...
Here's my silly ideas about helping you with that. I'm not too talented with writing. When another guy gives you tips, focus on that a bit more.
Chapter Length:
A chapter is basically an event or a something in your story. Let's give an entirely fiction Chapter One as an example. If I were to write Chap. One, I'd be focusing on the introductions and the other stuff, as well as the setting etc. etc. That said, a chapter's length is equal to how your story will go.
If you will be making a big story about Steve roaming the desert with his demon camel to find the temple of Long-Nosed Snotjobs and find the Enerdragon who kidnapped your sister which you have an incestuous relationship but turned out she was the Dragon's daughter and not your sister, meaning she's legit and in the end get married or die together...
Well, then go ahead and make a large chapter. if it's just a simple short story, then go ahead and get crazy with the chapters. This is the Literature Subforum, not a frickin' publishing company. Feel free to experiment and make weird test runs on ideas to see if they work or not.
Also try to make each chapter TL;DRable. That means you can sum up your story in a few sentences. That way, the next chapter will make use of the juicy plot you've driven on the previous one, and you will have a nice organized little work on art in your hands.
Characters:
The amount of characters is entirely up to you. If you'd want/need/crave/die for my personal opinion, I'd say I like to have one or three main characters and a dozen supporting characters with as much personality and character as the main ones. This makes your story more realistic and have more characters people can relate to. It also is a nice challenge to think of multiple personalities.
But then again, it's your story and it's your God-given right to mess with how your story's gonna be.
Other:
Now just a little tip. Try to write a lot of content before posting or keep it short and constant. The two ways will ensure you'll be a constant fixture on the front page. The "slow and steady" tactic works for long stories while the "fast and furious" one is for them shorts.
@Sc1020
Feel free to put this thing into the Writing Help section.
I know you meant this to be a really comical example but oddly it seems loosely reminiscent of the actual plot to my story . . . Not sure how I feel about that.
Hmm.. I didn't meant for it to be like that. You should feel amused right now since if it's similar to your story, it only proves that great minds think alike :D.
Oh I know. I definitely am amused. I didn't mean to say I felt insulted or anything, because the similarity is funny.
We're destined for great things, then.