We're watching you always.
You call us monsters,
but why?
What makes us different from you?
Is it our explosive heart?
Or our eight legs?
Is it the lack of skin?
Or the color of skin?
Do you suppose.....
That it is the length of our limbs?
You came to us from above, we believed you were a blessing.... We were wrong.
We are the guardians, we protect.
You have tainted our lands.
You have destroyed our lives.
You kill, you steal, you burn.
And yet, we are the monsters.
But why?
Is it the time we come out?
Is it the way we speak?
Do you fear us?
You should, as you have made an enemy out of yourself.
I watch you, and I know.
Stop hiding.
The ruler knows.
He is coming.
For you.
But why?
I hope you know why.
If you don't, I would be concerned.
We thought you a blessing.
You were anything but.
You killed what we have created, and suddenly, we are the killers.
But why?
Do you want a trial?
We have given you a trial.
We have been giving you a trial since you shed the first drop of blood.
We kill you, but you return.
But why?
It is over, you cannot hide any longer.
Won't you come out? Don't be afraid, we won't hurt you.
Or will we?
But why?
You came into our world, thought a blessing.
You were anything but.
Do you realize? Do you realize?
Do you realize what you have done to us?
We live in the ocean,
With fear of the land.
The light glowing mountain,
With scare of the death,
And truth to the monster,
That Lives in us,
Drowns the fellows that follow us down,
Squids.
That is what we areThis would actually be fun...Bats:
We fly with the night,
And creature a silk.
With Black wings and squeaks,
We flap with the wind,
And weather so dry,
Not house in sight,
No player to follow we scare such a fly,
A Dragon would scare us.
A batThis shall be a thread (request)
That is an amazing poem! It is a oerfect perspective point, because now you know how it feels to be a mob, and at the start when you mentioned the parts of the mobs, it's using "show not tell" so you can think, what mob is that? Oh its an enderman! Or what mob is that? A creeper! Great job! I'm very impressed!
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Curse PremiumYou call us monsters,
but why?
What makes us different from you?
Is it our explosive heart?
Or our eight legs?
Is it the lack of skin?
Or the color of skin?
Do you suppose.....
That it is the length of our limbs?
You came to us from above, we believed you were a blessing....
We were wrong.
We are the guardians, we protect.
You have tainted our lands.
You have destroyed our lives.
You kill, you steal, you burn.
And yet, we are the monsters.
But why?
Is it the time we come out?
Is it the way we speak?
Do you fear us?
You should, as you have made an enemy out of yourself.
I watch you, and I know.
Stop hiding.
The ruler knows.
He is coming.
For you.
But why?
I hope you know why.
If you don't, I would be concerned.
We thought you a blessing.
You were anything but.
You killed what we have created, and suddenly, we are the killers.
But why?
Do you want a trial?
We have given you a trial.
We have been giving you a trial since you shed the first drop of blood.
We kill you, but you return.
But why?
It is over, you cannot hide any longer.
Won't you come out? Don't be afraid, we won't hurt you.
Or will we?
But why?
You came into our world, thought a blessing.
You were anything but.
Do you realize? Do you realize?
Do you realize what you have done to us?
We gave you a chance, good bye.
GAME OVER.
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Curse PremiumThanks for the feedback! I like making poems about Minecraft, a darker side to Minecraft.
COme join the dark side....
and get a free cookie!
But still, great poem!
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Curse PremiumThanks. After re-reading it, it sort of makes me depressed XD.
We live in the ocean,
With fear of the land.
The light glowing mountain,
With scare of the death,
And truth to the monster,
That Lives in us,
Drowns the fellows that follow us down,
Squids.
That is what we areThis would actually be fun...Bats:
We fly with the night,
And creature a silk.
With Black wings and squeaks,
We flap with the wind,
And weather so dry,
Not house in sight,
No player to follow we scare such a fly,
A Dragon would scare us.
A batThis shall be a thread (request)
That is an amazing poem! It is a oerfect perspective point, because now you know how it feels to be a mob, and at the start when you mentioned the parts of the mobs, it's using "show not tell" so you can think, what mob is that? Oh its an enderman! Or what mob is that? A creeper! Great job! I'm very impressed!
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