Hey, yeah, not bad! I like the poem. Oddly enough, it reminded me of the end poem. Probably because of energy, the universe, and difficulty without love.
As well, I can't help but think of 3-dog from Fallout 3 when you say "That is all for now, chiiiiiildren"
Well... Song poem (soem? It is not a ballad...)
We're alone but side by side,
All this darkness that we hide.
We had to see
We had to see,
Releasing all our energy.
Woah wo, oh.
Woah wo, oh.
We had to see;
Fall into space with you,
All these things I always knew,
We had to see
We had to see,
Releasing all my energy.
I can see our universe.
Filled with ideas about to burst.
I thought we could not let it pass,
But we ran by far too fast.
We had to see,
We had to see...
Releasing all our energy.
(Woah) find yourself in this place.
It's hard to do without love.
Find ourselves in our place,
Find ourselves in this place.
That is all for now, chiiiiiildren!
Yeah. Creepy cobwebs grandma Oncie time. If that makes no sense, don't worry. You'll never get it. XD
Anyways, tell me what you think.
I just wrote another soem if ye'all wanna hear it. Well, read it.
OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
As well, I can't help but think of 3-dog from Fallout 3 when you say "That is all for now, chiiiiiildren"
https://discord.gg/kGJcpsR
OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."
So I wrote this to make sense without music as well as with music.
OnceInALongTime: "You confuse me, Mage. Amazability should be a word so I could describe your words."